Cultivating Immortality in a Supernatural World, Starting with Talisman-Making

I would like to ask the author why the protagonist has to refine the elixir himself. Wouldn't it be better to buy it from others and then synthesize it? Does it have to be made by oneself in order to synthesize it? It is unreasonable and unreasonable.

With this golden finger, I hope the plot of the sect is not included in the future. It's too cookie-cutter.

Cultivation of Immortals and Farming Style "Gathering Crowds to Become Immortals"

It's not bad, nothing bad. A few suggestions 1. It's too bland, even the conflict is very bland, not very attractive, it can be written with more ups and downs. 2. Now that there is a heroine, Se Se can be involved, which can increase the attraction. 3. The emotional scenes can only be said to be barely adequate, and they can be strengthened 4. The monsters and monsters are one of the highlights of this book, but they are still too bland, neither scary nor weird. You can write the trick in more detail.

I could still accept the writing style at the beginning, but now there are dozens of them and they haven't improved at all?

I feel like the current means are a bit lacking.

Invite Taoist friends to test the poison of "Immortal Tribulation One", which has 400,000 words and is free. It has a single female protagonist and is a mortal. She is absolutely brainless. The protagonist has a Tao fruit that can swallow the spiritual roots of heaven and earth. She is reborn but has lost her memory. The road to find her life experience is full of twists and turns, and she finally fights with the immortal half-child.

It looks great😊The author, please stop being a eunuch and add more updates soon

Pretty good. It's true if it's plain and simple, but it still makes it interesting because of the weird elements.

At the beginning, there are a lot of things that can't be imagined.