Magic Cultivator

The old thing is back again. It is produced by Batman. It must be a high-quality product. It continues the consistent writing style of human feelings and sophistication. The upgraded writing is very solid and the basic skills are very strong. How can I put it, judging from the amount of reading I have done as an editor for so many years, this is really a very talented author. , I have never doubted his strength, but I am still worried about whether this book can be completed normally. Before starting the book, Bai Tang told me that this book must be well written. I maintain a wait-and-see attitude, hoping that in this book Bai Tang can really write a new breakthrough and become a god!

The writing feels very good so far. From the planning of the sequence of events to the emotions of the characters, everything is very reasonable so far. It doesn't look like a novice author at all. Very suitable for taste. I hope the author writes well and makes me have the urge to subscribe for the first time. I hope there will be no hydrology later. Don't be afraid of being slow, but be precise. This is what our readers expect.

The writing is concise, the plot is smooth, and the updates are too slow

Lao Bai, I have been following you for several books. It's the end of the month again and I've voted for you. Don't finish your work this time. I'm a eunuch

The author said that he specially arranged a mortgage loan for himself in order not to be imprisoned. Let's see if the mortgage loan lasted for the author.

If the pavement is set well, it cannot be rounded or the subsequent settings are not good settings. The Book of Heaven pointed out earlier that you can get the Six Ding Divine Fire here without risk, and the subplot should be over quickly. The old descriptions of the magic of cultivation have no sense at all, and the strength of cultivation is just a foil. Did Jin Yong write about how exquisite Qiao Feng's cultivation was? The current failings include that the fights are all about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger for instant kills, with no interaction. Tianshu has been taking risk-free opportunities, which makes the plot unattractive. The only highlight of the plot of Liuding Shenhuo is Yang Xun's inner demons. I am the sole author of this book, and after reading it again, I clearly feel that your writing power is far greater in writing about suffering than in writing about success, so you should use your strengths to write about a protagonist who endures hardships and is also interesting enough.

If you stop updating for more than three days, I will use the funds to update a few chapters of quizzes with prizes this month.

Issue an edict to punish yourself and open a trumpet. I am convinced by you. I have at least followed every one of your books. As a result, you have been a eunuch all the way from Wanfa to here. I am really speechless. I have believed you three times. You can't write straight words, so I can stop thinking.

Author, your novel is very interesting, but the weather has been cold recently and the temperature has dropped significantly. You should pay more attention to updating and don't worry about your health.

There are many references to other works, and I found that the author follows the hot trends and then writes them, which lacks some new ideas. I feel that you should not be called Batman, but Wen Chao Gong.

Everyday guides are posted The editor has nothing to say to you You just want to write a grand narrative, but you don't have a good grasp of the scale, and you have already published several books In a hurry to set up a grand scene. I feel like you are the kind of person who loves to add and wants to sew everything in. I don't know how to subtract, the balance of the main story, the completeness of the plot , and the response of the setting are also very important. 🙂

I only watch the female ones, but not the male ones.

Lao Bai, do you feel it? Since the sun came out, the protagonist has been thinking about how to fight the sun instead of growing up. The protagonist's buffs have been stacked up and he can upgrade step by step. There is no bottleneck and no autonomy. There is obviously a book from heaven, but he is completely following the path calculated by the boss. He seems to There is actually no right to choose. The two women were sent here by arrangement. The position of Shaoyang directly anchored his path. So far, I have not seen any actions by the protagonist to escape from the cage. The position of Daozi was also reserved for the gold position. A lot of space is devoted to Yu Shenxiu. Is this a permanent tribute to Bai Yueguang? It is too strange! Liao Bai still remembers that in the beginning, the protagonist had nothing and had to fight for everything by himself. Did he fight for the position of Cat Master and Shaoyang by himself? Xiao Jiang was obviously a proactive person at the beginning of the story, full of desire to climb up. Now he is not angry at being planned by his superiors every day, and is content to be used as a pawn against the sun. The whole main line has undergone a very subtle deviation. In fact, it is a bit similar to when the original book could not continue. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I am. Yes, I can continue writing now, but it is not pleasant 🔨🔨

What are you writing? This was not how I was when I was a demon cultivator.

There are shadows in several books such as Immortal Industry, Demonic Sect and Xuanjian.

Finally achieved enlightenment.

The author lives up to his reputation and is indeed extremely slow. Can't he learn to copy the public?

The bottom line is: The updates are too few and the updates are too slow. Study the first sage, come at every tenth watch, there will be a great Confucian to argue the scriptures for you. In addition, I have read a lot of your books, and I know you quite well. You are a glass-hearted person. Otherwise, it would be unfinished if there were so many thousands of books ordered. From now on, be less glassy and update more. Don't be affected. No matter how eunuch you are, no one will support you.

Was the author sent to a school to detoxify from Internet addiction by his parents? ? ?

No matter how well written each book is by a eunuch, what's the use

Once these two are done and cannot be saved, you can declare it to be completely over. But I think you want to end it early. Updates will become less and less in three days, and then you will continue to stop updating. You have no energy at all.

I found this book by chance and it was quite interesting. Then I learned about the author's rich experience as a eunuch, and I was a little frightened. . .

The author's writing style and setting are all excellent, but as I read, I discovered a problem. The author will spend a lot of words introducing the grandeur of the world and describing the powerful monks. For example, in the plot of the Yin Marriage, 6-7 of the 10 chapters are devoted to describing the unfolding of the world and the calculations of the golden elixir monks against each other, and the protagonist has just reached the sixth level of Qi training. I understand that the author wants to write about the special nature of the protagonist's inheritance and pave the way for his subsequent role in the magic world. But can it be slowly unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist? The author may have learned from Xuanjian's description, but the core of the two books is different. It is about a family cultivating immortality, a group of portraits, and a world of cannibalism. If it were not about the fighting skills of powerful monks, they might be eaten without even knowing what happened. The real protagonist, the Li family, also had the experience of being eaten while growing up. The core of this book is the exciting story of the protagonist fighting monsters and upgrading. In addition, Goldfinger's omniscient setting is destined to prevent the protagonist from being eaten. If so much energy is spent in the early stage to write about the deeds and calculations of these powerful immortals and demons, instead of unfolding them from the perspective of the protagonist, how much patience do readers have to read it? At least I fast forwarded seven or eight chapters. PS: The setting of the cat master in the book has greatly reduced the excitement of Goldfinger's omniscience. I hope the author can see this.

Born, raised and raised as a eunuch, deleted books, blacklisted

So he is just the silent eunuch as always? It's so notorious that no one will dare to read your book in the future.

It's ugly from the moment I choose Daozi. The author's world view is too broad. It's better to go layer by layer.

Why don't you give up and publish twenty chapters in a few months? That's what it means

This time Sinji didn't even issue any edicts, he simply cut off his tail to survive.

My nickname is worthless, but I actually voted for you six times. Just tell me, how many times do you want to thank me?

The early stage is really amazing, the perspective switching is as smooth as a 3D map, and the author is very happy to pick it up at his fingertips. It's a pity that I started to feel uncomfortable when I met a cat, and became a Taoist and completely went wrong. Just like a seed that suddenly grows into a big tree without any intermediate stage, it switches from the waste material upgrade flow to the genius flow. The steps are too big and I don't have the energy to polish the outline. I want to eat a fat man in one bite, but I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry. You have to write a book steadily first to polish the author's reputation before you can write like this. Haste makes waste.