Starting in the Grave-Tomb Crossover World: The Golden Crow Shines Upon the World
从墓综世界开始：金乌耀世
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- Completed
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- 1.3M Words
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- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Modern Cultivation
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- 3y ago
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The protagonist seems rather cheap. You can even time travel and have mythical bloodlines, yet when others mention divine objects or the cultivation world, you're just dumbfounded.
Having a cheat code doesn't make him a dog. If he had the ability, he should just steal it. Have you ever seen anyone who time-travels to raid tombs and then fawn over the Yin family? He even threatened to wipe them out if he had the ability. As the saying goes, those with nothing to lose aren't afraid of those wearing shoes.
The protagonist is a complete idiot, with this level of intelligence, and he even uses a spiked club as a weapon. There are also many typos, and the plot is dragging and padded!
This book is ruined. I wanted to read about tomb raiding, but you've given me "Nine Dragons Pulling a Coffin."
Elementary school students' thoughts are more naive than innocent.
I suggest giving the protagonist a lesson, making him learn a profound lesson, and then changing his personality; the current protagonist is immature, lacks shrewdness, has a low IQ, and is also loose-lipped, making him seem quite stupid.
Why should the protagonist tell others about his own differences? Has the protagonist forgotten that the Zhang family has been the subject of various studies? And when Yin Nanfeng thought the protagonist had the Golden Eyes and told him that the previous Golden Eyes had gone blind due to careless use, the protagonist actually wanted to give Yin Nanfeng a big beating! Is this how a normal person thinks?
This is utter nonsense. Why did things turn from nothing to something, and from bad to worse, after you arrived? The two children were buried, and they even brought gifts, indicating they weren't bad people. How come they turned into zombies and attacked people after you arrived? Just to show off your Golden Crow bloodline abilities? Putting tomb raiding and Ghost Blows Out the Light together like this, the entire currency system would collapse.
The introduction of your abilities and integration took too long. You should jump straight into the tomb raiding theme and then gradually build up the story. Also, avoid jump scares; even if there are any, include inner monologues. Don't let strangers see your hand. Remember, the tomb raiding world isn't a dinner party. Sometimes, the scariest thing isn't the traps or zombies in the tomb, but the human heart.
The protagonist's constantly changing expressions reveal that the author is either a newbie or has a short memory. Why write such plot points when you're doing well? Do you think readers enjoy a protagonist who's always surprised? Are you just showing off your amazing ability to describe facial expressions?