Biography of Shushan Sword Immortal

I felt pretty good at first, but I was immediately persuaded to quit in Chapter 18

After reading a few chapters, it was not interesting. The author boasted about the Emei sect's long-browed immortals and made them appear in heaven and earth. It's disgusting.

It's really true that since I got into fantasy novels more than ten years ago, and my eyes were opened to things like the Demonic Chef of Ice and Fire, Douqi Transformed into Horses, and Skeleton Elves (it's true that a hundred flowers bloom, I won't give more examples), there have been fewer and fewer fantasy-themed novels. Because as people read more books, their tastes become higher and higher. If the writing is not strong enough or the stories are not novel or exciting, they will give up after reading only a few chapters. In the age of involution, no one has time to wait for the author to grow, right? Thinking about it this way, it is quite difficult for someone to make a living by writing novels! Alas, middle-aged people tend to have a lot of things to do and waste everyone's time reading reviews 😃

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San Mao Zhenjun and Zhang Ziyang are the real Taoist masters in history, and they are also officially recognized gods. Their eyebrows are not as good as the novelist said. They are just like Hongjun in the list of gods. It is bullshit. It is too outrageous to praise him as the number one golden immortal in eternity.

The protagonist is like a stupid pig. He went to a place to practice his trump cards. He couldn't sit still and went out for a walk and was beaten. After learning from the pain, he decided to practice his trump cards completely. Halfway through the training, his father was accepted by Emei as his apprentice. He was so angry that he ran out and was beaten again. People say that eating one sting will make you wiser. The protagonist eats one sting and eats another sting again. He is really a greedy cat.

If you don't know how to write plots about women, then there should be fewer plots. To be honest, readers nowadays don't have to have women to keep their expectations high. I felt so embarrassed when I read it. At the beginning, he and Jiang Xue went up and down to kill him, regardless of whether the protagonist was absorbing the water vapor intentionally or not, and then just laughed away the grudge. If the protagonist had not escaped, his death would have been in vain. This part is a bit poisonous. Also, your reaction to the female-female interaction protagonist is too awkward. Other plots are pretty good. I suggest you write less plots about women.

After the protagonist cultivates immortality, the protagonist's enemy takes his father into the house. The protagonist is automatically inferior to the enemy. At the same time, he has to bear the reputation of being unfilial when dealing with the enemy. It's really wonderful! ! ! And the heroine! The first time I met the heroine, the heroine almost killed the hero, and then insulted the hero's master. Under such circumstances, she could still fall in love, which is really amazing!

The protagonist practiced escape skills and accidentally collected water vapor while on the road. One female character just struck out with a sword, endangering her life. After the protagonist apologizes, the female character starts insulting the teacher again. The final review of the female character is good.

The description of the female character is too bad, because a vapor will kill someone, and a perverse personality will not act like this First of all, the character has a bad look, and secondly, the protagonist's subsequent description of licking her and the author's defense really made some readers feel disgusted Secondly, it is not that there are no good women in the Shushan world. Instead of being a 🐶 for Jiang, it is better to find someone else It is better for the Shushan plot to focus on cultivating immortals. It is better to write about the detachment of immortality and the spirit of a young man than to lick women.

Everyone, please abandon the book. I believe I will be disgusted by it again in the future.

Everything else is fine, but suddenly a father comes to practice immortality with the protagonist. He becomes the leader of Lianshan for no reason because of the protagonist. This is too poisonous. The description of women is very embarrassing, but it is harmless. There is no problem in advancing the plot, but the appearance of this father is really poisonous.

After all, everyone has different ideas and opinions, and everyone has a different perspective on dynasties. But I don't understand why people at the bottom of the Song Dynasty are better off than those in the Han and Tang Dynasties.

I saw something was wrong in Chapter 18, so I came out to ask if I could read it later.

One second he was stabbed by a woman, and the next second he was kneeling and licking her. How did you come up with this plot? Do you have any hobbies where you see a woman licking her?

I'm here to review. (Chapter 18, 19, 20 when you meet the goddess) First, the only fault of the protagonist in the whole accident was to use water escape to form a cloud shuttle several miles long between the two sides. However, according to the following text, it will be known that the protagonist can use and release it at will, and the total rainfall used is only a few hundred kilograms, about 0.25M³. Secondly, when the goddess saw it, she didn't ask right or wrong or let anyone explain, and she directly took people's lives ruthlessly. Original text "If it weren't for his Five Elements Escape Technique, which was so mysterious that he could escape within a fraction of a second, he would have been split into two." 666 Is this called "hatred of evil"? The protagonist's escape method has just been explained in the previous article. It is very fast and very powerful. Even the protagonist can escape in a matter of seconds. Author, let me ask you, if it were another person, would this person die? And in fact, this man did nothing wrong, yet he was cut in half with a sword. Can this murderer be called "hatred of evil"? ? ? Author, if you see this, I hope you can explain to me whether you really think her behavior and character can be called jealous of evil.

