Starting in the Grave-Tomb Crossover World: The Golden Crow Shines Upon the World

I feel like the protagonist is quite cheap. You can travel through time and have a mythical bloodline. Others call it a divine object. Why are you dumbfounded in the world of cultivation and so on?

Even if you have a golden finger, you still act like a dog. Ability to grab directly. Have you ever seen who traveled through time to rob tombs and who went to lick the Yin family? He even threatened to have the ability to kill him directly. As the saying goes, don't be afraid of wearing shoes if you are barefoot.

The protagonist is extremely talented, with such an IQ, and a mace as a weapon, there are many typos, and the plot is draggy and watery!

This book is useless. What I wanted to read was about tomb robbing, but you ended up pulling the coffin in Kowloon.

The thoughts of primary school students are more naive than naive

It is recommended to teach the protagonist a lesson, let him receive a profound lesson, and then change his character; the current protagonist is naive, has no ability, has a low IQ, and is not strict with his mouth, which makes him look stupid.

Tell others about your differences. Has the protagonist forgotten that the Zhang family has been studied in various ways? Also, Yin Nanfeng thought that the protagonist had golden eyes and told the protagonist that the previous golden pupil was blinded due to casual use. The protagonist actually wanted to give Yin Nanfeng a big showdown! Are you thinking like a normal person?

Just write it blindly. How come after you went there, everything turned into trouble, and bad things turned into bad things. You buried two children, and the children gave you things to show that they were not bad. Why did you turn into a corpse and attack people after you went there? ? ? Just to show off the ability of your Golden Crow bloodline. If you put tomb robbing and ghost blowing lamps together, the currency system will collapse.

It takes too long to introduce abilities and integration. You should go straight to the theme of tomb robbing and then slowly lay the groundwork. Don't be surprised. Even if you have one, you should write an inner monologue so that strangers can't see your cards. You must know that the world of tomb robbing is not a treat. Sometimes the most terrifying thing is not the mechanisms and zombies in the tomb, but the human heart.

The protagonist's expression changes drastically at every turn. From this, it can be seen that the author is either a new author, or he only cares about eating and not fighting. Why do you write this kind of plot if you are good at writing? How much do you think readers like this kind of protagonist who is surprised at every turn? Writing this kind of plot is to show off how good you are at describing your expressions, right?