Cultivation: I Have a Golden Talisman of Creation

Female lead

The female characters are too homogenous; it feels like every female character is described almost identically. After reading for so long, not a single one has left a deep impression. The problem is, you've written a lot about them; it would be better to focus on fewer characters and develop more detailed descriptions.

Feel free to share your suggestions regarding the writing of your new book! 🙏🙏🙏

Here's a picture of her jade feet for everyone to see.

Is it a harem anime? If so, I won't watch it and will just block you.

I told him long ago. He can't write about women, he can't write about love, he can't write about everyday family life. Just stop writing. A confident man should stay single forever. Look at what a great book, ruined halfway through.

Wow, I'm speechless. Every female character is described with beautiful legs, beautiful eyes, graceful demeanor, and gentleness. It feels a bit overdone. The key is that these descriptions are given every time a woman appears, and twice when she appears twice. I'm speechless. Moreover, some of the women in the story might be from the opposing side. It made me think that the protagonist had never seen a woman before.

Reading the author's epilogue after finishing "The Demonic Gate," I realized that the author actually wrote very well, making it hard to put down. Although some parts were tedious, the flaws don't detract from the overall quality. Don't doubt yourself; it's truly well-written.

Having followed the previous book, I have some things to say. The author's concept is unique, the writing is good, and the plot is handled well, but the constant harem elements are just filler. If you can't write this well, it's just filler. Readers might as well read erotica instead. Why not focus on the story itself and cut back on the unnecessary harem elements?

The last one involved demons, this one involves poison? And I'm looking for a mature woman too! 😍😍😍