Journey to the West: Starting from Becoming a Disciple with a Monkey

You actually wrote that you were going to become a disciple. The result is almost 30. You don't even have to enter the door

I can see that the author has some writing skills in the novel, but not much. The story is also mixed here and there. The main line is not clear. More importantly, it is frustrating to read. There are some conflicts that are only established. Overall, it is readable, but not recommended. It is watery.

The pace of the story is okay and I can read it, but the outline feels too confusing now. What is the point of entering the Tao in Journey to the West? The sea of ​​knowledge opens up the sky? Too confusing

Don't explain yourself. I can tell just by looking at the chapter names that your rhythm problem is not as big as usual.

This was written so many years ago. What kind of book on fire has it written like this?

The protagonist is not allowed by heaven and cannot enter the gate of immortality, but the world is only here to make things difficult for the protagonist. The pace of the plot is slow, the content is well written in my opinion, and the plot logic is not too wrong. As for some readers saying that there are many old ways of writing "Forsaken by Heaven", I remember that a book that worshiped the ancestor Subhuti also used this setting, and there was no TJ. It will be no problem to write it later. The main reason is to hope that the author can finish the current plot as soon as possible, otherwise there may be fewer people left. Of course, the main reason is that I want to watch it. (Slapping the table) More! Why isn't Grandma's one updated (Pangolin Sword)?

It doesn't look good, and the pace is slow and doesn't make people want to follow it.

What did the author write? ? The more I read, the less I understand. The author should not write about going back to bed and accompanying his mother-in-law to become an artist

Show off your writing style and make a fuss!

Even in chapter 70, you still don't know a thing, so you're here to get angry? The monkey is almost crazy and hasn't learned anything yet

After reading Chapter 20, the pace is a bit slow. I guess there is little income. I don't know if the author has the motivation to finish it.

Traveling to the Tang Dynasty, you still have family matters, what else do you want to ask for from an immortal? What is your way? To deny the human self and pursue delusions is to be blind.

Average, inexplicable plot

It's just that in recent chapters, in order to promote the protagonist's development, the plot is a bit stiff. If you think of a better way, you can go to the next level! !

But it's so thoughtful. To be precise, this book does not follow the common rhythm of existing novels. There is no clear structure for the main line and branches, and it does not focus on how the protagonist achieves his goals. What the author wants to describe is not the success of the protagonist, but to use the protagonist as a carrier to reflect the difficulty of seeking Taoism, the pain of cultivating immortality, the impermanence of the world, the dangers of the world, etc. In general, what the author fills in from the goal to achievement is not the protagonist's progress, acquisition, and the clear process of how to achieve it, but uses these feelings to fill the plot. Therefore, it is impossible to read the protagonist to get a sense of gain, or to experience a sense of progress all the time, which is impossible. Strictly speaking, the reading experience is like the magazine serial novels written by some competent authors in some high-quality serial novel magazines when I was in junior high and high school, and they are even older than that. It can be confirmed that the author has his own literary point of view, but the problem is that it may not be so "contemporary" with the current common expression methods. And the author's own writing power may not be enough to support his literary point of view. It is difficult for me to judge the future performance of this book, because the reading experience is really bad, and the rhythm of the plot cannot bring direct happiness to readers at all. However, the material of the novel is Journey to the West. Among this group of fan readers, some people really like authors with style. And this author is indeed different from the mainstream. Although he is not sophisticated enough, he does have a distinctive style, so he may really attract many fans. In short, it is very strange. From the reading experience to the performance prediction, this book gave me a strange feeling that I was at a loss to judge and difficult to accept. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will become deeper and deeper, his level will become higher and higher, his stories will become more exciting, and his achievements will get better and better.

If you know anything, please tell me. Thank you.

When did I wear it, why didn't I know 😰

You take everything for granted, you don't use your brain when writing a book, and you go to apprentice with Brother Monkey. Who do you think you are? In the vast East China Sea, if Brother Monkey hadn't been protected by someone, he would have been eaten up by demons long ago. Even if you reach Fangcun Mountain, Bodhi will accept you.