Myriad Worlds: Awakening a Martial Soul in Soul Land

The flaws are significant. Perhaps you should change the location. How could a small city like Notting City possibly have a genius with innate level five soul power, let alone a dozen or twenty new students? You should change it to Heaven Dou City, Star Luo City, or Martial Soul City; that would be more appropriate.

Looking at chapters 173 and 174 in the table of contents is baffling. You are from the heavens, and you have already obtained the cultivation techniques in the mortal world. But you are telling me that you are going to exchange them for Tang San's martial arts!

The conflict with Tang San is so toxic. While other novels use Tang San to annoy the protagonist, this author uses him to annoy both the main character and the readers. It's a classic example of the female-oriented slander trope: the protagonist doesn't explain, and the opposing side forcibly attacks without listening to the explanations of bystanders.

As the title says, you have only level 2 innate soul power and you've cultivated to level 10 in less than a year. Don't spout any nonsense about wild fruits. In the Douluo Continent, even immortal herbs are rarely known. Believing that wild fruits can boost soul power is just plain stupid.

The story is full of internal conflicts between the left and right brains. One moment the protagonist says he won't fawn over the original characters, and the next he's fawning over Li Feiyu. He says he'll keep a low profile, but then he goes to the Soul Master Academy to become the dormitory leader and stand up for his underlings. He then goes to provoke Tang San and flirt with Tang Hao. I don't know what the story is trying to tell.

I really don't understand after reading chapter 41. They learned to be low-key in Mortal Realm, but in Douluo Continent they wanted to provoke Tang Hao. Did they automatically become less intelligent in Douluo Continent?

The protagonist has a particular fondness for fawning over characters from the original work, especially Li Feiyu, to the point of almost being a complete sycophant. He's inexplicably a saint.

He dies from poisoning; the protagonist inexplicably fawns over Li Feiyu, inexplicably reveals his trump card, and knowing Tang Hao is nearby, he still beats Tang San, showing contempt for his own life. The author outwardly acknowledges his mistakes but inwardly shows no remorse. 😰😰😰

Good news: The author will answer questions. Bad news: He won't change anything. He hid for two years, then finally crippled the city lord's son at the academy, humiliated Tang San, and revealed his first ring of the Millennium Ring in front of Tang Hao. When readers asked why he didn't play it safe, the author replied, "Wouldn't that be frustrating?" Since the author said that, he truly deserves to be criticized.

It's already at chapter 250, and it's still only at the Qi Refining stage. Eighty percent of the entire text is Douluo Continent content, and the competition scenes are long and tedious. This book will either be abandoned or have a terrible ending.