Receiving Daoist Registers and Ascending to Truth, from the Start as a Disciple of Tianpeng

Your protagonist, a member of the Shenxiao Sect, doesn't recite the Thunder Jade Scripture but instead recites the Yin Fu Scripture. He's even been granted the Northern Emperor's Law and claims to be a disciple of the Tianpeng Sect, practicing the Tianpeng Law, and spouting nonsense about Black Laws. Do you even know what the Northern Emperor's Laws are?

It's similar to Tomato's "Arctic Exorcism House," but your protagonist doesn't seem to care much about the Dark Laws.

I'm quite interested in this type of story, but the plot is tedious and full of useless details. For example, the first chapter starts with a long description of the protagonist's past life. You wouldn't find that interesting, would you? For example, the opening plot of summoning the God of Fortune in the synopsis is nowhere to be found even after reading three chapters. The synopsis makes it sound great, but the actual text is completely different.

The story is good, and the premise is quite good, but since the protagonist has a cheat code, he shouldn't be so shocked by everything people say. Show some maturity and keep it up!

I didn't see any dark laws at all. The bald monk created a cultivation method, and the protagonist, a Taoist who claims to be a disciple of Tianpeng, takes it and practices it, showing complete disregard for the precepts! And what other Taoist priest uses dark laws to punish evil and heretical sects? 😅 Dark laws are meant to regulate judges and law enforcers, okay? From the beginning of the book until now, the protagonist hasn't followed any dark laws at all, and he can't even copy properly. 😅

The dark laws described in the book are not followed at all. According to the world view in the book, the protagonist should be taken to the underworld for trial, right? 🙂

Although it is said that "all writing is plagiarism," as long as one can write something original, it is still readable. However, your work is filled with all sorts of "brainless" plots. Shouldn't you also learn about the law? All the original content is filled in by your own imagination and made up, and the made-up content doesn't even hit the mark.

The word "yin" in the Yin Fu Jing (a classic text on Yin and Yang) refers to Yin energy, which completely stunned me.

Anyone with a modicum of intelligence would run for their lives. The protagonist is truly insane; knowing full well there's a serious problem and he's doomed, he insists on getting involved. His master, with his immense power to summon rain, still failed; how can the protagonist, who's only been cultivating for a few days, be so confident he can solve it? Knowing it's a fantasy world, he could have sought out more capable Taoist priests and monks to resolve the issue.

In Chapter 4, the protagonist rescued the child from Butcher Liu's house. The family offered him money as gratitude, but the protagonist refused it—what kind of logic is that? What about being from the same village? If you don't accept money, how will you eat? Breathe air? Drink water? I really want to ask the author: What kind of thought process is this? How did you write it? What kind of logic is this? I can't keep up with the author's pace, so I'm dropping the book.