I Want to Become a Beast Tamer

Investigation Report: "Number" - 693 Subject of the survey: Male protagonist of "I Want to Become a Master Beast Tamer" - [Chi Ming] Survey results: [Reincarnation] Criteria for judgment: Abnormal traits: Transmigration Investigators, as the name suggests, are professionals who investigate and record the transmigration situations of transmigrators.

I think you should explain why the protagonist chose the Necromancer class, and whether there were any special personal feelings involved. Instead of addressing these points, you repeatedly emphasize that the Necromancer class is meaningless without a broader context. It feels like the protagonist is simply trying to reverse the power of a weak class, which feels superficial and contrived.

Having read up to chapter 133, I only have 30 chapters left to catch up. Here are my personal thoughts, not meant as guidance, just my observations. 1. The way settings or explanations are inserted between dialogues is unbalanced. Looking at the bigger picture, I saw dialogue 1 in the first chapter, but only saw the corresponding dialogue 2 in the fourth.

It's quite well-written, with a lighthearted style. The focus on beast taming and evolution is also quite enjoyable. Hopefully, you can maintain this style and avoid becoming like the older authors who, after a hundred chapters or so, suddenly ditched the main storyline with beast taming battles, leveling up in dungeons, or engaging in other tedious activities.

There's too much focus on concepts and world-building; updating too little each day makes it too dry.

The setting of this book is interesting and rich in thinking. Unfortunately, the author cannot grasp the combination of setting and plot. There are too many flat narratives and too few ups and downs. The setting takes over the center and the plot is dull. All in all, it's watchable, but hardly interesting. Probably a 6 points.

The protagonist's harem consists of twin sisters, 🪵🐶.

I wonder how the author plans the plot of his book. Will he just keep raising and taming beasts? What is the protagonist's role? A researcher? I admire the author for writing so many words about just a few characters and a few fixed locations. 300,000 Words. I'm starting to feel tired from reading this far; it's too dry. You designed a world of beast taming, but the map isn't open.

To be honest, this book has a certain barrier to entry. If you don't understand these references or haven't played the related games, it will be difficult for new readers to continue reading. Too much setup was added in the beginning. There wasn't enough time for the reader to catch their breath... It hurt my eyes reading it! 😣

I feel like there's no specific description of the ability to freely switch back from the evolved form. Also, to be honest, even if there were a description, it would be strange. Generally speaking, evolution should be at the level of a life leap, so how can it be a case of autonomous evolution and degeneration? Is this just for adding to the entry?