New Concept of Deception and Immortality

I forgot why I ran away after reading Chapter 10 the first time. This time I felt like I had to run away. There were too many things explained in each chapter and it was too tiring to read.

The previous novels by this author had great imagination, new settings, and unique plots. But this novel is extremely boring. 60% Of it is pure water and has no meaning at all. There is still a little bit of imaginative setting, but it is very little and the novelty is not enough. Then the protagonist is directly set to be a dog licker. And he tried his best to suppress the protagonist's combat power. There are also fewer battles, it's all about boring urban plots and disgusting water. I really feel that this book is not interesting at all. The settings of the novels I wrote before have content and things. Now the setting is completely pure water, hard water, and the amount of water is really unacceptable, and the actual content is not even 40%. The story is also bad, the protagonist is also portrayed as a dog licker, and the female character is even more messed up. The plot basically does not advance and is all in vain.

Now that this book is finished, can you go back and finish the Dimension Eroder book? Shu Huang suddenly thought of that book, and I remembered that I had removed it from the bookshelf a long time ago. It took me a long time to find it in Qianwen. That book feels much better than this one, and I miss Bai Lang's beautiful mental state.

Red Tomato Breeding Base

This author has made it a habit to suppress the protagonist's combat power. He especially likes to describe that the protagonist has paid a huge price, which is not as good as the benefits gained by casually practicing for a day or two like a character on the roadside.

This author hates high-ranking golden fingers, and he doesn't like to take the right path. Normal promotion must be fiercely competitive, the road will be blocked, and there will be no position. You must engage in crooked ways to accumulate capital, and rely on various whimsical ideas to move down the three roads, and finally overtake in the sewers and become a boss. The last step is currently being anticipated. In the first two books, Victor finished his accumulation and paved the road, and was about to ascend to the stage and died suddenly in front of the stage; Bai Lang had not accumulated enough money but had to continue to "accumulate" by frying fish in a small fish pond and became a eunuch. I have always had good ideas and lots of ideas, and there are too many different ideas. Later, the plot even becomes a plot to serve the ideas. In the end, I can't even tell a complete story. To be honest, the author's ideas are quite attractive, but the integrity of the story is getting worse and worse. Two eunuchs in a row are so bad that most of the book review sections are criticizing them. Unless the author can see himself clearly, put more effort into conceiving the plot, and truly write a complete story to prove it, he will never be able to turn over just by relying on his imagination and all kinds of bad work.

To give some knowledge to readers who don't know him, this author has a habit of writing, and always likes to downgrade the protagonist and never highlight it. His fans also like to talk about things that are logically okay, but in reality, what readers see is that the protagonist is always the one who is underwhelmed. I raised this issue in the last book and said that the progress would be so slow sooner or later. As a result, his supporter, the operator, was still unconvinced and argued with me for hundreds of floors. After the eunuch finally came out, I went back to @him with a screenshot of my previous comment and got angry and banned me. (I don't know if the operator has become desensitized to this author after so many years. I feel that the people who can become fans of this author are those who are not very old and have no reading experience. As far as I know, the operator still prepares his own dry food)

Tens of millions of code words, not a single one is finished I am still a novice after returning

Byd If you feed your brains to Ai, it can write better plots than you😅

The author's previous two books basically had a very novel power system, which looked very awesome and could be said to be infinitely awesome in the future. However, he kept developing new systems. How about some small innovations, taking branch lines, changing lanes immediately after less than a third of the way through, and repeating the cycle. That's it. As long as you can overtake in corners, the more you write, the more fun you will be. Hey, he didn't. He immediately formed his strength and started to fight with the big boss. It's like foreplay, developing various new routines, starting a family, and then starting the main show. The person died directly. This feeling, the accumulated accumulation will never be used, and the eunuch will be released as soon as it is released. This is the core writing idea of ​​this author. New readers can figure it out.

Based on my experience in subscribing to this cs author's previous book, the author loves to make the protagonist lustful. Several chapters can be written about the protagonist's lust. It is probably because I have a brilliant idea and then there is no follow-up, and the protagonist is frustrated in the high-end game, so I don't have to work hard to find the hard work. And in order to show my operational capabilities, I only like to use garbage abilities. I don't use good systems, so I just like to play with garbage abilities. How much of the evil spirit system was developed in the previous book? I just love playing with that crappy salted fish 🤗 The most important thing is that this CS gadget is a eunuch!

I hope there will be no eunuchs this time, resentment from the magical race's time travel and dimension eroder

The author likes to write about the fantasy of the protagonist. He writes several or even a dozen chapters, all of which are the highlight moments of the protagonist. But in fact, everything has just started. He just created a new document and filled in the rest slowly. The problem is that time passes very slowly. The full text has more than 200 chapters and more than 800,000 words. It seems that it has been less than a year since the protagonist traveled through time to the latest chapter, and the protagonist's imagination is completely unrealized. , The difference between imagination and reality is too serious, giving people a very divided feeling. It is clear that the protagonist is so wise and powerful in the first dozen chapters, killing gods when gods block, and killing Buddhas when Buddha blocks Buddha. In the next chapter, we see that the protagonist is still so weak, being crushed by others, and there is no growth in the protagonist at all. It is not fun at all. It all relies on novel settings to attract readers. There is no actual content at all. The whole book is all the imagination of the protagonist.

