If You Are in Emei, Get the Golden Entry at the Beginning

How long has it been laying the groundwork before it's over? Is it possible to wait until the protagonist Tianren defeats the boss? Just practice every day 😅

Everything I've read so far is pretty good, although I haven't read Gu Long's original work! Looking at it as a fiction, the plot is very well written to my liking! I feel like it's better among traditional martial arts! Author, please write

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When I watched Yitian back then, I felt that Ji Xiaofu was not in her right mind, and Jue Mie didn't realize where she was wrong. The most annoying thing was the QJ criminal Yang Xiao. When I saw him, I skipped the plot (it also has something to do with the person who played him). In the later period, Zhou Heihua's discomfort was also caused by Zhang Wuji. Why did Zhou let Zhang treat him like that and not Heihua.

I thought that your mental method has four levels in total, and the basic level is small and complete, but you told me that it is the first level of the mental method, the basic level, small and complete, 6666. I can't stand it.

Do you know why Wu Zong can't write well? There is no good because of the background and the influence on the original work For example, the Swordsman Huashan Sect in the article and the Huashan Sect among the six sects. If the two sects are together, will they really not fight? The names are all the same There is also the world's number one Iron Dan God Monkey. I am not the one to tell you how to attract stars. In the case of Iron Dan God Marquis, are you sure he won't be interested in Yitian Sword? The biggest problem with Zong Wu is that he has not thought about the changes in the plot Jianghu is a place where life and death are fought. There is a sect that has declined. It has profound martial arts, but there is no change. It is the same as in the original work. Only those in the original work will have thoughts about it.

It's so boring behind the scenes, no matter where the gossip comes from, martial arts are about doing justice!

There are some minor poisonous points in the early stage, but it's harmless In the middle stage, the writing is online, the logic is normal, and the character description is not bad The problem later is that the author is now starting to get into trouble, that is, he overemphasizes the contradiction between good and evil, which often leads to him becoming the kind of annoying absolutely righteous person Only look at birth, not behavior You inherently evil Uchiha brat 21st century bloodline novels are also painful to some extent.

The plot is getting more and more boring. It's better to stop recruiting girls. There are already six or seven. Write more plots.

I don't understand that the protagonist goes through so much just to hire a bodyguard. The author writes about Wen Ruian's background and the beautiful women are prettier than those these days. Also, don't write about poison. If poison was so effective, Hu Qingniu's wife would already be among the best in the world. And has the author forgotten how the first book became a hit? The poisoning scene that you think is very pretentious seems very embarrassing to me. I came to watch the martial arts fight, not to see the poisoning scene.

In Zhao Min's original love story, the whole family betrayed Zhang Wuji. Isn't Zhou Zhiruo strong enough to become a villain? You were the first one I saw in the harem story about killing Zhao Min.

You must not have read "The Legend of Yitian Sword" carefully. The article clearly stated that Miyue knew the secret of Yitian Sword and informed Zhou Zhiruo. Later, Zhang Wuji retrieved the Dragon-Slaying Sword from Binghuo Island, but Zhou Zhiruo cut each other with the swords, broke the swords, and stole the "Nine Yin Manual". Author, please read the original work carefully.

Anything that the protagonist gets can make him a master if given to others, but if the protagonist gets them all, everything is loose. The hang-up is huge, and the combat power is suppressed. The protagonist's aura is correct, and the villains are all facial expressions to reduce intelligence.

Ever since Gong Ziyu became Zhu Houzhao, things have changed. Everything is weird, and it smells like a primary school student's plot. The royal family has not seen any grand operations. It has been decades since the Qigong Absorption Dafa was acquired. The royal family has not yet seen a few heavenly beings or dozens of first-class people cultivated by the royal family. Two countries that can unite themselves should fight against each other first instead of fighting another civil strife to gain benefits. And whenever the major sects know that the royal family has a way to absorb martial arts, they will immediately attack them in groups. This pure martial arts means treating the major sects like pigs. Even if the Jianghu sect couldn't think of it, wouldn't someone who wants to be an emperor think of killing someone with a borrowed knife? When it comes to the emperor, something is wrong, just like Li Xunhuan, with a bit of a turtle. The airs of Fengyun are right there, let's try to set them up a little bit, the country will be changed to a continent, the emperor will be changed to a gang leader, first golden, then yellow and then into Fengyun, it will be smooth and smooth. The early BOSS Gong Ziyu, the middle BOSS Xiang Yutian, the late BOSS Emperor Shitian, and then the end of the Qianqiu Catastrophe.

Okay, okay, the subject matter of Master Shitai is novel, but the young man's words are a bit dense, so please be more precise.

