Wuxia Heavens: From the Start, I'm Hengshan's Young Sect Leader

Just don't let the troubled times happen. The time when you are proud of the world is not in troubled times.

How should I put it, this setting is not very good. Take nuns into a monk's temple and wait to be killed by crickets. If a nunnery accepts a man, the entire nunnery will become unclean in other people's mouths.

The biggest problem with this book is that a man standing on the ceiling is supposed to be a Taoist with a single-minded pursuit of Taoism as his core. He can follow his heart in various worlds, add variables to stir up the plot, and at the same time realize Taoism and practice. As a result, a lot of pen and ink was spent on describing some women, and the characters were completely ruined, and they had to be carried with them wherever they went. The position that was supposed to be formed by the strong would attract the weak, and then the protagonist would take the initiative to hook up with her. . ? Isn't this nonsense? It can be said that if you delete those meaningless plots related to women, and mention in one or two sentences why they gathered around the protagonist for some reason, such as feeding demons with your body, or for various purposes, etc., And finally just take advantage of the situation and put it aside, focus on the protagonist's pursuit of enlightenment in the world of heaven, and stir up the world with casual actions. The results of this book should be much better, and it will not be a level 1 author with almost 2 million words.

Chapter 2: I am alone in the wild providing disaster relief. No one is fighting for the hungry people to maintain order. Is this describing a scene in a dream? Let alone ancient times, it is unlikely now

How dare one go to give out porridge! Seeing someone giving porridge, the hungry people didn't dare to get it! It's time to get the porridge, and it's in good order! ! ! ! ! The author didn't know how to write. He couldn't write anything for a day, and then he knew...

When I first saw the title of the book, I thought it was Hengshan Sword Immortal.

If this book was a good book 50 years ago, it is a bit outdated now. It has a pure Jin Yong flavor.

It is an exception for Master Dingxian to accept a male disciple. It is better for you to accept a bunch of them and slap the master's face. Others are nunneries. You must know that in ancient nunneries, men were very taboo about entering. No matter how much others value you, they will not be able to accept more male disciples. If all the lay male disciples live in the mountains, those monks will be drowned by the spit of the world.

The writing is good, but it feels a bit indescribable. Has it been polished with AI? Many of the descriptions are bland and repetitive, and the same goes for the emotional stability side, but isn't this a point girl, and it's not a tomato, so I'm not sure.

After taking a look at the introduction, I was a little confused. Does the author really know the meaning of the words "Kenshin Tongmei"? Do you know the gold content of the word "transparent"? You have finished refining yourself with jade liquid and have understood your true nature? Then wouldn't the next step be to calm the fetal breath, make the mind alive and dead, meet the dragon and the tiger, have sympathetic temperament, return seven times and nine times, use lead to make mercury, and the great elixir will be completed?