A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Wen Tianren Adds Points to His Cultivation!

You had a plot-driven cheat ability, and you started from the Chaotic Star Sea, then abruptly cut it off, and then desperately suppressed the cultivation level to pad the plot and increase the word count. I'm speechless.

It's poisonous; even a Nascent Soul cultivator can't solve the problem. 🥵🥵

I was going to skip this, but I liked your previous book, so I came back to say something. I hope it can help you. Whether it makes sense or not is just my personal opinion, so please don't criticize me. Most readers of harem novels don't support Han Li (a famous Chinese writer known for his harem themes).

I refuse to believe that readers enjoy this feeling of being controlled, like a sword hanging over your head. The immersion is terrible. Why don't you just break the curse already? Why are you still wandering around aimlessly? Even after finding a way to break it, you don't act on it. Instead, you're looking for some kind of opportunity. You've cast a curse on the Six Paths.

The protagonist starts in the Chaotic Star Sea, and soon after, he approaches Han Li. Later in the timeline, Nangong Wan is no longer present. It feels like the story is going to focus on pandering to Han Li. Many of Wen Tianren's novels have followed this formula. If this is the case, I might as well read another Wen Tianren book; he's already done it this way. I'm not interested in reading the same old formula. Author, you need to be more innovative! Even pandering needs to be original.

Damn it, how come Liu Dao didn't know his soul imprint was so powerful? Even a Nascent Soul cultivator couldn't handle it. If he'd known it was this powerful, his soul imprints would have been flying everywhere by now. If it's this powerful, the world would probably be full of them by now. Ah, how awesome that would be! A Nascent Soul cultivator easily enslaves a Nascent Soul cultivator. A Core Formation cultivator easily enslaves a Nascent Soul cultivator.

The early chapters were pretty good, but now all that garbage is gone. I'm abandoning it, deleting it, and wasting my money.

So he's a disciple of the Six Paths Supreme Saint! I thought the protagonist was a poor cultivator who had nothing. He even had to buy Foundation Establishment materials, and then he was still eyeing Han Li's Great Evolution Technique. The whole story gives off an indescribable feeling, lacking even a trace of Young Master Wen's prestige.

After reading over twenty chapters, decades have passed and the protagonist is still at the peak of the late Core Formation stage. Putting everything else aside, even if the Six Paths Saint were out of his mind, he would have guessed that the protagonist was deliberately unwilling to increase his cultivation. So why not use some tricks to force the protagonist to give in?

This is so low-quality, it's hard to keep up with. Didn't the author feel incredibly awkward writing this?