Faerun: The Transmigrations of a Mage with the Eye of Magic

But there is only setting. The writing technique is quite bad, the writing style is poor, and a large amount of information cannot be given in an organized manner. Instead, it looks like a bunch of colors thrown together randomly.

Summoning characters, but loyalty can't be guaranteed; easy to exploit.

There are too many perspectives of supporting characters in the early stage, high-level perspectives of both sides, everyone has a plan, blablabla. The problem is that it is not used at all. You spent a few chapters describing what kind of big storm the protagonist is going to be involved in, and then it goes back in time. Are you sure that the readers will still remember the names and events you laid out before after reading the copy of these dozens of chapters?

The protagonist should be considered a sorcerer rather than a priest. Although he's a god from another world, he feels more like a sect leader. Priests rely on perception, while sorcerers rely on charisma. Maybe we should change that, since the priest class doesn't really have much presence right now.

I feel there's too much emphasis on other characters' perspectives. Most novels focus on the protagonist's point of view, interspersed with others'. Yours has too many supporting plot points, and they're added too quickly. There are so many names and characters; I can't remember them all. I had to skip around while reading.

The setting is quite appealing, and the characters in the introduction are all ones I like. However, I've never played Baldur's Gate before, and the game starts with so many complicated relationships. I've read about ten chapters of the character backgrounds, but I still only have a vague understanding of them. I'm also getting very impatient.

I'm so tired of reading this book. I don't know what's behind it. The first part is almost like a group portrait. The main character disappears from several chapters and a bunch of background characters appear. I can't even remember them all. Moreover, the author occasionally writes the wrong characters in the front and back.

Mob Psycho 100 is incredibly niche; how can it compare to FGO? The Chainsaw Man and Wonderland worlds mentioned in the author's introduction are the same. Niche worlds should be quickly transmigrated, the faster the better. Famous worlds are worth writing more about.

The main world has been written too much; there's already 46 chapters and no second instance yet. Remember, you're submitting to the "Infinite Heavens" section, not the "Fantasy" or "Mystic Fantasy" section.

Gold and silver are valuable in Faerûn, so why not scavenge for them in the apocalypse?