Transmigrating Together, Everyone Gets a Golden Finger

It's quite bizarre that the protagonist is taking things too seriously in a comedic world, even saying some high-sounding things, accusing Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian of messing around on their wedding day. Doesn't he think he's being too arrogant? Not everyone's wedding needs to be the same to be truly satisfying, especially in a world with a comedic core.

There are too many characters and storylines in Love Apartment, and most of them are not related to the main characters.

Why do they both have the surname Bai? Bai Ye's name is practically from the same dimension as Long Aotian's.

Having read over twenty chapters, to put it simply, the overall design and the cheat codes in each world are quite good. However, I don't know if this is the author's first time working with the transmigration genre, but they seem to unconsciously elaborate on some very simple and unnecessary plot points (in short: filler).

3% Plot, 97% theory. And it's all self-righteous theory. I forced myself to read through Douluo Continent, but I couldn't continue. After saving 200 chapters to continue, I found it got even worse later on.

Bro, you're trying to find logic in a sitcom. As a viewer, didn't you notice that the show glosses over these aspects? You think your own setup is so rigorous, but you've written things that seem completely out of touch with reality.

There are too many plot points where the protagonist uses the author's own values ​​to express their own, and usually in a sarcastic way. Even if you agree with some of the points, this sarcastic approach is still unpleasant, let alone disagreeing with them. It wasn't so noticeable in the early stages when the protagonist was developing, but it became increasingly difficult to follow later on.

I found a bit of plot information amidst a bunch of setting notes. . Gif

Are you an encyclopedia or a novelist? Are you just padding your word count by writing so much useless stuff?

Before the game even started, it was filled with comments about a bunch of foreign events, and I don't know what the point was. After transmigrating, there was another brainstorming session, with a lot of analysis, but three minutes later the system arrived, loaded the memories, and all the previous analysis became useless.