The Outcast: Making the Fake Real

No normal person would call him Chu Sheng

The plot hasn't changed; following the plot is essentially deviating from it. The author has run out of ideas. Looking at the setup, it seems to use Feng Baobao's character to suggest she's actually trying to be a nanny, but can't be overtly so, so she has to do it subtly.

They talked a lot of fancy things, but in the end, they didn't change anything from the plot.

What? Now that you're a brother, you don't need to get a virginity mark tattoo?

I don't want to watch it anymore since I went to any place to accept punishment.

The protagonist can still endure having his path cut off; that's truly impressive.

The first page is already rife with harmful information; it's a diploma mill, haha.

My impression is that the author has an outline but it's very perfunctory. They want to meddle in everything, but can't find a suitable reason to force themselves onto the show. Moreover, they haven't written the core of "Under One Person," but are just showing off.

All-Access, despite having a powerful government behind it, is utterly incompetent, achieving nothing. And now they're messing around with some kind of divine weaponry? Human enhancement has been done successfully abroad for ages.

The setting is quite good, but that's about all there is to it. The author's understanding of cultivation is comprehensive and insightful. The problem is that after talking about cultivation, instead of defeating the opponent with a single blow, the author keeps playing dumb and talking about various social niceties. The only decisive move is against the Quanxing who came from the shadows, but even that is done in secret. Overall, there's not much of a sense of satisfaction.