Zhou Zhiruo (Eternal Dragon Slayer 2003, played by Gao Yuanyuan)

I laughed when I saw 12-year-old Zhou Zhiruo going down the mountain with a wooden sword to try and fight the bandits! Is this Jianghu? ? ? Are you sure you're not playing house? ? ? In the war in the Warring States Village next door, the militiamen also knew how to use a long sharpened bamboo pole as a spear to poke a hole, catch fish and save their lives! You, a girl, used a wooden sword to chop people with each other in the film. Do you think you didn't want to die quickly enough? Uchiha Fugaku is applauding you! Uchiha Itachi laughed, "It turns out daddy loves me."

When I first read the book review, I didn't want to read this book. It was criticized a lot, but since I was short of books, I decided to read it casually, and then I came across the latest chapter. What can I say, the author may be overly interested in showing off his writing skills, with long paragraphs of descriptions of the environment, and descriptions of the characters' clothing and appearance, so much so that if I spend one dollar to subscribe to a chapter, I can only see ten cents of content. One glance and ten lines are not enough to describe my reading speed. 1.8 Million words only lasted me a day and a half. There is no need to know that, although these descriptions make the characters fuller, there is really no need to describe the appearance and environment over and over again. Then there are not as many major poisons as there are minor poisons in the plot. The so-called minor poisons vary from person to person. For some people, they are minor poisons, but for others, they may not be minor poisons at all. The plot is also quite smooth. It doesn't abuse the protagonist, it doesn't give away the girl, and it's not necessary to kill someone who doesn't like it (Qin Mengyao), and it's very good and refreshing. The protagonist has a righteous outlook on things, is not a virgin, is decisive in killing, and has a firm stand (Speaking of this, I saw some book reviews saying that the protagonist is overly righteous or something, but in fact, he is not. He kills those who deserve to be killed and ignores those who should be ignored. I can only say that his stance is very upright. He was born in Emei, and was protected by Emei when he was young. When he becomes awesome, there is nothing wrong with thinking and handling problems and conflicts from Emei's standpoint). Again, it's very good and refreshing. So, this book is worth reading as a casual read, provided you can tolerate the author's long paragraphs of useless descriptions. Although, please update quickly.

Why is it a mixed martial arts show? The plot of the show is completely inconsistent. The beginning is that Zhang Sanfeng has been out for ten years, and people think that the only anti-Yuan Mingjiao left in the world that the old man killed in the past sixty years is the Mingjiao. Now, you have the Sun and Moon God Cult, and the show is lonely, so it's better not to get rid of it.

The most disgusting way to write a fight without any sense of time. Author, please write less! That would be so disgusting. After finishing the sentence, the action of fighting has not been completed yet! How come a fight lasts for more than one second? Then don't write it. I, an ordinary person, am invincible in it, and my martial arts skills are rubbish.

There are some things that I am not happy to say. I am currently reading about chapter 60, and the plot is the part where the protagonist is attacked while saving Yang Yan. Since I haven't watched much martial arts, the following is just my humble opinion. Looking at the author's writing, I feel that if the rescuer was not the protagonist, and he was replaced by someone who was not so careful or not very skilled in martial arts, it would be possible to explain that. I read two more chapters, and Yang Yan's father Yang Tie didn't say anything after that, and the protagonist and the people from the Emei sect didn't pursue it further. Is it because the background is martial arts, so this kind of thing can be laughed off? It wouldn't matter if word like this got out that every time the protagonist saves someone, someone would sneak attack him. No one would hold him accountable afterwards. If the sneak attack succeeds, the purpose is achieved. If he doesn't, there would be no consequences if he waits for the next time. One more thing, if it was someone else who was directly attacked and killed by Yang Yan, would Yang Tiefeng have said a few words to a bodyguard who has been around for many years and Yang Yan's father? But why didn't he say that the protagonist was attacked? Just because the protagonist has not been harmed, he doesn't say anything? A man saves your daughter, but if your daughter succeeds, she may die in a sneak attack, but you don't even say anything about the scene afterwards? The same thing is said about the Emei Sect. Uncle Insulation, as the person in charge at the time, was not present at the time of the attack. But will she understand the situation afterwards? If she does not understand the situation, she is incompetent as the person in charge (from the perspective of the Emei School, because of the identity of the protagonist, if she does not understand the situation, it is a serious malfeasance.), If she understands the situation, shouldn't she express it? Later, a disciple of the Emei Sect was almost killed in a surprise attack while rescuing others. She couldn't hold him accountable afterwards because neither the direct disciples of the headmaster nor the next generation of headmasters held him accountable. Why should you hold him accountable? It's the feeling that Zigong redeems people and Zilu receives cattle. Who will save people after a long time? The cost of saving people is greatly increased. Not only do they have to face the bad guys, but they also have to prevent the rescued people. Considering these things now, I feel that martial arts shouldn't be like this. The above only represents my personal views. Please forgive me if this offends me.

