A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Enhanced Cultivation

Death from poison. Goldfinger is not bad, and there are a lot of jokes. The protagonist is a pure gambler, and he takes the initiative to gamble his life even if he is cheated. (Lei Linggen voluntarily gave up the Foundation Establishment Pill in exchange for the Spiritual Stone and gambled his life in the Bloody Forbidden Land.) The character of the protagonist created in the early stage is a very crazy gambler.

If there are too few women and they are not very attractive, then the harem should be filled with as many women as possible. There should be three thousand beauties in the harem. This book is not very interesting. Another point is that these women are already common in the fandom and there is no freshness. In addition to including them, they also include some uncommon female partners to serve as concubines and furnaces to attract readers.

A red-faced old bitch eats young grass, a disgusting female thing hundreds of years old rapes a 20-year-old brat

There are too many jokes, seventy-nine, criticize me The characters' dialogues are in modern language, shit, crawling, movie lines, etc. It's easy to make dramas And Black Cat Yoichi There are too many entries, I will faint when listening to the book. Goldfinger is simple, clear and well received. Han Li's inner monologue is a bit arrogant. In order to set up a slap in the face, he sacrificed his character and received negative reviews. Chapter 4, a retelling of the original plot, procrastination, negative reviews. It's still a dragging plot, a meaningless plot. The protagonist has the aura of a king, and Chen Qiaoqian, the love brain, has been turned into a nymphomaniac. Fishing master Dong Xuan'er was also demoted. It doesn't matter whether you have a harem or not, but you can't force your wisdom for the sake of a harem. Boring plot, skipping chapters, skipping chapters. Chapter 11 is on the right track, strengthening the talisman. Explanation, explanation, metaphor, boring plot. Chapter 12, making plans, explaining, and explaining Dong Xuan'er's betrayal. This is a daily love Shura field light novel, the main story only accounts for less than a quarter, a small half of the love plot, a small half of the explanation plot, and the rest is the main plot.

Another operation where the alien spirit roots enter the Bloody Forbidden Land and sleep with Nangong Wan 😤

Byd is the sperm on the brain, and I want to be a Yuanying female cultivator. I also made up a story about Yuan Luan's Qi. It's so mean

Deliberately selling off combat power. It broke through the late stage of pill formation early, and then fell to the early stage. Then you spent nearly a hundred years in the late stage of the breakthrough. Wasn't your breakthrough in vain? What a waste of time.

Among the fans I have read, you are the most outrageous in accepting Nangong Wan. You took the initiative to trick Nangong Wan in person and caused all his disciples to die. Can you accept this? This feud has become big, okay?

About 100 chapters of female Yuanying, if you can't write it, don't write it. I'll kill you. Don't write that kind of Taoist couple plot. It's useless. You might as well write about the maid's furnace.

It feels like the author suddenly found a partner. After that, his partner is extremely controlling and has to point fingers even when writing.