Ordinary People: Start Cultivating Immortality by Deducing All Methods

Even if you haven't left the Qixuanmen yet, why don't you update 90 chapters after it's released? Is it ridiculous?

You have to deal with all the minefields unique to fan fiction. Do you write with love? I still think my writing skills are great

Five Spiritual Roots, silly children, run quickly,

Don't read any books by this author, you idiot

Stop scolding. No need. The AI ​​is better than the author. Nothing to scold. Just run. Children

Chapter 60 is not yet started in Qi training, Chapter 61 is on the shelves, the five spirit roots are playing house with Mr. Mo, and he does not hold the sky bottle but mentions it five or six times. The plot is too slow and is not recommended.

There's a reason why this book is so popular. I've only read two chapters, and I can't figure out the relationship between the characters. Han and Han Li have the same surname and the same third uncle. Are they cousins ​​with Han Li? ? ? If it is your cousin (if you are married to someone named Han), you have to call him third uncle. And calling Han Li and calling Xiao Han? ? ? "Normal people with the same surname should call each other by their first name instead of their surname. They should be called Xiao Li. You see in the original novel, Han Li's sister is called Brother Li (not Brother Han). These are all details. You can't figure them out, and the book will look really awkward.

Unbelievable, I haven't even started refining Qi level one yet in the paid chapter.

If you don't dismantle the cp + harem, there will be no heroine and the pure love party will not click in, and the harem party will not respond, neither party will be pleased.

Not dismantling cp + harem? Isn't this introduction a fight between left and right? ?

I just want to know if anyone is still alive after getting food poisoning?

It is identified as an AI article, and I cannot write a series without a system.

I strongly recommend that you write less plots about interactions with women. The writing is terrible. It's so embarrassing to watch an innocent little virgin see the woman he likes and desperately want to show how awesome he is.

If you don't dismantle the CP, you might as well read the original work.

This author writes several books all about answering Bian. If you see it, run away quickly.

Three Thousand Avenues is really 3000. The author's cultural level is indeed not good. No wonder he rushes to the street. If there is a law for cultivating immortals, I just want to say infinite♾️

There are many settings that are different from the original work, and there are many poisonous points. It should be possible to change it. After reading Chapter 13, I just couldn't stand it anymore.

It's very dramatic, you know? If both of them are named Han, they should be called Xiaoli Ali or something like that. The title Xiao Han feels like calling a subordinate in a company. Although I know that the title brother is correct, it still feels weird for Han Li to call him brother in ancient times.

Don't dismantle CP? Don't want Zi Ling or anything else?

There is no story at all, the whole article is just talking to myself, what do I think should be done, so what?

It's too watery, it's so verbose, it took so long to talk about the Qixuanmen, and everyone has spiritual roots. If so, I don't believe that the predecessors would not have studied it. After all, people with high cultivation levels will also have children with poorly developed spiritual roots, clan members.

Are you original? I came here for the harem. If you don't show off the CP in your introduction, what will I see? Did the author have cerebral thrombosis and left and right brain fighting? One introduction offended two groups of people, the author is this 👍

Next time eunuchs don't use this kind of excuse, it's very imaginative.

This novel is so well written that it's so mentally retarded

Please update, this looks great. Author update soon