I Want to Become a Beast Tamer

I think you should talk about why the protagonist chose the undead type and whether there are any special personal feelings involved. Instead of saying this, you repeatedly mentioned that the undead system is very boring without a big environment. It feels like the protagonist is purely trying to invert the strength of a trash type, which is very shallow and deliberate.

Investigation report: "No." -693 Investigation target: "I Want to Become a Master of Beast Control" - Male Protagonist - [Chiming] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 3, 2026

The writing is quite good, the style is very relaxed, and it is quite interesting to concentrate on the evolution of beast control. I hope it can maintain this style. Don't be like the old timers who write about participating in beast control competitions or fighting monsters in secret realms to level up. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I don't know what the world is. I found that the readers who came to watch the evolution of beast control had their scores cut in half and became eunuchs. Come on.

There are too many descriptions of concepts and world views, not enough in one day, it's too dry.

The setting of this book is interesting and rich in thinking. Unfortunately, the author cannot grasp the combination of setting and plot. There are too many flat narratives and too few ups and downs. The setting takes over the center and the plot is dull. All in all, it's watchable, but hardly interesting. Probably a 6 points.

To be honest, there is still a certain threshold for this book. If you don't understand these jokes and haven't played related games, it will be difficult for new readers to continue reading. There are too many settings in the early stage. There is a lack of space for the reader to take a breath. . . My eyes hurt when I read it😣

The Tindalos hound has nothing to do with dogs. It is something with no fixed shape. It is called a hound only because of its habit of chasing prey like a hound without stopping. Just like a crocodile is also called a swamp puppy. Can it change from a dog? The evolution of a dog into a Tindalos hound is the same as the evolution of a bug into a tiger. Can a "big bug" be the same as a bug? 😳

Nowadays, readers are very eager for quick success and quick success, and they hope for an intuitive sense of satisfaction and a clear story line when reading novels. You always want to hide something, and reversal for the sake of reversal is destined to discourage a large number of readers 🙂 Take your golden finger for example. I have read more than ten chapters and I don't know what effect you want to write, so I am definitely too lazy to pursue it anymore.

I don't know how the author arranged the follow-up plot of his book. He has been cultivating beasts. What is the position of the protagonist, a researcher? 300,000 words. I also admire the author for writing so many words on just a few characters and a few fixed locations. Now that I see it, I feel a little tired from reading, too dry. You have designed a beast-controlling world, but the map has not been opened. In the big world, only the school map has been opened, and not all schools have been opened. Of the three places of Graveyard, Dragon Beast, and Bird, Graveyard has more written about it, but nothing else is known about other places. The most important thing is that in beast-controlling novels, especially original beast-controlling novels, the beasts must be deeply impressed on readers. So far, I have not had much impression of the protagonist's beast-controlling. I can't remember the name of the tomb dog, but I can only remember a few easy-to-remember ones, Meimei Tutu Youyouxiaohuo. There are a lot of basic things that are not given. For example, I don't know much about the protagonist's family situation. His parents seem to have gone to explore a secret place, and there are other relatives, but not much information is given. I don't even know where the protagonist I sleeps at night. He may default to a dormitory or a research site. There is too much information that needs to be added to the worldview that has not been given. For example, whether there are competitions, whether there are competitive activities for pet beasts, and what related industries are around pet beasts, none of them are known. I have been doing two-point and one-line research, studying with one or two professors and my third senior sister. I don't understand any other information except research.

Single and more than nothing? Personally, I feel that the heroine of the beast-control novel is easy to overshadow the main role, mainly looking at various pets. This is purely a personal opinion without guidance. I just want to confirm.