Shinto Law

This book currently sees the King of Hell trying to reestablish reincarnation, and the diary of a black-blooded Taoist appearing in the world. The overall look and feel is good. The protagonist is a time traveler. Unlike other time travel novels, the identity of the time traveler is not a secret worth hiding in this world where Shinto, Immortal Way, and technology are intertwined. Instead, he has received official "auspicious beast" subsidies. It can be seen that the author is very good at depicting the "human" side of the characters through realistic and life-like descriptions, and depicting the "inhuman" side of the characters through fantasy and magical martial arts-style descriptions. The contrast between the two creates a comic effect of humorous contrast. For example, the King of Hell has a high level of cultivation, but he deceives people into taking loans and getting money first. The protagonist is a talented Shinto priest who can communicate with gods and catch ghosts, but he also has to ride a small electric donkey. The description of people in the article is closer to real people than masks, which is a reflection of the author's experience and observation of life. The density of jokes in the article is not too much and not too little, and it is also well controlled. As long as you get the main line right, it's a good story. Being able to be the founder of a small genre means that you really have someone to work with. I can say that it is a pity that the book on Wrong Practicing Magical Skills was late, and the book on Dreaming did not strike while the iron was hot, so the readers did not gather together. Returning to this book, I personally think that it is the close-to-life aspect of the novel that makes readers feel more involved. Write more and love to read!

Have you ever been a Shinto priest? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Come on, Stone Old Demon's stories are all good. Don't learn from those mindless articles that pretend to be more than slap in the face, the starting point is the same. This old bookworm is so disgusting.

At the 16th chapter of this book, the story is too scattered and the characters come out very randomly. The protagonist is invisible

First, the pace is too slow. I've read Chapter 17 and still don't understand what the protagonist is doing. I can see from these words that you really want to set the stage, but at the moment, I don't have any intention. When I read on, the pace is too slow and not compact enough. Second, the story description is too scattered. Often when describing one thing, it suddenly switches to describing another thing, which is often your case. Before you finish describing something, you turn to describe other things, which makes people confused. Of course there is this way of writing, but it is not written like this. Your span is too big, and you are not talking about you. I have seen this chapter 17. I have seen it many times. You use this way of writing. This way of writing is often used to describe a big event before turning to description, and the other is to pave the way for this big event. In order to describe this big event, set him up or pave the way for him, or give him some other things, instead of you not paving the way for the big event, it is completely two things, or you may pave the way for the following chapters, but if you write it like this, it will make people have no desire to read, and there will be no more things to come. It's very, very good, but it may be a problem with your combination. It looks a bit uncomfortable Of course there are good things, that is, your setting is really good, and the world view is probably okay. Although I don't know some advanced routes at the moment, I can probably tell that it is indeed a setting that you have worked hard to think about or you bought the setting. But it is undeniable that your setting is very good. If you write it well, it will become popular.

I've read more than ten chapters and the cheats haven't come out yet.

The protagonist has always had little strength, and looks vacuous

I've read more than a dozen chapters, but I still can't figure out what the main plot is. It's boring.

I feel like if this author doesn't publish thirty or forty chapters, he might become famous again like Qian Jibaan.

Eunuch again? There isn't even a single chapter this time?

There are so many chapters. I don't know what to write. The protagonist is always in a passive state. I wrote earlier that the protagonist is awesome. He is the first person to graduate and has amazing grades in all subjects. As a result, things become more and more serious later. The protagonist can only be passively beaten, and he can't even find his natal god.

Science and metaphysics, reality and myth, the more we look at it, the weirder it becomes and I am speechless 😥

What a Shinto priest! It's just a different skin between Zhengyi and Quanzhen. Quanzhen cultivates immortality and is a god. Those who cultivate immortality use novels as a system, and those who cultivate gods refer to the cultivation tools of immortality novels. The natal god, the natal weapon.

I wish my new book will sell well and I wish I can sign the contract as soon as possible.

Inexplicably, the owner of the Fiji Cup has a lot more descriptions. The characters appear as they please.

So far, so good, high-grade grain

520 Sea Wolf actually didn't ask for leave

The writing style is there, but it's better to push the main line quickly. It's understandable, but it's not fun to follow.

Love to watch 😍

When will the protagonist meet the black-blooded Taoist? I am very curious about what the scene will be like 😁

It's well written and has its own ideas

My friend, your writing is too messy and the plot is too complicated.

Not bad, but there are too many typos

How many time-travelers? Is this the King of Hell? Please explain what he is going to do with this character. He is very uncomfortable to be neither up to down nor down.