Gou Is a Demon Cultivator in a Strange Doomsday

I hope I can write something new, and don't be like the author of Erlu Automobile. There are merits and virtues in cultivating demons, and the demonic path is more righteous than the righteous path.

There is something very valuable about marrow extraction. If mammals with short time and fast fertility are used as carriers, through feeding, cramming, slow extraction, and rotating non-killing chickens and eggs, an automated industry chain of spiritual energy extraction and blood shadow purification can be achieved. Spiritual stone freedom can be achieved

Good guy, your cultivation efficiency is nearly 50 times, but you are still in the Qi refining stage. If you say you can improve your combat power, then you can reduce your combat power. Why do you want to achieve a cultivation efficiency of nearly 50 times? Don't you think it's ridiculous? On the one hand, you have a cultivation speed that is nearly fifty times higher than the same level, and on the other hand, you have a cultivation level that has been suppressed in the Qi refining stage. You are completely attacking the right brain from the left brain.

This introduction is too offensive. Are real people the devil? It's that trick of confusing right and wrong again.

With resources and skills, the protagonist will be crazy in other aspects, and the number of words is low, right? I wrote 30 chapters for a method of refining ghosts, and then told me that I didn't get it. It's outrageous or not.

It feels like the golden thread is "dead". It only has instinctive reactions and will not change. It is not even presided over by the "weapon spirit" or the "formation spirit". It is very likely that the owner of this golden thread has fallen for countless years. Otherwise, such abundant resources are piled up like weeds, and many materials have naturally decayed without being collected. It is enough This proves that this plane is almost a land without an owner. No matter how hard you try to die, the protagonist will not touch the alarm (because the owners are all dead, which is why the protagonist in the Qi Refining Period is sent here, so that you will not face unsolvable problems after going through several levels), and the restrictions are all dead, and for the protagonist, it is easy to break. The next step is to combine the former golden thread layout and it will be almost delicious. Many layouts are ready-made. If you want to find a new idea, I think some background arrangements should be left unexplained and some things that are plausible but contradictory should be arranged (it is best if the author himself cannot figure it out, just like the protagonist of the Corpse Society who flew hundreds of thousands of miles but has not seen the end of the sea of ​​bones, and the cause and other details are not clearly explained; of course, some forces that disappeared inexplicably cannot find the reason for the annihilation of the sect, only the remains on the Taishi chair), and let the readers make up their own minds. That kind of grand scene and the traces of the past (stone carvings or bones) create a sense of mystery...

The author wanted to write too many things, which made the novel look fake. This fake refers to the sense of immersion when reading. It gave the protagonist a blood shadow, a shuttle between two worlds, a treasure gourd, a powerful formation inheritance, and a bit of a character seeking Tao similar to Gu. The result is that it has neither the update volume nor the classical quality of a purely refreshing novel. In addition, there are some flaws in the plot, especially sometimes the protagonist has the feeling of opening a God's perspective.

I have always felt that in this so-called weird world, the NPCs in it are generated with one click. The productivity is so low, there are monsters everywhere, and there is an inexhaustible supply.

The writing is sophisticated and the plot is quite in-depth. It doesn't look like it was written by a novice author. It's a pity that the investment opportunities have run out, otherwise I must support it.

I'm off track, I'm here to see the river of blood! Not here for routines.

There are so many inner dramas, Luo Li is so embarrassed, his maid is given to his servant, he could not offend them all, but he has to dance in the minefield, his grades are too good, his food is too good

Meaningless water. Skipping forty chapters in the early stage does not interfere with my reading. This is real water.

As a sect, the Demon Sect doesn't have its own territory? How can we support the foundation building, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul monks now that we have no territory? Recruiting a few handymen and then going to the righteous territory? If you don't even have a basic disk, how can you ensure operation? Although the Demon Sect is the defeated party, it has not been destroyed yet, right?

What did you write? Before it was put on the shelf, the main character didn't even show his face in so many chapters. They were all supporting characters who didn't know where they came from. The whole page was about these supporting characters... After it was put on the shelf, it was even more difficult to cast the base. This book is a must-read! I can still take a look at the copy I copied at the beginning, but when I got closer to putting it on the shelves, my own ideas came out, hey! It's a pity, I thought it would be hard to find something I could watch

The more I learn to write, the more I think of it. It reminds me of several books that I couldn't keep up with at the beginning. Unfortunately, I can barely keep up now. Except for the big guy in the strange world who saw the protagonist's identity as a time traveler, there is nothing else.

You have never broken through the foundation building, you have been practicing Qi, and then you are going to refine Qi and hit the golden elixir?

I was too lazy. I thought it would be better to put it on the shelves, but it turned out to be even more lazy. Writing a foundation building is more troublesome than becoming an immortal

The first problem is that more and more characters are given. Don't add entities if it is not necessary. It is not very popular now to have protagonists who are always hanging around when going out, especially in fantasy. What's more, the protagonist you designed at the beginning is miserable, and the separation between the front and the back is too obvious. Long Aotian is not Long Aotian, and the struggling protagonist is not struggling Question 2: The situation is too obvious. The performance in this chapter is that the protagonist can neither control the skills he practices nor control the golden finger. The protagonist has directly been reduced from the core of the book to a chess piece of the mastermind behind the scenes without knowing it Question 3: An artifact that takes you through time and can travel between two realms can't even suppress a single skill, which makes the skills look like they are alive.

Every time I see this kind of book of two realms, it seems that it is just a simple acquisition of resources without large-scale development.

This book is still in its seedling stage. Fellow Taoists' follow-up reading is very important for the book's exposure. I hope that fellow Taoists can help me. There is a saved manuscript and an outline, so you can rest assured that it will not be unfinished! I won't go into details about any words of thanks that are too cheesy. I'll see you later. I'll release it soon. It will start at ten chapters. If the results are good, I will continue to add more.

After working so hard for a long time, I still practiced Qi, but the wait and wait ended. I didn't write it down and said something!

The most basic level has been dragged out to more than 200 chapters, with no progress at all.

The writing is okay, the ideas are good, but the pace is too fast and the protagonist is too stressed.

I read a few of them and found them to be okay except for the subject matter. The article on an old lady with bound feet was too long and too youthful...

1,000 Chapters of foundation building and 10,000 chapters of golden elixir will probably take a lifetime to write.

I always feel like it's a little too watery. I have to write a chapter about everything. Now I'm skipping to read it.

Let's start a new book. I really can't read the rest of it, but I like your writing. I hope the next book will be faster.

What a sin, isn't it easy to write about Demon Cultivator? All the talented people in the newly born Demon Sect have finished writing.

The themes and characters are okay, but the plot development feels mediocre?