Yitian Kongtong Zhang Sent People

Objective facts: When I read it, Chapter 64 had already received a 1-point Book Friends comment So the comments would be sharper to balance it Subjective evaluation: The author's writing is good and the book is worth reading. I don't think this reward comment is a waste. When I first read it, it felt a bit familiar, but when the plot gang pushed the protagonist to Kongtong... I read the author's last book, and it reminded me of it now My personal evaluation: The plot advancement is too obscene, and the formula opening is easy to substitute. Joining a sect is always a matter of recommendation, and improving your strength depends entirely on talent. Summary: "Worth seeing". The martial arts genius' journey of martial arts. It's a very provocative novel. You can read the free chapters. Within dozens of chapters, you can tell whether you are suitable for this book.

Although the main line of architecture remains unchanged. But it would be nice if some original story lines could be created for the protagonist. Of course, as the main line is written, just make money quickly. It's too difficult and cumbersome to create your own. Modern fast food culture does not look at the author's efforts. Well, that's it.

The foreshadowing is how the protagonist has amazing talents and unparalleled combat power. This chapter is unimagery even when written down. Jin Yong Back then, I was scolded bloody when I wrote about Zhang Wuji's arrest and serialized it in Hong Kong. It was only after I finally wrote it that I was able to save a little bit of my reputation with my great success. How many years have passed? How long has this out-of-control adventure been going on? More than ten years ago, Squid wrote The Supreme Being Meng Qi was arrested in the Western Desert and was sprayed with many chapters. In the end, he quickly changed the chapter, completed the copy and immediately killed him and put an end to it. How many times have the writing methods and readers of the novel been iterated? . To put it in layman's terms, either the description of the protagonist's aura has been suppressed in the early stage, and it is logical that he will be captured and have an adventure. In the previous hundred chapters, you kept highlighting how awesome the protagonist is, but in the end, he was treated like a pig by putting on a bag and begging for mercy. The image you created step by step in the reader's mind was ruined. No matter how much you write about how charming and suave he is and how unparalleled his fighting prowess is, it still can't make up for it.

Why did the protagonist suddenly become a loser? Didn't he level up again after injuring King Yin Ye? I didn't say anything to you when you were beaten to death. You were packed up and taken away. I was convinced. What I wrote before was so awesome. What kind of genius is arrogant and arrogant? You suddenly turned into a chicken. You are so beautiful. I saw the protagonist of 108 being arrested. I persisted for a few chapters and it was really hard to bear. Can't help it, there is no main mission in the clouds and mist. There are so many adventures and martial arts secrets in Yitian, but I haven't found any of them, and I haven't explained why. I am no different from the natives. I traveled through time in vain, thinking that martial arts is not easy and will finally provide food and grass, so I withdrew.

It started out well, then became more and more cliche.

In the latest chapter, Chasing Soul Sect has lost all face and face. Not only has the Kongtong Authentic Sect that it persisted for decades turned into shit, but it has also kneeled down and begged for help from all the major sects. Not to mention that all face has been lost. Whoever comes to the rescue is a big favor. How can the protagonist pay it back in the future? ! This chapter is such a failure! ! ! It's okay for the protagonist not to look for Jiuyang, or it's okay for the protagonist to be obsessed with Kongtong martial arts. Then the protagonist must be awesome enough. As a result, the protagonist has traveled through time for five years and has become like this. He is completely crushed by someone who can't be said. If the protagonist doesn't look for Jiuyang, wouldn't it be a big joke! ! ! I already felt awkward when the protagonist asked for advice on swordsmanship from Annihilation. Aren't you bragging about how talented the protagonist is? ! How can I learn swordsmanship and still ask for guidance from others? ! Now, let's make a big deal out of it, and it will completely destroy the whole sect's face. This is really a scam. Author, you must think your results are too good! ! !

Ji Xiaofu's part was really baffling. She almost had to fight Ding Minjun? Too many people are killed and your brain is damaged. Can you just say that the rescued orphan girl was saved by Ji Xiaofu? As for Ji Xiaofu, is she so stupid that she doesn't even tell her daughter not to call her mom? You can just tell me in advance that you can cover up the past, so why do you just recognize me as your mother? Then how did you know that Ji Xiaofu has so many things? Do you want others to know you have a problem?

But depending on the situation later in this book, I will most likely not follow it. . . Because I feel that the author must be the kind of person who has a literary problem. Sooner or later, he will make a serious mistake and offend all readers. The simplest example is that he cannot not know how much the readers and audiences hate the character Ji Xiaofu. But I just want to write it, and I have written it again and again. The protagonist has no use in it. Then if you delete the relevant characters and the plot, it is not hello, me, everyone, okay? Secondly, the author's personal thoughts are too strong, and he does not consider the audience at all. As long as he thinks it is reasonable, it is obvious that the book review opinions will not be consulted. If the writing is bad, it must be because the readers have insufficient taste. There is nothing wrong with the author. .

