Anomalous Mutation

Don't write less about the game Dial Gold. It seems annoying to those who have never played it and are not interested in it.

Isn't it too abstract to pull people into the spirit world to work with gold shovels and get rewards in real life? It wouldn't be very interesting if you directly use Hex's setting magic modification as a cheat. It feels a bit awkward to start a game in a novel.

Wonderful grass, worth a look. The writing is good and the plot develops smoothly, but Goldfinger is a bit awkward. Now Goldfinger is basically just a decoration and can only be used to play games. It is a bit novel that the male protagonist needs to take care of three young men (usually younger sisters). I hope they can help the protagonist (most people can't keep up with the protagonist's development rhythm). It is not until he meets his aunt that the supporting characters are interesting and attractive (I hope to be Yang Guo).

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Orencia: Alavia: The Sid Empire: Note: 1. The original image is large and clear, and there are many annotations, but the upload starting point will be compressed, please understand; 2. Small towns are not marked, which will cause the image to exceed the upload limit; 3. The city name or some attributes may be adjusted according to the development of the story.

The progress is too slow. I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 43 didn't even have a Yizi.

If you can continue reading after reading chapters 25 and 26, please continue.

I have a small opinion (can't say it's a suggestion). About time conversion and money conversion. I don't mind the time conversion in the book, and I'm even satisfied with it. After all, it adds a bit of fantasy flavor, but I think some people may not read this book because they mind it. So I think the author can explain the time (such as age, or month, how old it is in real life, or simply restate the time conversion or something every time it appears, so that you can roughly remember it after reading it a few times, and it is easier to read) There is also a way to explain various conversions in a separate chapter, so that you can find it even if you forget it. The above is an immature view

There is nothing wrong with some of the descriptions. The main character is a naughty person. If you can accept this, you can still watch it 1. You travel to a foreigner, and then the foreigner opens a welfare home, and you are not sure whether you are alive or dead. (At least not able to gain a foothold at all), why not choose to continue to face those crises by developing incognito? 2. When faced with an enemy who wants to kill you, don't let the wolf absorb the energy of flesh and blood, just kill the prey with just one sentence. Can you develop, buddy? Survive first, then be a good gentleman

Compared to the previous book, is it too slow?