I'm in Yellow Maple Valley, and I Have an Equipment Slot!

This is a change of vest, the last one was sprayed to pieces, this is why I don't want to give up and open a new account 😥

Damn it, this author participated in the Qidian training class and learned the method of unscrupulous irrigation.

It's only a few thousand words long and it's on the shelves. I guess it was a failure because of poor grades in the previous book.

😅 In the first chapter, at the beginning, there is a 24-year-old who has practiced at the eighth level of Qi and has fake spiritual roots. You are no worse than the Tianling roots. You have no desire to read anymore!!!!

There are frequent cheats in the early stage, but not in the later stage. The whole text follows the route of Han Paopao, grabbing everything that belongs to the protagonist of the original work. Without any creativity of his own, it is better to read the original work.

First: the protagonist kneels down and licks Han Li. Although the protagonist makes excuses every time in the book, they are all very far-fetched. I feel that the author can completely set the protagonist's identity as Han Li's son. If he kneels down and licks him like this, it is much better than the lame excuses set by the author. Second: The plot is too far-fetched. The author has almost no innovation and just follows the original path of the original work, and every time he forcibly reverses the plot and returns the protagonist to the original plot. If you remove the content of the protagonist from this book, you will find that the original content is completely summarized into a new novel.

He was too used to Han Li. He gave him the Qingyuan Sword Art directly, and he always swore not to take the initiative, etc. Han Li didn't want to go to the Chaotic Sea of ​​Stars and just let him stay there. He equipped the Jade Slips on the formation and learned the progress just fine. What he said about studying with all his strength was nonsense. Is there only one Qingyuan Sword Jue in the human world? It doesn't matter if you spend money to buy a skill. Just to rub the old devil's golden thunder bamboo, you can see how it turns out.

There are so many poisonous points 🙂

It's free and I can't stand it. Why don't you find another market to sell it? If you are cheated by the family, just refuse. I can't stand it.

When writing about Gou Daoliu, wouldn't it be better to just read the original text? Look at what you wrote.