The protagonist has no skills at all. He has to jump up and down, kill this and which, attract powerful enemies, and be kicked like a dog on the roadside. It would be better to practice his kung fu to the first level first, at least he will not be kicked like a dog. If you write like this, I might as well review the original work. After the original work was frustrated, there are two exciting points: Jiuyang and the Great Shift of the Universe.

I gave up the book after reading the latest chapter 155. It was too clever, it was either kill or let go, but in the end, I gave someone acupuncture and was framed by outsiders. The update is too slow and I am speechless.

It's no different than eating a piece of cake. The young literary author is really hopeless. He has already written several books, but he still can't figure out the readers' temperament? Don't think that you can do whatever you want if you have some skills. Don't have the mentality of wanting and wanting when you make money. There are plenty of well-written books.

I didn't feel any worry about the protagonist being captured I just felt deeply disgusted by the author's plot point.

It's a pity. The writing of this book is very good, and the martial arts writing is also very flavorful, but the plot after it is released is really below the standard. I read the latest chapter in one go. I thought it was a rare martial arts fairy. After it was released, I closed my eyes and ordered all the chapters. But when I saw the plot where the protagonist was captured by the Qiankun Qi bag, it was really terrible, like eating flies in the food. The plot and control are really subpar. The rare genius, unsystematic, excellent writing style, and full of martial arts sense can only be said to be food and fodder.

When did you write about Zhou Zhiruo being knocked into bed by someone else?

No, what is written here? Can't you say that your martial arts skills are so high? Or is your Soul Chasing Sect too bad? With your strength, it's no wonder that the Kongtong faction doesn't want to see you. The previous protagonist was so talented, and he was able to fight this and that. He was able to fight against the King of Yin Ye, and he also fought against Kongtong to vent his anger on his master. But in the end, you fought a Mingjiao individual and were captured? He was captured alive in his hometown. Isn't this just a piece of trash who brags and doesn't draft?

Does the author do this because he thinks his grades are too good?

I'm convinced. I helped you speak in the book circle before, but you gave me a slap in the face. You wrote such a double-standard male protagonist. He helped the Yuan Dynasty and endured the humiliation. Others called him a helper. This latest chapter gave me a really bad impression.

In fact, the author should not write Yitian fan fiction, because the protagonists are now top-notch masters, and they have not participated in the plot of Yitian Dragon Slayer at all. I understand that when it is weak, it is wretched and developed, but it does not touch the adventures in the original work. It is clear that it is not even possible to practice all the martial arts, and it is not possible to find the Nine Yang Magic Technique. The author may not understand why we read fanfics. He just wants to see the protagonist change the plot in the original work. He just wants to see if the events can be changed if another person is the protagonist. However, the author seems to have deliberately avoided the original work, and the protagonist does not seem to be involved at all. This novel is a martial arts novel that uses Yitian's world view. It can be said that it has nothing to do with the original work. It is better to open a non-fanfiction novel by myself. If you have never seen any of Yi Tian's film and television works or written works, you can still read this book. I can't stand it any longer. Goodbye!

