Mortal: Han Li Who Returned from the Mortal World

The writing is okay, but what is written about strengthening formations and personnel becoming stronger is just general to make up for shortcomings, and the overall strengthening is too vague to be specific 🙂 In my opinion, it is not much different from not writing, I just skip it.

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Well written, very interesting, much better than most mortals, come on 🙂

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When Wangyu described the combat power of the old demon in the transformation stage, he clearly used the description of ten thousand kilograms of strength. This was something that the old demon had been refining. Of course, although it is necessary to consider that most of the monk's strength lies in mana, it still makes people feel humorous when thinking about the setting of covering the sky and the setting of mortals. In the Blood Realm, you beat the Transformation God violently, right?😁

The mortal method is really rubbish. The numerical value is simply ridiculous. The physical body has no bonus at all. After losing the mana, the golden elixir will be thrown to death from a height of more than ten feet, and the strength is as high as a hundred kilograms (ordinary people have to exercise more than this value for a period of time). Moreover, if the body protection method is available, the Yuanying will be broken by the power of a thousand kilograms, and the soul is not very good either. The soul of a human monk cannot even survive independently for a long time after being separated from the body, and it has no fighting power. The most humorous thing is that there are restrictions on taking the body. Your cultivation level after taking the body depends on the cultivation level of the person you take the body. It is really humorous The monk Zhetian can make the soul leave the body to withstand the catastrophe, and he will not fall behind in the battle with the masters of the same level.

After reading novels for so many years, I don't know why many authors have a bad habit. The protagonist's enemies are better than his wife. Author, if you don't want to write about women like Nangong Wan, Yinyue and Zi Ling, just delete them and don't bring them into Guanghan World. , They didn't get a share in the initiation, and the same goes for the supporting characters. They are all male supporting characters at the end of the writing, and the outstanding supporting female characters are invisible. Bingfeng has been invisible by the author. It's okay to play tricks in the early stage, but in the end, Wen Tianren and Ji Yinxuangu are still holding on.

From my point of view, in the absolutely invincible genres such as the Red Hair Trilogy and the Divine Machine series, the protagonists often like to do some tricks. For example, Shi Hao's spirit-eating beast, the fat woman. The wretched big black dog next to Ye Fan is Ji Tao Dudou.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              . If you look at it from Zhetian's perspective, if the protagonist becomes an emperor and becomes an immortal, he will definitely be the simplest enlightened person.       :"，，！？"

Success can overwhelm the sky, and failure can overwhelm the sky. In the early stage, it is true that you can rely on the combination of covering the sky and mortals to attract traffic, but comparing combat power across works is full of controversy. The author's writing style is also biased, making readers who prefer mortals look like clowns. Later, they gradually lose the motivation to read.

I'm really speechless. There are still people who calculate their combat power by name. The strength of different worlds is very different, but it is the same for all immortals. According to their calculations, the other side of Zhetian Bian and the other side of the Supreme Being are both called the other side, so the other side of Zhetian Bianxiu and the supreme power of the other side that can create and destroy the multiverse should be the same thing.

If this book slows down and starts writing about daily life, it will be a death sentence.

Every time I see the Bloody Secret Realm, the protagonist has to have sex with Nangong Wan because of a sex sac, and I always think about it. If the old devil summons the Five Sons of Concentric Demons, and I throw a sac to it, or the Supreme Saint of Six Paths summons a sixth-level true demon, and I throw another sac over, it would be too invincible.

The red dust fairy that covers the sky, I feel that when I go to the immortal world of mortals, I will kill indiscriminately. I remember that the Taoist ancestors in the immortal world will be eroded by the will of heaven, right? 🤫

The Immortal World chapter is really not good-looking. I suspect that Wangyu wrote it randomly.

Please, please, the Mahayana results of this book will go down

Alas, the starting point is still too high. After the freshness period, it doesn't feel so attractive.

According to the three stages of the novel: 1-7, 8-13, and after 14

The mortal world is still too weak, and the original plot of the spirit world and fairy world is terrible and boring. In fact, you can go back to Zhe Tian later or improve it before. The trilogy is considered the author's strong point.

The author's original text is that the four poles are aligned with each other to refine the void, the transformed dragon is aligned with the body, and the immortal pair is aligned with the Mahayana. This is the same as the fourth level of Wangba next door and Lianxu against the city of explosion, Hualong and Fusion against the country of explosion, and Xianyi and Mahayana against the country of super explosion. In that case, wouldn't it mean that the Golden Immortal should only compete with Xian San, the Da Luo Jin Immortal should compete with the Sage King, the Dao Ancestor should compete with the Great Sage, and the Chaos Dao Ancestor should compete with the low-level Quasi-Emperor? Although it corresponds to the magnitude of the debate circle.

Coming from Zhetian, the front part is quite interesting, but the back part is completely uninteresting. I can only read 1/3 of Invincible. After Nangong Wan, all women were written as Zi Ling, and they were all big green tea bitches. Anyway, there are quite a lot of problems.

I dare say that there is a high probability that it will be difficult for the eunuch to get one card a day? It is difficult to update fan works that copy the original content and change some of the plots. In all likelihood, fewer and fewer people will rush to watch such updated fan works, and even if they do, they will keep them because they are afraid of spending money to watch The Eunuch.

It is short and weak, and the more I write, the less it becomes.

Does anyone write about Han Li who returns from Xuanjian?

Taking Yin Yue for marriage, ignoring her missing in the human world for so many years, and asking her to practice the Heavenly Art of Oblivion after awakening the Seven-Star Moon Body. She completely used Yin Yue as a tool. She deserved more death than Tian Kui Ao Xiao.

How many heroines are there? I really don't want to watch so many female protagonists. Whenever it is written about a woman who is not good, I just jump to read it. It is illogical, blocking the way or not pleasing to the eye. Who cares about men and women? Just kill them. Even if you have desire, you won't become a breeding pig, right? Anyway, I have read more than 100 chapters, so Nangong Wan is just a little bit evil, and Yuan Yao's writing is really not good. Nangong Wan's accident was a little bit poisonous because he accidentally happened to the emperor who had lived for hundreds of thousands of years. When the protagonist was looking for the ancient monk's cave, he was targeted by the late stage of Danjie after Yuan Yao caused disaster in the fish pond. After the counterattack, he found Yuan Yao and put it down lightly. I really believe it. If you were a man, would the protagonist kill you? Even if you don't kill, you won't care, right? Will he also be killed by a man named Hu? That Dragon Roar Body is okay, it's just that the protagonist is interested in it. I can't write the lingering feeling of a strong person. Because I am awesome, I have many choices. If I like you, I will directly force you to take a concubine. I think you have good talent and you are pleasing to the eye, so I will give you a little help. Only then will you feel like a strong person? Others are okay, the normal plot is quite enjoyable, and the protagonist's fighting ability is not overwhelming, but I just can't stand the plot about women. The author tells me, I have more than 10 monthly passes in my hand.

Can you roughly compare the combat prowess of mortals and Zhetian?

It's so invincible, even though there is a bit of description of fighting skills in the foundation building part, everything after that will be an instant kill.

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Cute little Yinyue, hug her and kiss her to death 🙂!