Two Worlds: Make the Purple Mansion Immortal Clan Great Again

One problem is that everyone prioritizes family, which is unrealistic. It's fine to prioritize family, but everyone should have their own agenda; complete selflessness is absurd.

It's alright, but the emotions are a bit overdone. I know you're trying to create a family atmosphere, but I didn't come here to read about letters to my wife.

Wen Chao's writing only describes a grotto-heaven, so he skipped the Spirit Realm. But you, the author, are writing about the Qi Refining and Qi Absorption realms being at the same level. The Golden Core True Monarch is equivalent to an Immortal. You've written the Purple Mansion realm as equivalent to the Nascent Soul realm, meaning you've skipped five or six realms.

The first chapter almost poisoned me! This isn't a traditional fantasy novel. In a world where Xuanjian is imprisoned, what's the point of giving the protagonist a useless talent? Even geniuses with no one to rely on can end up in jail. Dao Hui is incredibly important in this world, and you still give him a useless talent? Are you afraid he won't suffer enough?

I read these kinds of stories to experience the protagonist gathering resources from both worlds and overtaking others, not to see them struggling to develop themselves only to have to compete for resources with the powerful figures of their own world. And to be so timid and afraid of revealing their abilities...

Having a Mingyang Emperor in the family is incredibly unlucky. First, he provokes countless enemies outside, and second, he turns the family into a giant battle royale arena.

There are drafts available; updates will be posted every night at 10 PM. [Main character]: The protagonist is a third-generation immortal who establishes a family in another world. He experiences no pressure or frustration throughout the entire journey and enjoys the ultimate crushing power of cultivation. [Handling in both areas]

I've read 29 chapters so far, and overall it's good. The Daoist theories are very clear, and it's evident that the author has a lot of ideas. It can be considered an excellent book. However, I'll point out some shortcomings so far. In short, the lower chapters lack reverence.

First of all, in order to break through the realm as quickly as possible, it's impossible to have a child first. That's quite... The primary task is to level up, and you've already introduced a female lead.

I found a picture that looks quite similar. The AI ​​has been revised 17 times, and it can't write the character anymore, so this is how it is.