Monthly Settlement: My Talents Can Be Upgraded Without Limit

It's above average in terms of resources, and I don't see any major flaws, but I'm getting a bit tired after reading 230 chapters, so I'll hold off for now. There are quite a few typos, and don't ask why there's no level; it's all due to the mysterious 14-day magic.

Folding a piece of paper 103 times exceeds the diameter of the observable universe, and the value of ×2 increases as you go further. But you're multiplying it by 4! The 6 talent fragments needed for a one-star planting talent become 24 talent fragments for a two-star talent. And what's with this talk of infinite talent upgrades? Besides, the protagonist has more than one talent.

The plot is too thin. While idiotic plots are generally disgusting to readers, they're the quickest and easiest way for most authors with limited writing skills to create such stories. If the author could introduce some minor plot conflicts, it would be better. Otherwise, the pure farming/development is too bland, and readers might start to feel like they're waiting for more characters to join in.

You just finished refining a weapon for someone, and they want to spar with you using their new weapon? They don't even treat you like a human being.

Which grade of magic weapon can be used to deal with which type of enemy? Even the latest late-stage Foundation Establishment cultivator can easily kill them. Let's introduce a new setting: even a Core Formation or Foundation Establishment cultivator using a magic weapon equivalent to a Qi Refining Peak cultivator can't kill a Qi Refining Peak cultivator.

After reading over two hundred chapters, I feel that the interaction between the protagonist and Song Qiaoqiao is too little. There haven't been any sweet moments, and suddenly they're about to become Daoist partners. Song Qiaoqiao's character is also very one-dimensional (a descendant of the Golden Core cultivator, with average alchemy skills and large breasts), and she doesn't leave much of a impression. Will things get better later on?

The protagonist is really popular with women. Most of the plot revolves around his cultivation and crafting of elixirs and magical artifacts, with only a small portion devoted to his interactions with those women.

It's too bland and the pacing is slow. Actually, the writing is alright, but I put it down after a while and have no desire to pick it up again.

Over 50 pages. The beginnings were a bit rambling, and the characters only started interacting in the last few pages. Can I keep writing like this?

I noticed a few points that made me feel very comfortable as soon as I started watching. Firstly, there's the logic behind combining game talents with reality. Take the planting talent, for example. It's normal in the game, but it's incredibly abstract in reality.