In Eight Immortals, Starting from the Painted-Skin Ghost

Doesn't the current author know anything about height and weight? Are you 184cm tall and weigh 120kg? Where does the weakling come from to accept it?

Brothers, the heroine must be gorgeous, everyone supports her

It can be seen that the author has a considerable knowledge reserve and literary foundation, but these recent articles have been somewhat unsatisfactory. They seem to be too obsessed with the background description of the protagonist and the various reactions it brings. This can easily bring a relatively negative reading experience to readers. I hope that the author can downplay the background description of the protagonist in the future and enhance the three-dimensional sense of the character itself. I wish the author a lot of ideas and wonderful writing.

You are already one of the Eight Immortals, you are destined to become an immortal, yet you still want to cheat. Do you want to be the Jade Emperor?

If you never forget it, there will be an echo.

Next time when writing about cultivating immortals, don't write about famous people. Han Xiangzi's path has basically been arranged by the higher authorities. It's inappropriate for you to do this.

What can I say... Every chapter name makes me think it is the climax, but it turns out that the chapter name has nothing to do with the plot... This is very troublesome. By the way, there are too many supporting characters that are not connected to the protagonist's plot, so it's not necessary. There are also some words and idioms used indiscriminately. What disgusts me the most is Pu Songling's words. What about Confucius educating his disciples? By the way, since you said that, you still praise it and give it top quality. So here's my question, when the protagonist does something, is he thinking about the reward from the lotus? And merit and virtue? So why does the protagonist get a reward when it comes to his mind and his deeds? There are also people who do good deeds just to become immortals. Why can they become immortals?

I had a headache after reading a few chapters. Maybe I read too many mindless and cool articles. You have become an immortal. How can a branch of a mortal family struggle like this? You can only heal people and save people + catch ghosts, right? Don't talk about the real fire of the three flavors, let go of the fireball club and the two-handed martial arts. Why don't you meet a little demon and you serve as lunch for others? Those magic weapons of yours are ineffective on humans, right? Wouldn't it be over if you smash him to death? Speaking of background, you are destined to become an immortal. Who has a greater background than you? What the hell are you talking about? Farewell!

No piss points, no surprises. Unremarkable. What's the point of a novel that feels like a running account? It's a composition for primary school students. Plain and simple.

What follows is a story about catching the identity of the disciple of the Supreme Being, which made me tired of reading. When I met someone who knew that the protagonist was Lao Jun's disciple, I was shocked and surprised. What's wrong? Have you become an immortal and become an ordinary person?