Let's play Song Dynasty again. Authors who think they are "literati" like to play Song Dynasty You are so awesome. You are such a coward. How can you do the sheep-leading ceremony? Oh, it turns out that there was no sheep-leading ceremony in the Han and Tang Dynasties. I want to try it.

The author should think about why many novels do not arrange the parents of the protagonist. Characters like parents are really difficult to write in online articles. It is easy to write poorly, become annoying, and affect the reading experience.

As the title states, the emotional drama is terrible, and the emotional plot except for the first and last two are also very inexplicable. I came here to watch Cultivation of Immortals...

Many of the treasures in Shushan were decided before Changmei was about to ascend. After that, there were no problems. Zhitong was Tuotuo's apprentice for the third generation.

The essence of "Shu Mountain" is the routine of "predecessors plant trees, and later generations step on thunder" - Changmei Zhenren is not leaving blessings, it is clearly a "Heaven-level" Ponzi plate: first, all the merits and luck are discounted and taken away, and then the shells, debts, cause and effect, magic weapons, Shentong was packaged and listed on the market, creating a name for Emei Daxing, stabilizing the market, and the next leader established Emei Investment Group Co., Ltd., And distributed all the subordinated debts taken over to the younger disciples below who were lucky and lucky, so that they would not become bad debts. Therefore, based on the size of the debt that can be taken over, three generations of disciples were selected in advance, ranging from three heroes, two heroes, and seven dwarfs. From the moment they got the opportunity, they took the blame for others. The three sword fights were the concentrated outbreak of the "redemption crisis". All the "high-leverage magic weapons" left by the ascended predecessors - the Liangyi Dust Formation, the Purple Green Swords, the Nine Identities Cauldron, the Heavenly Escape Mirror... Appear to be core assets, but in fact they are all "subordinated debts": the greater the power, the heavier the binding cause and effect. Once the magic is over, it will directly turn into a toxic asset, and there will be no time to even liquidate it. So the really smart people in the book are not those who "get the treasure", but those who "get rid of it": - The Bliss Boy sold the equity of Qingcheng Mountain to Changmei early, and ran to die on his own, which is equivalent to cashing out in advance; - The White-mei Monk was even more brilliant, directly "foreign capitalizing" Mount Emei, injecting capital from Buddhism, changing the articles of association, and Taoism Karma, and he did not bear a penny; - Even many "retail investors" know that the "Secret Demonic Debt" of the old demon of Tiecheng Mountain cannot be touched, and they would rather stay in the shrine and be a deadbeat than take the debt. In the end, those who can ascend are all "escape masters" - on the eve of the end of the law, they package their physical bodies, souls, and merits into SPVs (Special Purpose Vehicles), and clear the warehouse with one click, leaving a pit full of "ascension poison" for future generations of swordsmen. Therefore, the disciples of the younger generation take the blame as soon as they come out of the mountain: the more powerful the magic weapon, the most serious loss of luck; the more mysterious the opportunity, the more terrifying the cause and effect. The so-called "Sword Fighting between Good and Evil" is, to put it bluntly, the "Disposal Conference of Non-performing Assets" hosted by Tiandao. Whoever still holds the thunder in his hand in the end will have to stay to fill the hole.

Directly open Chapter 18. He was passing by and sucked water vapor. The woman almost killed him with a sword. Then he couldn't beat him and begged for mercy. It's understandable. Others insulted your master. Master, you said you were very loyal to the master. Okay. It's not a big problem to have this woman in the end. 666 Please read the comment section before destroying it.

Those who hate Emei are those who have only watched the drama and fandom and have never read the original novel. The description of Emei in the original novel is always positive. Since Huanzhu Louzhu wrote it like this, do we have to respect the original work and the original author? On the other hand, if you overturn the original work, why bother with the same author? Wouldn't it be nice to be directly original?

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I am practicing the Shushan method in the world of cultivating immortals Immortality begins with the Gourd Sword Technique The old demon of Shushan is in the world of cultivating immortals Chixiao And this book I also believe that you blame me.

What's going on? Resurrected from the dead? Or is someone borrowing a corpse to bring back the soul?

I don't know what the use is if I don't want it, but you have to give it 😁

I really don't need to look at these pictures. .

It's too little. It's not enough to read. I saved it for a week and finished it in a while

? ? ? That's it? Gone again?