A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Taking Han Li as My Disciple from the Start

Nine out of ten books about ordinary people are about being slaves; I really can't understand what kind of people like to read this kind of stuff these days. 😅😅

This book was also given to Nangong Wan; it seems to be an old servant's work. 🙂 Author, without Nangong Wan, you wouldn't have any readers of harem novels. You can only write about simps to get a small number of readers.

Author, could you please stop focusing on Han Li? Zi Ling and Yuan Yao are Han Li's wives; adding them would be like cuckolding him! We read this book for the interactions between the protagonist and Han Li, the master and disciple; this is unbearable. It's not like there aren't other female cultivators for the protagonist; you could have chosen someone like Hong Fu or Zhou Ni Chang. There's really no need to include Han Li.

This comment section is indiscriminate; a harem should be chosen based on personal preference, not on whether a woman is famous or not. That's what a stallion is.

Intentionally refusing to take the Youth-Preserving Pill, resulting in a middle-aged appearance? I don't like reading novels like this. Even when the pill is practically placed in front of me, I act like I have a grudge against my handsome face and refuse to take it, only to end up with the comment about looking middle-aged.

Having finished reading so far, it qualifies as a nanny story. Those who feel unsatisfied after watching the anime might like it if some parts are altered. I can't make a definitive judgment on the rest. I've also written two chapter reviews. My current feeling is that it's neither good nor bad. People who like nannies and old servants might enjoy it. I'm leaving now, as I'm a harem-type reader and it doesn't suit me. I also can't stand unfinished stories.

I'm glad the anime's popularity has fueled the fan fiction craze, but my intelligence makes it hard for me to stay on after reading the first four chapters. Hopefully, this wave of hype will subside over time. Having read fanfiction for many years, I can probably summarize some patterns, taking Douluo Continent as an example.

It looks like it might be a nanny/old servant story. I hope it's not written as an old servant story; a nanny-like style would be fine.

I've read a few chapters. I'm really curious, doesn't the author blush at all? Foundation Establishment Ancestor, that's hilarious. Your protagonist's face screams "trash."

The harem should either be completely closed or fully expanded to include all characters; otherwise, it won't attract many readers.