Journey to the West: the Immortal Clan Starts Feeding Monkeys at Five Elements Mountain

The biggest problem is that the only one who is really lucky is the boss. If the monkey knows how to fight, it is another question whether he can teach it. The boss, a resale commodity, knows how to use it. It is another question whether he can teach it. The protagonist, second child, daughter, and wife are all quite inexplicable. They can become a head above others by using some scraps of soup. The rich and powerful families that have been inherited are supposed to be powerful, but in fact they don't seem to be particularly outstanding. It seems that the protagonist's family are all hormone people. Just one bite of grass can be worth ten pounds of meat. The effect of the scraps is only a sliver lower than what everyone pours out from small resources. This is considered a trick played by time travellers. Everything is ordinary but everything is extraordinary. People are extraordinary, and their bodies are even more extraordinary, so it is considered a fish-explosion farming. But the protagonist himself does not know it, but the protagonist is a smart person. Why does he not know? It is probably because the author made him unaware and blinded, so his skills are still not enough, and the plot will be mediocre in the future.

What should I say? The protagonist's strengths should not be highlighted. How to seek immortality in the future? It is good to write daily details easily. However, such a layout in the early stage makes readers easily tired. The plug-in does not highlight the protagonist's strengths and is just a partial group portrait, but the details are inferior. Differentiation is very important, whether it is a worldly pursuit of immortality or a brainless novel. This is very important.

At least half of the protagonists yearn for a life that is leisurely and stable. Even if there are no monkeys, it is already a life with a strong sense of happiness in the world of mortals. The disadvantages have been written about by others.

You can read this book with confidence, the author is very good at writing immortality articles. Because the author himself is immortal. The evidence is that the author has never died once since he was born.

🙂 It is better than the family next door to cultivate immortality. That guy has degenerated into an old indigenous farmer who thinks about digging food from the soil in exchange for money all day long, and has no motivation to practice. What you, the protagonist, say sounds like you are being cautious, but in fact, you are just trying to scare yourself out of nothing. Your family is like ants in the eyes of the two guards in the sky.

Can you get up without a golden finger when traveling to the west? Personally, I feel that the world of Journey to the West is disgusting. Those without heels at the bottom have no chance of rising. Everything depends on cause and effect, past lives and feet. If the protagonist is born at the bottom, can he get up without a golden finger?

The characteristics of the protagonist are too weak. The skills rely on the eldest son to find monkeys, and the resources rely on Liujiazhuang angel investment. There is nothing irreplaceable about the protagonist. At first, I thought the protagonist was the kind of person who is pure and inactive, with a strong mind, and seems to have no obsession with anything. However, judging from his heartfelt unwillingness to let the Liu family enter the back mountain and his subsequent interactions with the Liu and Li families, he has a normal human nature. The advantage of predicting the future is of no use. He said he was afraid that the gods and Buddhas would notice something unusual, but when faced with problems beyond his ability, he still subconsciously waited for his eldest son to find the monkey to solve. Currently, the role of the protagonist is as follows: 1. Farming to support the family, planting medicinal materials in exchange for resources 2. Giving birth to a second generation of protagonists. I don't see anything irreplaceable.

I'm almost 200 chapters in. The protagonist can be said to be just a mortal who knows martial arts. The writing here about mortals is very awkward. It can be said that the cycle of giving birth to children, taking care of children and watching them practice martial arts is quite novel and warm at first. But this is Journey to the West. You only write so much about the realm from mortals to immortal cultivators.

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The protagonist is steady, calm and calm. There are too many descriptions of the protagonist in the whole text😂

Shocked, the protagonist needs to use evil methods to deal with evil spirits, but he doesn't want to get involved, so he goes to his own spiritual chicken that can understand human speech, and then tells it that as long as you perform meritorious deeds, you will be allowed to eat the spiritual fruit first in the future. The chicken also understands and is very motivated. Then we turned around and said that we could never let this chicken come back to our house again. It was evil, and we had to be upright and aboveboard, and we had to draw a clear line with it. It's not Gemen. Since you will never let it come back, why did you add the sentence "I will allow you to eat it first if you make it into a spiritual fruit for your family"? Do capitalists still make excuses before dismissing employees? Where are you being upright and aboveboard? How many times has "monastics don't lie" appear in a Journey to the West? You are deliberately lying to others. Putting it in some spiritual novels will already have a huge impact on your state of mind, okay? What did the author want to express when he wrote this plot?