The original plot and original characters of Poyang Gang are really good. The gang leader, eldest brother, sixth brother, Shitou, the character creation, emotional bonding, and plot development are very real. The details are also vivid. The eldest brother was injured and the details of taking care of him were very touching. Entering the Soul Chasing Gate is a different story: First of all, the scene of recognizing your mother before entering the Soul Chasing Gate. Is it so vicious to take advantage of the plot and characters of the original work? Is Ji a person worth saving? Secondly, the martial arts settings of Chasing Soul Sect are very complicated, and there is a sense of beauty that you want everything, but actually nothing works. The design of the eight gates is very fancy, but it is actually the gameplay of collecting dragon balls. A sect that has no sense of existence at all, it has a bunch of prerequisite skills for job transfer, which are all very fancy. The relationship between the eight gates and the martial arts is also unclearly designed, making it confusing to read. Again, the location setting of the Soul Chasing Gate is also amazing. The major factions in Jin Yong's original work all have their own spheres of influence, with distances and buffers between them, and the design is very natural. Although Kunlun is next to the Mingjiao, its strength is not bad, and it is understandable considering that the Mingjiao is in disarray. Huashan and Kongtong are very weak, but because they are located in a remote location and do not have to face the Ming Cult and Tianying Cult directly, they can hold up the field. The Kongtong Soul Chasing Gate designed by the author is located in Huainan, far away from the main mountain of Kongtong, and is close to the Tianying Sect. I can understand that the author designed this to add to the plot, but the plot unfolds very awkwardly. The Soul Chasing Sect is extremely weak, and it is so close to the Sky Eagle Sect, yet the protagonist is still trying to attract hatred. To be honest, it is extremely unreasonable. The Eagle King, who was seriously injured in the wheel battle, could directly destroy the third child of the five elders. To put it bluntly, under the eyes of the Tianying Sect, the five elders of Kongtong came in person, and they were killed. Not to mention the two or three big cats and kittens of the Soul Chasing Sect. You have shown great mercy to me already, but you still dare to make a fuss? The Soul Chasing Sect is so close, and the Sky Eagle Sect wants to destroy it, and the big sects as far away as Henan, Hubei, and Sichuan have no time to help. The Soul Chasing Sect is actually established in such a place, and Master Feng is confident in cultivating these two geniuses in this place. He is not afraid of premature death, and often lets the protagonist go out alone without any manpower. It is really incredible. Compared with Sword Out of Hengshan, the Hengshan sect can develop and the protagonist can make waves because Hunan Hengshan is to the south of Henan Shaolin and Hubei Wudang, and the forces of Hebei Demon Cult and Henan Songshan cannot reach them. This space is the foundation for the growth and development of the protagonist. Finally, after entering the Soul Chasing Gate, the plot becomes more templated and game-like. It has always been practicing, fighting monsters, and winning miserably, and the cycle repeats. The protagonist has no agency at all, he is just a machine with no trace of humanity. My friends in the first chapter, how long did the book friend push me for before the author gave me two stingy sentences? Since you are going to take part in the plot of Butterfly Valley, does the protagonist have any plans and preparations in advance? Do you have to wait for the NPC to trigger it? You know what kind of martial arts there are in the sect, but you have to wait until you have finished practicing them before you think about what to practice next? Is Kongtong Wu a fool? If you go to Kongtong in person to prove your talent, you can solve the problem, and you have to make trouble. Are you afraid that the protagonist will go to Kongtong to practice martial arts early and not be able to catch the plot of Butterfly Valley? In the plot of Butterfly Valley, is there any difference whether the protagonist appears or not? In order not to change the direction of the plot, the Yin Liuxia, the White-browed Eagle King, and the Yin Ye King who should not appear were added to balance the combat power. I wanted to mess with it, but I didn't dare to change it, but Mother Ji was very bold in changing it at the beginning.

He commits the common problem of many fan authors. He is domineering in front of NPCs. When he meets someone with a name, he becomes just a piece of cake on the roadside and breaks into pieces when touched.

Is there anyone who talks about this kind of rubbish? The poison is given at the beginning, and the body is returned to the jade body. Where is the jade nm? In martial arts novels, it is a waste of time to see the master call the hero instead of the hero.

Come on, what have you been writing recently? I wasted my money and was fed a bunch of money.

Money back in Geneva! I don't know, I thought I was reading a novel from 2000s

The plots of the last few chapters are too fragmented. The previous chapters are completely unrelated. What are you writing about?

Speaking of the way the protagonist is frustrated, those who agree immediately say that they like the original work, insisting that this is how the original work is written, and this is how martial arts should be. It's been almost 70 years, and everyone in the comment section is always preaching about classics, but that's not how they do it. There is also a saying that there is no cuckold and no martial arts. In this case, don't hide your illness and avoid medical treatment. Anyway, it's almost time to see the latest one, and we can forget about it. In retrospect, there were problems as soon as it was put on the shelves, and I don't know if it was intentional.

It's a serious martial arts writing. The writing is sophisticated and the plot is reasonable. You can really read it as a traditional martial arts, as long as you don't get into trouble, don't be a literary youth or a green person. This book is worth pursuing.

Before joining the gang, he abandoned the two brothers who had lived together. He promised to come back to pick him up when he got rich, but then forgot all about it. After joining the gang, he knelt down and licked Ji Xiaofu for no reason, and rushed to fuck her ass. I was so convinced that I couldn't watch it at all.

I am a reader, not a fool. I can understand this kind of thing if you just click a few sentences. There is no need to explain it in a long explanation of hundreds or thousands of words. Take a rest when you are tired, Kavin said directly, it doesn't matter if you miss a day or two. I can't read what I wrote by forcibly updating it to make up the word count. It is better to be deficient rather than excessive in order to produce high-quality products, and to flood the sea with water will only destroy the character. I hope the author will think twice.

Ji Xiaofu and Yang Buhui wrote the part very well. It was difficult to understand the meaning of the original work. Just for this, I ordered it all. Otherwise, the meaning of most of my life will not be settled.

The first chapter was good, but the second one was unbearable. The two friends seemed to have a good relationship at first, but in the second chapter, they were left behind to work as errands. Such a useless time traveler is only seen in martial arts novels.