At the end of his life, Bai Ye thought, “If I get another life, I hope I can enjoy unearned rewards, reap what others have sown, and rise to the top in one leap!”
…
[First sign-in successful. Sign-in location: Douluo Dalu. Obtained Martial Soul: “Godslaying Spear.”]
“Is this some kind of joke? Spearmen have always had terrible luck, and a Martial Soul like the Godslaying Spear has been out of meta for ages, hasn’t it?”
“Good-for-nothing’s rise to power, reborn in another world, Infinite Terror, the Heavens’ Paradise, prehistoric gods and demons, the Infinite System, harvesting players, the rise of the survivalist path, the collapse of the eerie and supernatural, a tycoon through transmigration, Hong Kong action drama revival, a nationwide frenzy… Those were all the protagonist’s divine weapons from several versions ago!”
…
[First check-in successful. Current profession: None. Obtained 100 street-fighting experience and 1 kg of lime powder.]
“Don’t I already have a Martial Soul? Shouldn’t I at least count as a Soul Master? And why do I have experience fighting stray dogs for food?”
…
[Character: Su Yuntao. Check-in successful. Obtained a random soul beast bloodline.]
“Su Yuntao, the blind-eyed god king?”
[Martial Soul Awakening complete. Martial Soul: Sunflower. Innate Soul Power: Level 9. Current profession changed to: Soul Master. Check-in successful. Obtained the Natural Meditation Method.]
“So you don’t count as a Soul Master if you have no Soul Power…”
“Wait, shouldn’t a Martial Soul like the Godslaying Spear have Innate Full Soul Power, if not Innate Soul Power at level twenty?”
…
[Check-in successful at the Spirit Hall in Holy Soul Village. Obtained 101 Common Facts About Soul Masters.]
“Soul Ring colors… Soul Rings and constitution… Innate Soul Power and Martial Soul quality… Grandmaster Yu truly is a ‘divine being.’”
P.S. Multiple Martial Souls, lots of fanon additions, Tang San bashing, Grandmaster bashing, Spirit Hall route.
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The sea god and the angel god are husband and wife, how did you manage that? What kind of husband would shatter the divine status of his wife's heir?
This is a bit harsh. It's all about doing what your abilities should allow. All I see is that the protagonist is at most an ordinary Soul Saint, yet he keeps causing all sorts of trouble. Your synopsis says the protagonist has a cautious personality, so why is he so reckless?
1. Too much unnecessary dialogue. 2. The protagonist is a spirit beast, and one of those incredibly ugly spirit beasts from Shrek Academy. I didn't want to read more than three chapters. 😅
Write more, instruction manual, instruction manual, please write more!
I've read up to chapter 11, and I've noticed a problem: the author keeps analyzing this and that, and I haven't seen much of the main character.
There were too many descriptive and setting-related plot points, and the story didn't advance much.
Forget writing novels, go write academic papers. There's no plot, no character development, I bet you don't even have an outline. You just write a chapter based on whatever idea pops into your head. If you make novels your main job, you'll starve.
I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. 80% Of each chapter was nonsense, and the rest was the same. The author can just keep entertaining himself.
I'm practically an analysis master now, but I'm almost making no progress!
The author seems to be a beginner; the writing is like an essay, quite dry and boring. However, the idea is good, so it's worth a look.