A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Wen Tianren Adds Points to His Cultivation!

You have a golden finger for the plot. Why did you think that starting from the chaotic sea of ​​stars, you directly cut the golden finger in half, and then you desperately pressed the realm to impose a low plot word count, and you were convinced.

It's poisonous, and even becoming a god can't solve your problems 🥵🥵

I originally wanted to leave it out, but I liked your last book, so I decided to come back and talk about it. I hope it can help you. Whether it makes sense or not is just my personal opinion, so please don't complain. Most of the readers of the harem genre are in the genre that does not lick Han Li. If you don't have Nangong Wan, they will assume that you are an old slave. Nangong Wan has become a discriminator. In addition, you are late in the timeline and don't have many plots and beauties. You will not have much reader base. No matter how many beauties you accept in the future, it will be meaningless. So I don't recommend you to write this book in the harem genre. Without Nangong Wan, the reader base of harem novels is very small. Don't look at Huan, I haven't seen how many books they have supported. One of them was also started by Wen Tianren, and it was also a harem novel that has not had more than 10,000 readers after a few months of writing. Your book can only attract readers who like Han Li. These people don't see how the author writes the protagonist, how majestic he is and how many beauties he attracts. They see how you provide women, resources, and resources to take care of Han Li. If you don't write these contents, they will retreat after reading for a while. I have read more than 30 books, and the situation has been roughly the same in the past two months.

I don't believe that readers like this kind of control. The feeling of a sharp sword hanging over my head. This sense of substitution is terrible. You haven't lifted it sooner. Still wandering around here and there. I haven't found a way to relieve it yet. And ran to look for opportunities. You 🧠 bow your head to Liu Dao. You wrote more than seventy chapters. The protagonist was restrained for more than seventy chapters. His cultivation has also been stuck at the peak of Jindan. The model worker builds your foundation and builds your elixir in the later stage. The model workers are all in the late stage of elixir formation. You are still at the peak of elixir formation. You deserve to die. Such pressure on cultivation. It's unreasonable for you not to throw yourself into the street

The main character is Chaos Xinghai at the beginning, and there is not much plot before he meets Han Li. There is no Nangong Wan later in the timeline. Why do I feel that this is written to please Han Li? Many books of Xuan Gu Wen Tianren have written this way. If this is the case, it is better to read another Wen Tianren. He has already written this way, and I have no interest in reading the same routine again. Author, you have to be a little more innovative, and you have to have new ideas to please.

Damn it, why didn't Liu Dao know that his soul seal was so awesome? Even the gods can't solve it. If I had known he was so awesome, the soul marks would have been flying all over the sky. If he was so awesome, the world would have been flying all over the sky. Oh, how cool it is. Easily enslave the boss in the Nascent Soul stage to the God stage. The Dan Formation Stage can easily enslave the Nascent Soul Stage.

What I wrote in the early stage was pretty good, but now I have written rubbish and discarded it. I deleted it and wasted my money.

It turned out to be the Supreme Saint of the Six Paths. I thought the protagonist was a poor cultivator. He had to buy nothing but foundation building materials. After finishing the work, he was still thinking about Han Li's Dayan Art. The whole article revealed an indescribable feeling. There was no trace of Young Master Wen's strong character. It wouldn't matter if he was a monk from a down-to-earth family. This is the first person under the Nascent Soul in the original work. He doesn't lack anything. Do you understand?

After reading more than 20 chapters, decades have passed and it is still the peak of the late stage of pill formation. If nothing else, even if the Six Paths Supreme Sage is confused, he can guess that the protagonist deliberately does not want to increase his cultivation level. Why not use some means to force the protagonist to submit?

Seeing that the Six Extremes True Demonic Skill was to be replaced, he decisively retreated from the trap.