At the beginning, it was too much about the golden entry of Master Shitai. It was disappointing that the heroine did not die out.

Are all those who write about martial arts a bit literary or something? You have to have trouble with human traffickers. Isn't killing someone worse than reselling people? If you have such a sense of justice, why don't you kill everyone who has killed anyone (let's destroy the world)

The author's overall writing is good. He develops martial arts and revitalizes the sect in the early stage, and introduces the general Jianghu structure. The writing of several early plots is also okay, and the protagonist's character is established. But for those who read martial arts plots since childhood, there is still a little bit left. In my heart, the martial arts world is about wandering around the world with one person and one sword, meeting different people and different things, having a drink this morning and getting drunk today, encountering different plots and all kinds of pretense, fighting with various masters, communicating, drinking and becoming friends or enemies, and there are many beauties along the way. A world where a sect like the protagonist protects the world does seem a bit awkward, haha, my humble opinion. The protagonist knows the general plot, and because of his talent, most of the plots in the early stage are related to martial arts training. Some of the key climaxes of the plots are wonderfully written, but the latest plot, Wudang Night Change, is a soy sauce. I don't know what to think. However, I am still looking forward to it recently. I am in the middle of writing. Judging from the foreshadowing, I have to write about plots and characters from different countries. The protagonist's martial arts is gradually getting better, and he is ready to start playing. In martial arts and martial arts, I am definitely looking forward to various plots and characters. The protagonist's character is well written, but the other characters are not much better. Right now, Master Miejie, Zhang Zhenren, and Gu Santong are all good and flesh-and-blood. Others, including the two heroines, are very different. Next, I hope that the plot of Li Tanhua will be more exciting. Looking forward to other mixed martial arts characters: Four Eyebrows, Baiyun City Lord, Ximen Chuixue, A Fei (Lin Qing'er playing with dogs), Xie Xiaofeng, Yan Shisan, Chu Liuxiang, Ding Peng, Fu Hongxue, Xiao Yuer and Hua Wuque, Shuanglong, Evil King, Yinhou, Tiandao, Wanwan, Shi Qingxuan, Chuanying, Jin Shiyi, Zhang Danfeng, Lian Nishang (I mentioned three thousand feet white hair before, I don't know if that's true), Guan Qi, Xiao Qiushui, Yan Kuangtu, Li Chenzhou, Zhuge Zhengwo, the Four Famous Catchers, Qiao Feng, Dugu Qiubai, Wei Xiaobao, I don't know if there will be Fengyun characters. If there are, it is expected to be in the later stage. The last and most anticipated one is Dog Brother. Needless to say, the gold content of this role. The protagonist should be the first among the young people. There is no pressure. Whether it is friends or enemies, they are Lao Deng. There is no competitor or confidant like in martial arts. Of course, Dog Brother is not easy to write. If it is written according to the original text, it will be too powerful and it will overwhelm the protagonist. If it is too weak, it will be criticized. It depends on whether the author dares 😜. Not only the protagonist of the martial arts variety show is brilliant (this author did it), but also the various well-known characters, characters, and villains. The words written in front of Pang Ban are the same as the symbols. I wish the author will become a great god soon, book friends from QQ

Linghu Chong died after more than 400 chapters, what's the point of bringing him out again? Is it Linghu Chong who has become an incarnation outside the body, or is it that he has become so NB that he can fish people out of the river of time?

I don't mean to interfere with the author. I have fully subscribed to the monthly ticket and voted for a few. I have counted more than ten recommended tickets. I have read them carefully. The writing style and the rhythm that I occasionally like every day are good. I think the author said that he actually writes quite fast. The reason why he can't update on time is because he wants to write more accurately and rewrite the concept again and again. This is the main problem of slow updates. As an old bookworm for more than ten years, I will comment on the main level copy. In fact, everyone wants to read it. A little, even if it is a little less, 3 updates are always stronger than 2, and the plot in the mind is re-conceived again and again, and the plot is incoherent. We readers read two chapters a day, which is really not enough. For real authors, believe me, as long as you update quickly enough, you can update 3.4 Or even 5 chapters a day. You have a great scholar to argue for you. I hope you can maintain or even better updates. Your writing process is smooth, and we are comfortable watching it. The plot is coherent and smooth. Then I will give you a monthly pass later, I hope you can add more chapters

Chapter 33: I couldn't hold back when I saw the author saying that he was writing a book based on Baidu Encyclopedia

There are too many private settings, and the internal power should be divided into original internal power and ordinary internal power.

I really can't stand it after seeing more than 600 chapters. It was originally a plug-in martial arts upgrade to fight monsters. Occasionally there are some new ideas in the early stages. More than 400 chapters later. It becomes a flow of a group of soldiers fighting monsters under the leadership of the protagonist. The number of water words at the beginning of the whole process

One of the must-read books for this type of novel is Song Qingshu