Transmigrating Together, Everyone Gets a Golden Finger

It's quite weird. The protagonist is serious in a comedy world, and he also says some high-sounding words, accusing Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian of messing around on their wedding day. Don't you think you are too arrogant? Not everyone's wedding will be the same, especially in the world of comedy. Perhaps Wang Tiezhu and Tian Erniu just wanted a noisy wedding, so they invited Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian. They didn't understand the whole incident and just used their own three views to criticize them in large numbers. Isn't it the style of modern keyboard warriors?

There are too many character plots in iPartment, and most of them have nothing to do with the protagonist.

Why are they all surnamed Bai? Bai Ye's name is also in the same dimension as Long Aotian

After reading more than 20 chapters, to put it simply, the overall design and golden fingers of each world are quite good, but the author doesn't know if this is his first time encountering the cross-current genre, so he always unconsciously elaborates some very simple and unnecessary plots (referred to as: water), such as the location numbers of the books in the Harry Potter library, which can be detailed Write out one or two hundred words carefully... The 99 series itself has to write stories about many worlds, but you are trying your best to write some completely unnecessary things in one world story. This not only affects reading, but also increases other people's rebellious psychology, making people less and less interested in continuing to read. This is obviously not right. Of course, the above is just my personal feeling after reading nearly thirty chapters, and it is just my personal opinion. We apologize for the inconvenience caused to everyone.

3% Plot, 97% theory. And it's still a self-righteous theory. I bit the bullet and saw Douluo and couldn't stand it anymore. I saved 200 chapters and wanted to continue reading, but found that the later chapters were even more rubbish.

Bro is trying to find logic for sitcoms. As a viewer, haven't you noticed that TV dramas just brush over these aspects? I feel that my setting is so rigorous that I don't know what the world is when I write it.

There are too many plots that use the protagonist to export the author's own values, and it is usually in a sarcastic way. Even if he has some points of view that he agrees with but his sarcastic way will make him feel uncomfortable, let alone the points of view that he does not agree with. In the early stage of the development of the protagonist, it is not obvious, but in the later stage, it feels a bit incomprehensible.

Among a lot of setting instructions, I found a little plot. . Gif

Are you an encyclopedia or a novel? Is writing so much useless stuff a waste of words?

Before starting the time travel, I commented on a bunch of foreign facts, but I don't know what the point is. After the time travel, there was another brainstorming session and a lot of analysis. As a result, the system came in three minutes later, the memory was loaded, and the previous analysis was useless. After the system came, there was another analysis, listing some detailed terms, and then quoting scriptures (a certain system holder of the same model), analyzing the practical application, and discussing several chapters. Then I entered the plot and saw the scene of selling counterfeit medicine. I thought it was Lu Ziqiao, but it didn't look like him. I analyzed various plot changes and the possibility of integrating the world, and thought about the pros and cons of changing the plot. I seemed to be thinking about the outcome, but I found that it was not Lu Ziqiao at all. I almost vomited when I saw this. Latecomers should be careful to avoid pitfalls.