A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Taking Han Li as My Disciple from the Start

Nine out of ten books about mortals are about old slaves. I really can't understand why people like to read this kind of thing nowadays 😅😅

This book is also given to Nangong Wan. It seems to be a work of Lao Nu Liu 🙂 Author, without Nangong Wan, you would have no readers of Harem Liu. You can only write about the dog-licking genre, so that only a small number of readers will read it.

Can the author please stop messing with Han Li? Zi Ling Yuanyao is also Han Li's wife. If you accept this, aren't you cuckolding Han Li? We read this book just to see the interaction between the protagonist and Han Li's master and apprentice. We really can't stand it like this. It's not like there are no female nuns for the protagonist. Just choose one of the types like Hong Fu and Zhou Nichang. There is really no need to use Han Li.

This comment section is so fucking picky. The harem is about choosing the one you like, not a woman or someone with a bit of fame. It's ok. This is a stallion.

Deliberately not taking Zhuyan Dan, you look middle-aged? I don't like reading novels like this. Even though Zhu Yan Dan was on my lips, I felt like I had a grudge against my handsome face, so I just stopped eating it, and ended up looking like a middle-aged person.

I've finished reading the current one, and the nanny story is good enough. If you change some things randomly and find it hard to read the anime, you might like it, but I can't make a final decision on the other things. I've also written two chapter reviews. My current feeling is that it's neither good nor bad. People who like nanny old slaves might like it, so I'll give it a thumbs-up. I'm a harem-type reader, and it doesn't sit well with me, so it's just that the eunuch-style readers won't like it.

I'm glad that the popularity of anime has made fan fiction more popular, but my IQ hardly allows me not to run away after reading the first four chapters. I can only say that I hope this wave of heat will settle down again. After reading fan fiction for many years, I can probably summarize some rules, taking Douluo as an example. The first stage: group flow, which is what many people call Lao Nu flow, which is basically a fine-tuned version of the original work. Either he takes advantage of the protagonist's opportunity and replaces the protagonist, or he imitates the protagonist and makes up his own cheat, or he becomes an old slave and becomes a cheat himself. The second stage: defamation. But Douluo is a bit special, and I don't know if this is a stage that should exist, but in those few years there was indeed a wave of anti-protagonists of considerable scope. From Dou 1 to Dou 2, Dou 3, and even the next door fight... It has a certain impact on all current fans, and it can be regarded as a review of morality. The third stage: innovation, adding humanistic care and other depth to the original work. It can be regarded as a replica of the first stage, but it will be more profound than the first stage and not as extreme as the second stage. Having separated from the original work, the author at this stage can be said to be on the borderline of originality. It can be said that he is writing his own book with the help of the framework of the original work. It is not entirely a secondary creation, but he has already had his own thinking. The characteristic is "letting go" of the protagonist of the original work, but not being too obsessed with what the original work is, because this type of work has already turned the specific original work into a simple framework. To put it bluntly - just with the help of a mature shell. This book can be regarded as the most basic nanny flow in the first stage. The logic in the first four chapters is too weak, and it is simply an anti-brain plot. Maybe the back part is good, but for readers like me, I won't see the back part at all.

It seems that it may be the nanny old slave style. I hope it is not written as an old slave. A nanny is fine.

Read a few chapters. I'm curious if the author wouldn't blush? Foundation Establishment Ancestor, you made me laugh so hard. You, the protagonist, have a face that looks like a fish.

The harem is either closed or fully open, otherwise not many readers will read it.