This author's old habit seems to have happened again. I can guess what will happen next as soon as I read the beginning. The complex and cumbersome settings of the extraordinary system are constantly superimposed, and it is purely explanatory. Normal novels are plot stories with a world view added. This author likes to add a plot to the world view setting. Moreover, the plot advances too slowly. Does the protagonist really have no subjective initiative at all? The plot is also seriously filled with water. Many places that don't need to be written have to be watered several times. I originally thought that the infinite flow element would use the characters to advance the plot, but in the end, the protagonist is still enjoying himself. The author is like sleepwalking and writing wherever he wants. At least he also pushed the plot. Now he has completely stopped acting. Don't write books in the future and just buy the setting collection and imagination. Anyway, these are the two things in your book.

How should I put it? There are too many settings and criticisms, and the main plot cannot be pushed forward. It is completely interspersed with the main plot among the criticisms and settings. I am here to read the novel, not to read the complete collection of criticisms + setting collection. Although the consistently invincible and interesting settings are interesting, this way affects the perception.

Regardless of whether the book can be finished or not, if you still want to finish writing a book, the level setting cannot be too high, no more than level 5. Your writing techniques do not support you writing a book of too high a level. Take the fact that you can barely finish Silver. The big level system of Silver is to suffer disasters and add calamity. The actual detailed description is only the first four levels. Among these four levels, Xi Sa has accumulated a lot of accumulation in the first three levels and has little success in the disaster level. It is very satisfying to beat everyone in the disaster level. The dimension is the opposite of this example. The initial level setting is set too high. When you are a eunuch, you are only at level three? The first three levels have been accumulated. Even if you write it down, you will only be at level 4. If you can reach levels 5 and 6, can you reach level 789? You can't even convince yourself. I can't write anymore. But if you look at the levels of silver, the highest level is 5. At level 4, it is the aggressive stage, where you can defeat most opponents and crush them. End of level 5. So compressing the levels will be much better for your writing technique. Finally, let's talk about your book. To be honest, after all these years, I still remember the grades of silver, but I have no impression of the grades in your book at all. Just remember that the protagonist system has a lot of seals? I made a few pumpkins in the second print and started reading them slowly, and gradually I forgot where I was looking. This book was abandoned. Is the comment section for this book the same as before? Finally, I would like to give you a suggestion. Take the time to plan it carefully, set a task for yourself, complete it in as many words and chapters, and divide each stage into mandatory divisions. In this way, even if you exceed the number of words and chapters, you can still know which stage the book is in, instead of being like a headless fly like before. It's very confusing to write, it's painful for you to write, and it's also painful for the readers to read.

The author is the only one in the internet writing circle who can still make money by writing racy and verbose stuff.

How many copies of Eunuch do you have? If you don't subscribe now, it's just a waste of money.

I can't imagine how many books this incredible author has written in the past to make his old fans think that this new book is not bad compared to the past? ? ?

I haven't read it out of distrust of the author. Judging from the book reviews, it's the same as Bailang, with millions of words, but it's still in the early stages and the writing style has declined? Because it shouldn't be, right? The scroll paper book is more imaginative. If the writing is not good, wouldn't it just be a collection of settings?

Predict the author's ending. This book will be a eunuch, and then I will stop writing it.

Record when the author was a eunuch.

Does the author think that the so-called squeezing of goblin orcs and building a factory to refine veterinary medicine is very satisfying? So boring okay. . . This book is worse than the previous one because all the space is wasted on the so-called factory, and the protagonist's strength cannot be improved. There are long and lengthy explanatory texts on building a factory. It's boring to death. In the previous books, water is water, but water has many adventures in different worlds as the protagonist improves his strength. This book is not only about squeezing and building factories, but also doesn't have many adventures in other worlds. . . I don't know what you were thinking, but you slapped your forehead and wrote this thing

An eunuch author who has written several books but has never finished them.

I still think Dimension Corruptor looks good, but it's a pity that Eunuch

180 What's going on? How did you become a bitch?

The author's credibility can't even be opened with a power bank here.

I remember that there was a white-haired woman chasing him at the beginning of the Dimensional Corroder Bailang, which seemed to be the plot. I remember that the cover of the novel at that time was also a sequel to the white-haired woman. I forgot whether I had read it or not. Have you filled the hole? Did the woman show up?

Boss, please. , Let's change a book. I really can't stand this book. I still miss Sha Diaolang and Professor Victor Li.

What's going on? Shui is like this, but he still updates it as he wants, and he won't update it if he doesn't want to.