Ordinary People: the Story of a Layman Cultivating Immortality

Let's read Chapter 71 first, can you accept it

I probably haven't read the original work. Many details don't match up.

I don't think it's necessary to have a whole system. You can just eat people and spiritual stones in this dimension and add the innate Five Elements Immortality Cultivation Technique. There is no need to ding ding ding, otherwise you will always think that it is a Taoist priest who will give you salvation.

140,000 Words per book friend, probably the author himself. The book friend circle is full of scoldings. The book friends don't listen to their opinions and are stubborn. It seems that the author is not only bad at writing books, hahahahahaha

If you want to press the schedule, don't write a genius protagonist; if you want to write a genius, don't write a bunch of nonsense that will slow down the progress.

Find a class, or read a novel for a few years before writing.

Tian Linggen will go to the sect. Why not go to the Qixuan Sect to sort out his thoughts?

The protagonist is Han Li's dog. He doesn't dare to do this, he doesn't dare to do that, he doesn't dare to take the initiative to grab resources first. He clearly knows that the plot must be developed according to the original work, and then pick up the rest.

The author is obviously talking nonsense. Even if Tianlinggen doesn't take any elixirs, it will be established within ten years at the earliest. If you take the medicine, it will be normal to build the foundation in 3-5 years. People's foundation building needs polishing and precipitation, and other people's elixirs need to be formed even in the false elixir stage. It takes at least 20 to 30 years to prepare, and Tianlinggen does not need it. All the way to the formation of pills, Tianlinggen has no bottleneck at all. The speed of children's cultivation is the most terrifying thing about Tianlinggen. If you take medicine, the skills are also awesome. It is not unusual for Tianlinggen to form pills in more than 30 years. During the Qi training period, you do so much drama. Do you understand what Tianlinggen is? ? ? ?

As soon as I saw it, I knew that the author was taken over by Han Li, the reincarnation of Daluo. Then she was arranged to be a nanny and take care of Han Li personally. (ᐡ⦁⩊⦁⸝⸝ᐡ )₊୭

What kind of waste does this person have? Not only Tianlinggen and Time Farm, but also a system! Under these conditions, even a dog with a piece of cake on a futon can become an immortal.

The author is so mean-spirited, and there are problems with what you wrote, and I still don't appreciate it when I bring it up to you. What the hell is that?

When I saw the introduction, I didn't even want to read it 😐

Nothing to say

It's a pity that Qidian doesn't have a blacklist function. It's really going to be poisoned to death. I'm afraid that after time travel, I don't dare to change any of the plot.

There are so many bad comments from so many people, so just give up without even reading them.

Are there no women in the world of cultivating immortals? We have to find a mortal who cannot cultivate.

If there is a system, why not just ask the system to get a spiritual root for Mo Caihuan? Since he didn't accept her again, the protagonist is still very entangled, cheating and not happy 😰

The author didn't pay attention to the mortals and wrote here. Others in Mo Mansion went there and were still writing nonsense.

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, it is sent directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

While talking about the need to be forewarned, he was messing around and gave Han Li detailed information about Mo Jiao, saying that even if Nangong Wan inspired the props, he would do it the same way he dealt with Senior Sister Chen... Laughing to death

There are many chapters in the secular plot, run quickly

The common people cultivate immortality, where have the common people gone?

Ignore them, I can appreciate every paragraph you write. I have collected it and sent tickets. I will follow it slowly.

There is something wrong with me. I don't practice practicing all kinds of jumping up and down.

At the beginning, there was a golden finger, and even the exercises were included. Now several books are like this. It's inexplicable. It was originally a very interesting way to find exercises to practice, but now it's like this.

What you wrote is about mortals cultivating immortality, not about useless people cultivating immortality.

One chapter of suicide is awesome.

Mo Juren had 5 wives and 3 daughters, leaving 1 wife and 1 daughter, the others were eaten