Cultivation: I Have a Golden Talisman of Creation

The heroine

The women are too homogeneous. I feel that the descriptions of each woman are basically the same. After reading it for so long, not a single one has a deep impression. The problem is that you have written a lot. It would be better to write less and focus on the descriptions.

Regarding suggestions for new book creation, everyone can speak freely 🙏🙏🙏

Send a jade foot for everyone to see

Is it from the harem...? I stopped watching it and just blocked it.

Already told him. I can't write about women, I can't write about love. I can't write about my family's affairs. Just stop writing, a confident man will always be single. Look at what a great book, it died halfway.

Wow, I personally feel so speechless. All the descriptions of the women in it have to describe beautiful legs, beautiful eyes, graceful, graceful, and gentle. I feel a little watery. The key is that the description of each woman is once written once when she comes out, and twice when she comes out. I am speechless when I read it, and there are women who may be enemies. When I read it, I thought the protagonist had never seen a woman.

I saw the author's final remarks in "The Demon Gate". In fact, the author's writing is very good, and people can't bear to put it down. Although there are some boring parts in the middle, the flaws are not concealed. Don't doubt yourself, the writing is really good.

I have followed this from the previous book, and some of the things I said made me uncomfortable. The author's conception is unique, the writing is good, and the plot is well handled. However, he is always a stallion. This kind of thing is simply a waste of writing and poor writing. If the reader really wants to read this here, he might as well read a pornographic novel. Why not focus on the story itself and avoid the unnecessary three thousand concubines?

The previous book played with demons, this one plays with Gu? And I want my sister 😍😍😍