The Return of Mythology: Starting with Comprehensive Martial Arts

Indeed, becoming an apprentice is fine, but why insist on joining the Beggars' Sect? That's insane. What modern person would willingly become a beggar?

Aside from the title being a typical martial arts novel, the key is the complete lack of modern thinking. What's the point of this whole thing? You might as well write about indigenous people. For example, most people these days are full of wild ideas, but they can't actually put them into practice.

He boasted for ages, claiming to have mastered all seven diagrams of the Longevity Technique, but he couldn't even beat two trashy old men. What a load of crap! It's utterly toxic!

I don't really understand why Guo Fu was chosen as the female lead. It would probably be better if there were no female lead at all, since the title suggests mythology. It seems like there will be cultivation/immortal cultivation elements later on, or even an original female lead would be fine. Anyway, it just feels awkward to read.

Don't write nonsense. Both the young Wu and Da Wu learned the Dragon Subduing Palm, but they couldn't master it. Hong Qigong taught them all other martial arts; there's no way he only taught the Seven Freaks. In the serialized version, Guo Jing taught the Nine Yin Manual, but to compensate for the power imbalance, the revised version made it seem like the Nine Yin Manual was too difficult, even Guo Xiang couldn't learn it. Guo Jing isn't a narrow-minded person.

In terms of martial arts and cultivation, it's generally okay, but your occasional use of poison is a bit off. For example, you mentioned your "golden finger" right from the start, and even though you had the ability to hold your breath, why didn't you use that pond at the hidden exit of Wang Chongyang's ancient tomb? You could have used that technique to find it, and then you'd have the long scroll of the Nine Yin Manual. You could have even used the Yi Jing Bone-Breaking Chapter from it first.

In ancient times, grain yields were low and taxes were heavy, making it difficult for ordinary people to survive. The idea that the Beggars' Guild relied on begging for a living is simply ridiculous; it's nothing but a charlatan disguised as a brothel.

Former leader of the Beggars' Sect, Hong Qigong, now assists Huang Rong, with Qiao Feng as the vice leader, Guo Fu as the female lead, and Juejuezi as the protagonist.

I hate crossover games the most; they're all messy and disgusting.

Even without a female lead, she's better than Guo Fu; she has too many flaws.