Douluo Dalu: The Steel Judge

Wuhundian NB, defeat the evil protagonist Tang San

The writing was so messy that I thought the first chapter was just a fillip and the protagonist would become an emotionless person. After all, he only awakened the Judgment Angel Martial Spirit after seeing his father kill his mother. In the first chapter, you foreshadowed the protagonist's darkening. What do you see later on? He's cute, handsome, and has a large group of female fans? Don't talk about traveling through souls. When a normal person faces relatives who have been together for 6 years, how can the main character live a happy life without any emotional fluctuations after his family dies? I can only say that you are awesome. The second point is that I keep emphasizing that Tang San is a great threat to you and I have to practice hard so that I am not afraid of Tang San. It feels a bit like forcing the plot, which looks super weird. This is how I felt after reading the first volume, every word was a mess. There is no echo between the front and the back, just what comes to mind and writes there.

Why not seize Tang San's opportunity? Also help Tang San. And disgusting Yu Xiaogang. Can't we just kill them all?

I quite liked it at the beginning, but at the end the plot was like feeding a private person. The protagonist wanted to protect Bibi Dong, and then wanted to kill Tang San. Personally, I don't think this is a poisonous point! Putting into Douluo's worldview, it's like a relative who was particularly good to him killed a wolf out of need, and a person who was raised by a wolf seeks revenge on the relative who killed him when he grew up. And that person has nothing to do with me. If he is a normal person, he should know how to choose. Later, the author explains in another chapter that it is impossible for the protagonist to kill Tang San, and the hatred between the two must be resolved. I vomited. Isn't the best way to resolve the hatred between the two parties to kill one of them? Also, the appearance of evil soul masters is very sudden. During the Douyi, evil soul masters should be very rare. Most people don't even know about them, at least not even theorists like the master. Moreover, there are actually cases where evil soul masters have infiltrated Wuhun City. I'm speechless. Generally speaking, when you read a fanfic, you watch the butterfly effect brought about by the arrival of the protagonist and the excitement of changing the plot, rather than magically changing the plot. You can have hidden characters, but never characters that can affect the direction of the original plot. After I couldn't stand it, I came to the comment area again. Unexpectedly, the author originally wanted Bibi Dong to get back together with the master. Although I have already voted to change it. When you see this, you almost understand the original outline. Changing all the tragic plots of the original work to a beautiful and happy China is a happy ending. To be honest, I really like this kind of subject matter (early stage), otherwise I wouldn't comment and write so many words, and I even invested in it! What a pity. She should become a eunuch in the later stage😄 Some insights from the white prostitute dog

I saw a lot of people posting that they didn't want the protagonist to match up Master and Teacher Dong. Then I would like to collect everyone's opinions here. Book friends who agree with the matchmaking will deduct 1 below. If you want Teacher Dong to break up with the scumbag Master, feel free to deduct it. The deadline is one week later, I will fully consider everyone's opinions! 😁

The protagonist was an adult in his previous life. Why did he become like a child after arriving in Douluo?

Come on hope! Don't be a member of the Spirit Hall and still lick Tang San

I gave up halfway through the book, but only after seeing your latest chapter did I have the desire to read it again. Unfortunately, I skipped the previous part about getting too close to Shrek. Tang San and the others are always competing against each other, and I hope they don't have a good ending in the end. In that case, I will continue to subscribe to this book until it is finished.

Will Tang San and the others be hostile to the protagonist in the future? If you know it, wouldn't it be enough to give Tang San and the others all their fighting skills before? In addition, the protagonist also lost in the face of such a huge gap in soul power as the seventy-two-level soul saint, but Tang San won. Is the author trying to use the metaphor of the protagonist to set off Tang San's strength?

Now build a supporting building. In the next few chapters, a plot will explode. There is an urgent need for many black and evil forces supporting characters. Book friends who need it can reply below with their names and what martial arts they want. The author will consider it as appropriate and write it out according to the plot 😁