Immortal Cultivation: Beginning with Keeping My Feet on the Ground

Instead of reading about cultivation novels, you should read novels about officialdom. Petty scheming and despicable behavior... Using the guise of cultivation novels, the author writes about inexplicable scheming and plotting. The title attracts readers who are interested in cultivation novels, but the content blocks them from reading.

It's well-written, but it feels like a hodgepodge, mixing elements of cultivation, political intrigue, and officialdom together. Putting all these together is like putting all the finest ingredients into a pot and cooking up a mess.

When I saw the protagonist kill the woman he had captured, I quit. It's not that the woman couldn't be killed, but you even killed the woman who was helping you... Are you even human? The outside world is the outside world, but you don't even have a shred of decency. If your book doesn't flop, who will? After all, there are still a minority of perverted and unscrupulous people.

Those who know you're cultivating immortality will think you're involved in the underworld; those who don't will think you're a gangster. It's so ridiculous.

Female authors are like this: no matter how many books they've read or how many stories they've written, their underlying code just can't recognize what "power" really is. They're still stuck in their scheming and backstabbing. Someone could slap you to death and you'd still be babbling on and on. Do you think this is the real world?

As the title suggests, the author grew up reading too many melodramatic officialdom novels and cheesy female-oriented novels. When he wanted to make some money by writing novels, he found that the female-oriented novel market was too small, while the male-oriented fantasy market was the largest. So he put on a cultivation novel skin and started his writing journey.

With a cheat code, you still dare to say you're down-to-earth? You're just walking on air!

Read 54 chapters The protagonist refers to himself by his full name instead of "I". The writing is riddled with grammatical errors, making one question the necessity of primary school education. The content is entirely composed of clumsy and self-righteous gangster-style infighting.

It's a sham, all show and no substance. It has absolutely no sense of cultivation. Your book shouldn't be in the fantasy genre; it should be in the historical genre. It's full of intrigue, scheming, and petty maneuvering, with no trace of cultivation.

Read and given a bad review. Cultivation is cultivation, but it's made to resemble a palace drama. Such a small place, yet so many conspiracies and schemes. During the Qi Refining stage, Qi Refining cultivators are everywhere; during the Qi Cultivation stage, they're everywhere. And they keep setting up inexplicable crises for the protagonist—it's all so forced. I can't immerse myself in the story at all.