Faerun: The Transmigrations of a Mage with the Eye of Magic

But there is only setting. The writing technique is quite bad, the writing style is poor, and a large amount of information cannot be given in an organized manner. Instead, it looks like a bunch of colors thrown together randomly.

Summon characters, but there is no guarantee of loyalty, easy to make money

The protagonist should be a warlock rather than a priest. Although he is a god from another world, he feels more like a patriarch. The priest profession relies on perception, while the warlock relies on charm. If not, the priest profession has no sense of existence now anyway.

There are too many perspectives of supporting characters in the early stage, high-level perspectives of both sides, everyone has a plan, blablabla. The problem is that it is not used at all. You spent a few chapters describing what kind of big storm the protagonist is going to be involved in, and then it goes back in time. Are you sure that the readers will still remember the names and events you laid out before after reading the copy of these dozens of chapters?

I feel that there are too many written from other people's perspectives. When reading other novels, they usually focus on the perspective of the protagonist, interspersed with other people's perspectives. You have too many plots in this accessory, and they are added too fast. There are so many named characters that I can't remember who they are, so I just skipped through them.

The setting is quite pleasant, and there are all my favorite characters in the introduction. However, I have never played Baldur's Gate, and there are so many complicated relationships in the beginning. I read about ten pictures of the characters and their backgrounds, but I still have a vague understanding of them, and I was very impatient to read them. If you don't know me, I'll start with another paragraph that I don't know, and then I'll add another paragraph that I don't know. That's not how I write novels. I was able to read more than a dozen chapters sentence by sentence just by relying on the melody and God's Prosthetic Eye. I'm almost done with it now, so I'm posting this comment.

There are too many chapters written in the main world. There are already 46 chapters and there is no second copy. You have to remember that you are investing in the infinite area of ​​​​the heavens, not the fantasy or fantasy area.

Gold and silver are also valuable in Faerûn. Why not search for gold and silver in the apocalypse?

Psychic is 100% niche. How can it be compared with FGO? The same goes for the Chainsaw Man world and the Amazing Story world after the author's introduction. Niche worlds should develop fast travel. The faster the better. Only famous worlds are worth writing about.

I'm so tired of reading this book. I don't know what's behind it. The first part is almost like a group portrait. The main character disappears from several chapters and a bunch of background characters appear. I can't even remember them all. Moreover, the author occasionally writes the wrong characters in the front and back.