Tech Empire Begins with Transmigrating into The Three-Body Problem

What you wrote is too hard to break. First question: Why would you want to travel through the Three-Body Problem? Isn't the goal to acquire technology and then use it to develop the real world? What's the key point? It's developing the real world. You wrote 300 pages of The Three-Body Problem. That's a complete misunderstanding of priorities.

The plot's inertia in linking Ye Wenjie to The Three-Body Problem is a major flaw; knowing the plot, one should find a way to kill Ye Wenjie.

It's only a matter of time before Earth is discovered by the Trisolarans, and what the protagonist needs to do is postpone the time when Earth is exposed. Okay, the protagonist's motivation to advance the main plot is now clear. First, the protagonist can travel between worlds and is safe in the Trisolaran world.

In the original Three-Body Problem novel, besides locking down the collider, the Sophon only had the ability to monitor and cause trouble (cosmic flash), and had almost no destructive power. But in reality, I believe that the sophon itself is a destructive weapon, which, if used properly, could easily destroy the Earth.

Earthlings in the Sword-wielding stage are not worth saving.

He died from the poisoning. The most toxic part of this book isn't the inexplicable technological advancements. The problem lies in the poor character development and terrible plot writing. The following drama... Love wasn't the most vicious part; they knew all along that the Red Coast Project had problems. Yes, Ye has entered the project and sent a signal. (The protagonist...)

From the author's perspective, the arrival of the Three-Body Problem is inevitable, but before that, the author can do many things, so the protagonist doesn't care whether the original plot is followed (ignoring the protagonist's role) and just writes according to the plot, which is much easier!

How to put it? The development is all wrong. First of all, you don't have that much time to waste. You need a core to support the transformation of the entire human civilization. How fast technological civilization develops depends not on the foundation, but on the development of the species' brains within the civilization itself. You have to keep up with the pace.

He wrote about 300 pages of *The Three-Body Problem*, then all the knowledge he learned from it was wiped clean. The system even rewarded him with two minor technological advancements he had acquired. He couldn't take it anymore; he was truly a monster among monsters.

I looked through the table of contents and still don't understand what you're rambling on about. Is this book about traversing various worlds and then feeding back the technology of the main world? Or is it a Three-Body Problem fanfiction? If you're going to write about the heavens, then plan the heavens and change the title and synopsis.