When I read Chapter 46, it seemed like the heroine didn't say a word. Maybe I missed it. The characters who appeared from the first chapter had so few lines, so they were almost unworthy of being the heroine? A complete robot. It's not the protagonist who is feeding the monkeys, it may be the protagonist's eldest son. Judging from this plot, this book should have at least 1,000 chapters.

Jiang family genealogy chart

There was so much investment and preparation in the Wei State in the early stage, including the imperial physician and the contribution to the treatment of Cao Cao. There is also the epidemic prevention and the early contribution of the Jiang family in Wei. Your family has someone close to the emperor in the capital. For no reason, a prefect comes to bully you. It's okay if the people in the imperial hospital and the capital don't help. Then you rebelled in Tianshui just to let Jiang Wei go to Shu. What are you writing? In the early stage of Wei, you did not allow the help of immortal cultivators. Now that there are immortal cultivators in Shu, the original ending cannot be changed. It's so uncomfortable to write. You are writing a novel, not an essay. Do you think your grades are too high when you write like this? Novels are written for readers. Don't you know how uncomfortable and awkward it is for us to read them like this? .

It is said to be Journey to the West, but in fact there is very little trace of Journey to the West in it.

I don't know why, but now I feel that some of the ways of portraying the protagonist are particularly fake. 1. When others talk to the protagonist, the protagonist has an indifferent setting, and there will be all kinds of hardships in the later period. Why do you say you are indifferent? None of them have the conditions to form this kind of character 2. Describe the protagonist's eyes, nose, corners of mouth, hands, shoulders, inner thoughts, etc. At the beginning. In the later period, there will be a lot of inner drama, such as smiling bitterly when nothing happens, being forced to feel helpless, etc. 3. Give "meaning" to the above two points. "Righteousness", because it's just the beginning, nothing has happened yet. The behavior of these two portrayals is very embarrassing in the first place, and they are talking about themselves and establishing the character. In the later stage, various characters will inevitably praise them. There is a high probability that the character and the behavior are inconsistent. There is a strong sense of disobedience and it is easy for the character to collapse 4. Continue reasoning. The author writes these contents at the beginning, which shows that the author believes that these are the things that can best attract and retain readers. He believes that this kind of "external performance" and "inner heart" can attract readers the most..., Male channel fandom cool article area, you pay attention to this, Then you don't need to think too much about the combat power, the combat system, and the plot. Just expect the plot to be based on conspiracy theories and love and hatred. The most enjoyable ones are plots and harems. The template is too unified. Change the setting and put on female videos or urban novels.

To summarize the content: My son Jiang Ming led my whole family to become immortals

Watch the monkey, watch the monkey, I want to watch the monkey, this copy is off. If Jiang Liang is killed by a knife, Jiang Ming is determined to cultivate his character successfully and go to the underworld to find people (this is a familiar thing), pretend I didn't say it

The characters are not in-depth enough. It seems like I am reading the background story of the NPCs in the game. Everyone in the Jiang family has written a little bit, but it is not focused enough. The group appearance is not like the group appearance, it is vague. After reading it once, it seems that I have not read it. In a way, it is indeed a bit of writing 😂

