Cultivating Immortality in a Supernatural World, Starting with Talisman-Making

Author, I have a question: why does the protagonist insist on refining pills himself? Wouldn't it be better to buy them from others and then synthesize them? Does he absolutely have to refine them himself to synthesize them? It doesn't make sense at all!

With this cheat-like ability, I hope there won't be a plot point where the character joins a sect later on; it's too cliché.

Cultivation and Farming Genre: Gathering Crowds to Become an Immortal

It's pretty good, no major flaws. Here are a few suggestions 1. It's too bland. Even the conflicts are written in a bland way and lack appeal. It could be written with more ups and downs. 2. Now that there's a female lead, we can get some erotic content going; that would increase the appeal. 3. The romance scenes were barely passable and could be improved.

I could accept the writing style at the beginning, but now that there are dozens of pages, it hasn't improved at all?

I feel like our current methods are somewhat lacking.

Fellow Daoists, please try my novel "Immortal Tribulation I" (仙劫一). It's already 400,000 words long and all free. It features a single female lead, a mortal-centric story, and is definitely not mindless. The protagonist possesses a Dao Fruit capable of devouring the spiritual roots of heaven and earth. He is reborn but has lost his memories, facing numerous hardships and setbacks on his journey to find his origins, ultimately culminating in a battle with a half-immortal.

It's great! 😊 Author, please keep up the good work and don't abandon the story! Also, please update more chapters soon!

It's pretty good. Simplicity is the essence of life, but the addition of eerie elements makes it interesting.

From the very beginning, they unconsciously filled in a whole bunch of preconceived notions.