Cultivation: Starting with the Equipment Slot

Even encountering a dog on the roadside would make the protagonist kick it a few times.

They've really run out of things to write about. Does the plot conflict rely entirely on other people's dissatisfaction with the protagonist?

Haha, you'd live 120 years to reach Foundation Establishment, but you'd live 300 years to refine the ingredients for boiling an egg! It's like buying your kid an insurance policy that will be paid out in 200 years! Even the top Nascent Soul sects wouldn't cultivate that kind of thing! And there's no concept of spiritual plant cultivation, so this cultivation world has no sustainability at all!

Damn it, Tencent's anti-piracy measures are getting stronger and stronger these days; I can't even read these 100+ chapters.

I'm speechless. The protagonist always has to encounter some trouble, right?

Chapter 29 is incredibly toxic. The author is probably a sophisticated egoist, the cold-hearted kind, no doubt about it. Is it really that difficult for a martial arts practitioner to provide his own brother with longevity and health-preserving pills? Is it really that difficult to provide his own father with medicine and longevity-enhancing pills? Is he short of money? Why does every chapter have to be incredibly toxic? It's utter garbage.

I noticed a bug before Chapter 70 was released. It is unclear whether the author did this intentionally. When one's alchemy skills reach a state of perfection, any new alchemy formula will start from scratch. The ingredients for the Core Formation Pill will only become increasingly scarce. The protagonist's cheat-like abilities might seem strange to readers.

Haha, the equipment slots are there, but the problem lies with the equipment itself—there's no equipment to use. Isn't that ridiculous? They're deliberately keeping it all under control.

Shortcoming 1. Write less about the characters' eyes. Almost everyone has detailed descriptions of their eyes. Is it really necessary? 2: The main characters' romantic relationships are a bit complicated. 3: The early plot was rather bland, but the later part was quite exciting; however, the pacing wasn't very good.

It's too weak; the data in Chapter 2 is discouraging. I suggest only listing equipment effects, preferably only increasing aptitude and comprehension. Increasing combat power might cause problems later on, since equipment slots will be added later—it's an old trick.