The author is quite capable, and you can tell from a glance that he is a veteran. The structure of the article is linked to each other, and the writing style is also good. However, after reading it, the plot feels a bit bland. There are basically no big points and small points. The first and middle stages are enough to hook the readers and keep reading. I am relatively patient, but I still skipped reading. There are no obvious poisonous points in the early and middle stages of this book, but the recent plot of the Three Kingdoms is really confusing. Pig's Foot did not dare to directly intervene in the Three Kingdoms' struggle for hegemony, so he indirectly tested it through foreign tribes. As a result, the Northern Expedition of Shu Han failed due to various changes, and Pig's Foot concluded that God's will cannot be violated. But the subsequent plot shows that this is not God's will, but is clearly the result of the intervention of high-level monks. The competition is about who is stronger. Isn't this contradictory? It is better to write directly, which group of sects supports Wei and which group supports Shu. Later, Yang Shen took action. The two sides were obviously not casual cultivators, but there were clearly sects who had placed bets. Secondly, this book depicts the majesty of heaven and the power of the gods. At the same time, the main content is biased towards worldly affairs and worldly affairs. Even if you are a monk, every step of the immortal family relies on clinging and drilling. This is the author's setting, and this book is nothing. However, in this way, the content of this book will inevitably contain a lot of content about changes in world affairs. However, Pig's Foot has come to the conclusion that God's will is irresistible, and it will inevitably be tied up and nothing can be changed. Then three families will return to Jin and five will mess up China. It's okay if the author doesn't write it. Once he writes it, readers will respond, but the author has no choice but to write it. If readers are unhappy, subscriptions will drop. Now there are not many chapters in each chapter, and there are not many comments on the controversial Zhuge Liang plot. What's more, the author of other chapters is a new vest who has been in the same way for a long time. He must be looking forward to good results. You are the most likely to lose your mentality. I am very worried about whether this book can be finished. According to the current plot, it is estimated that there will be about 400 years until the journey to the west begins. Doesn't it mean that 4 million words have to be written before the journey to the west begins? Author, I suggest you consider the issue of synchronization. I am worried that you will become a eunuch before you finish writing, so why can't you speed up the synchronization a little? This will attract readers more. Secondly, there is the issue of pig's feet. What is the specialness of pig's feet? Among the talents, the only things that can be used are clinging and foresight and future foresight. However, the foresight is either due to restraint or because God's will is unavoidable, which greatly reduces the enjoyment, so in the end the whole story is only a small enjoyment. Some people have pointed out that pig's feet do not have golden fingers. In fact, they do. His golden fingers are for gnawing on future generations. This was very clear in the early stage. However, in the later stage, due to inheritance reasons, future generations did not clearly give the skills. The author may have written this to slow down the rhythm. After all, there are 400 years of plot behind it. The plain and simple writing in the early stage attracts readers, but later they will abandon the book due to fatigue and the smelly and long length. So brother author, think about it carefully. When I first read this book, I thought that I would have to start with ten thousand orders, but it turns out that it is still a masterpiece now. Let's give full play to the subjective initiative of pig's feet. A small opening is not an opening.

Mr. Ba Lao from ZZ City, eggs can be stored in rice or bran in a cool place for a month or two. Since ancient times, people have had a saying of going to a big market, but there is no such thing in the village. There is no such thing in the town. And there is straw paper after papermaking Yellow paper is very common, the more expensive ones are rice paper and high-grade ink, and the low-grade ink is also cheap. Have you ever accepted so many people who have no common sense? Also, raising chickens, ducks, and pigs does not require feeding them all grains. Ducks can use duckweed and snails, chickens can find small insects to eat, and pigs can use pig grass, paddy fields, roadside shrimps, grass, chop it, ferment it in a bucket, and then mix it with bran powder and bran skin to feed the pigs. There are still many skills in rural life. Farming is not just about growing rice for one season. You can also grow some vegetables at the door. Although the yield is not as high as modern times, it is enough without paying taxes. Otherwise, how can the servant farmers who work for the landlords survive on just such a small amount of food after paying them.

The first two hundred or so chapters are well written, but the latter are all cheating. The protagonist starts, the son starts. After the son starts, the daughter starts, and after the daughter starts, the grandson starts. The first part says that it will take thirty or fifty years to break through, but it turns out that it takes ten years. The first part says that the older you get, the harder it is to practice. The second part is over a hundred years old, and I can pull you back even if you have some breath left. When it comes to cultivating immortals, I wrote about how difficult it is to practice, but in the back, all my descendants and great-grandchildren practice as if they were drinking water. I said in the front that I didn't lay a good foundation, but in the back I had to spend a hundred or two hundred years polishing my realm, and in the end, I broke through again in a few years. As for the level, that's for the readers, and the protagonist's family is not included.

This book is really good! Returning to the original world of Journey to the West from a mortal perspective, Old Man Jiang's cautious energy and down-to-earth texture are very real, making it easy for people to relate to it. The author started his creation from many introductions in "Journey to the West", which is a very clever idea. It is true that there is no need to reproduce too much of the original content. The impression of Journey to the West that has been whitewashed by universal values ​​​​such as TV series and animations should be quite nonsense to current netizens. I have mixed feelings about the words "Journey to the West" and "Sun Wukong": from the front, they are the quintessence of Chinese culture, with the highest classic status, hiding the spirit of struggle, and carrying the feelings of a generation. But the negative feelings are also very clear. There are inconsistencies in the original work, many loopholes and unreasonableness, and even a kind of sadness when you think about it carefully. I believe that the author and Old Man Jiang can bring different excitement and stories to this Journey to the West time and space, come on!

Is the protagonist a soy saucer in the book?

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It is a good book, but the author should not be too pretentious. Only by living and dying, traveling and staying, can it have flesh and blood, and can it have a sense of immersion. Family Invincible will be boring after reading the beginning.

Haven't watched it for a long time. Has the journey to the West begun?

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