I'm in Yellow Maple Valley, and I Have an Equipment Slot!

This is a change of vest, the last one was sprayed to pieces, this is why I don't want to give up and open a new account 😥

Damn it, this author participated in the Qidian training class and learned the method of unscrupulous irrigation.

It's only a few thousand words long and it's on the shelves. I guess it was a failure because of poor grades in the previous book.

There are frequent cheats in the early stage, but not in the later stage. The whole text follows the route of Han Paopao, grabbing everything that belongs to the protagonist of the original work. Without any creativity of his own, it is better to read the original work.

😅 In the first chapter, at the beginning, there is a 24-year-old who has practiced at the eighth level of Qi and has fake spiritual roots. You are no worse than the Tianling roots. You have no desire to read anymore! ! ! !

First: the protagonist kneels down and licks Han Li. Although the protagonist makes excuses every time in the book, they are all very far-fetched. I feel that the author can completely set the protagonist's identity as Han Li's son. If he kneels down and licks him like this, it is much better than the lame excuses set by the author. Second: The plot is too far-fetched. The author has almost no innovation and just follows the original path of the original work, and every time he forcibly reverses the plot and returns the protagonist to the original plot. If you remove the content of the protagonist from this book, you will find that the original content is completely summarized into a new novel.

He was too used to Han Li. He gave him the Qingyuan Sword Art directly, and he always swore not to take the initiative, etc. Han Li didn't want to go to the Chaotic Sea of ​​Stars and just let him stay there. He equipped the Jade Slips on the formation and learned the progress just fine. What he said about studying with all his strength was nonsense. Is there only one Qingyuan Sword Jue in the human world? It doesn't matter if you spend money to buy a skill. Just to rub the old devil's golden thunder bamboo, you can see how it turns out.

There are so many poisonous points 🙂

It's free and I can't stand it. Why don't you find another market to sell it? If you are cheated by the family, just refuse. I can't stand it.

When writing about Gou Daoliu, wouldn't it be better to just read the original text? Look at what you wrote.

Damn, I can't even see the golden finger in the later stage, it's so funny.

I stopped reading once I started charging for Chapter 24. It must be a bad book with another name.

Find a way to get a drop of Towering Fortune Dew, and try it on your equipment to see what effect it has

The protagonist is so stupid that I can't watch it for free, so why bother subscribing?

I guess cultivation doesn't matter in the future and I will just start accepting girls blindly, and then I will use this treasure hunt to provoke water.

It's just that the protagonist takes advantage of Han Li's opportunity, and then goes through the plot, which is boring.

"Mortal: Competing with Han Li, winning in learning and cultivating immortality"

I was crazy about money, and it was published with only 50,000 words.

You are not Han Li's nanny, you are his father

AI novel, also killed Master Le

Was the soul-chasing seal eaten by the author? I hate this kind of careless author the most

The author should write something of his own, learn from the plots of Wulonghai and Tiansha Continent, and expand the worldview. After arriving in the spirit world, don't just stare at the Feiling Tribe and Jiao Chi Tribe. The spirit world is so big and you can expand a lot of things.

There are several books about Yellow Maple Valley, all from QYue. They all look a little weird.

Leaving aside the content, the text uses exclamation points randomly. When the author is typing, it is not surprising that there are so many emotions to emphasize the exclamation. It is very strange.

I charge 50,000 words for parallel imports, and it looks ugly.

Charges started starting at Chapter 25. I'm so poor.

The waste material flow is not interesting, 4, 5. None of the protagonists of Linggen are well written, and the hooks are huge. It is not as good as Linggen's physical talent, and the hooks are smaller.

It's too watery and I can't stand it 😐

I originally thought it was the eunuch protagonist, but fortunately, the pill formation finally came to my senses.

The protagonist is too tang. A first-class alchemist can directly enter the Yellow Maple Valley without looking at the spiritual roots. He can get the foundation-building pills at his fingertips. He can help others refine the foundation-building pills. If the success rate of the pills is high, he can still buy a few pills. Then equip them with the foundation-building pills. Basically, he can successfully build the foundation in one or two times. As a result, the protagonist has to wander around, practice various spells, and wait for the bloody forbidden land to open and play the plot.