Douluo: Wuhun Garlic Bastard, the Ultimate Poison!

It looks okay so far. There are two divergent ideas: First, the biggest weakness of Pokémon's martial spirit is people. Others can not hit your martial spirit, but let the agility attack system perform a close thrust, and you will be gone. In fact, I think the reasonable way to fight is to hide your position as much as possible, and let the Pokémon fight for you within the maximum distance you can summon. I think this summoning distance can be bound to mental power. But you didn't mention it, but I think this is actually quite important. The second is that the upgrade is too fast. If you originally planned to airspeed in seconds, then I didn't say it, there is an audience for this part. But I think since it's a Pokémon spirit, everyone should be looking forward to interacting with Pokémon and growing together, so I actually think it's a bit of a failure to let Bulbasaur learn 11 moves at once. In addition, there is a small drawback. Gangzi has Tang San and he should look down on your innate level. I really can't think of anything to do with this quarrel other than to pave the way for a slap in the face later. Of course the faults do not hide the advantages, overall it is okay. I must have read another book written by Bi Diao. I read half of that one and it was okay. As for the off-site stuff, I see that your update time and number of chapters are relatively stable. You should be someone who wants to write well. The monthly votes have been cast, and all six recommendation votes are given to you today. Come on.

Although, Bulbasaur should be Garlic Toad, Bastard should be Squirtle, and Bastard Bastard should be.

It's too urgent, and it feels like people in the world you write about are going crazy. No one is normal. And the plot is too rushed.

Judging from the first eight chapters of this book, the writing is better than that one. This book explores the essence of martial arts better. That one feels like it was written by a trainer, which is not bad, but this is a Douluo fan after all.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was really speechless. The main character, a 6-year-old with first-level soul power, traveled hundreds of miles to go to school, but he immediately accepted it because he also had a "smart eye". They also played sacrifice and sent the soul master to the Silent Golden Terrorclaw Bear just to get the first soul ring 🤭. There are really more than one SB soul master who is willing to die. Invincible 🤔

Surviving death every day at the age of seven is a blessing in disguise, and passers-by always admire the eyes of awe and fear. The protagonist talks and salutes like a twenty-seven-year-old. Either the protagonist is dying or a bastard is dying. He studies the ways of life and poison at more than ten levels. The five-thousand-year-old soul beast is so intelligent that it can control humans by pretending to be kept in captivity. A hundred-year-old spirit bone can transform into various weapons, armor, and wings, just like the seventy-two transformations.

Hehehe

I can watch it, but it's too ridiculous.

Not suitable for people in their right mind to watch

I didn't expect the four soul sects to give away their lives. You must know that ordinary soul sects can be the city lord of a small city. The subject matter is novel but the world view is too poor.

Are you serious about serializing 11 books? Can you write it?

It's really interesting

But the people in Ba Douluo Continent are not so normal.

The author is obsessed with word count all the time, which is expensive to watch and uncomfortable to listen to.

Author, emotional drama should be your weakness. To be honest, although it can be clearly seen that your writing skills have improved a lot, I still prefer Bi Diao. What can I say about this one? The plot is sometimes good and sometimes bad.

An eight-year-old child begins to face Cthulhu directly. The plot is a bit ridiculous. At least wait until he is twelve years old. Are you preparing for the ending?

You only finished one of the 14 books, and you also updated several books at the same time. You are going against the grain 😰

Writing Bulbasaur is worse than having a reliable back 😐

The two eyes of ice and fire began to collapse, and the trap opened wider and wider. Cthulhu and the ferocious beasts came out. Caishunzun began to set a target and then counterattack the God Realm. What to see later, he and Dou Yi are not on the same level.

I really don't understand why you like to write about Dou Yi so much. You have published more than a dozen books, all of which are Dou Yi. The idea has always been to follow the original plot but also have my own imaginary plot. Children always fail to recognize where they take it for granted at the beginning. Someone will see your talent at a glance and accept him as a disciple. Then the person who wants to write Douluo himself is very incompetent and can see the talent of your protagonist. This kind of left-brain conflict 🔨 What is needed Sometimes I just let the protagonist think about it and come up with something. The process of thinking is a pure reality warper 😵 Sometimes I am very naive and write about soul masters casually. Please can you think about Dou Yi's era when there were fewer soul masters than in the later movies? Dou Yi is very clear that you can be considered a minor noble when you reach Soul Master, right? Is it really like the situation in the later movies where there are more people and more soul masters and even evil soul masters are flooding in? In this era, the branch of Wuhun Palace even has the responsibility to fight against the beast tide.

Bulbasaur is indeed quite spicy... Why not write it as Arceus... Or Fengyuan Three Fools, which plant pet is the coolest... I have never watched the anime, but I have played the Pocket series of games.

The author should finish it as soon as possible and write about another Pokémon. I think Bangira is good, but Kyogre can't be cracked.