The Mysterious Spiritual Realm

Everything was fine before, but this recent plot fully illustrates what extraneous matters are. Yes, there are extraneous consequences. A country is easy to change, but a nature is hard to change. As long as Ziying doesn't write about his colleagues in Shushan, he will quickly fall into the rhythm of extraneous things and be unable to extricate himself. Then I couldn't control the plot. I stepped on the watermelon rind and hit it everywhere, and I went crazy while reading. No fighting, no fighting, no big war, please. . .

He said that he could not develop his power, but in the end he saved a woman and gave her Qi refining and foundation building skills. Isn't this an indirect way of developing power? Whether intentional or not, if something happens then it won't be your fault. After all, there is cause and effect. In this case, what kind of a hundred-year agreement is it? This hundred-year agreement is bullshit.

Then write about Buddhism. There are so many Buddhist bosses but they are reluctant to take action. The only type you have not written about now is the Emei side. I want to see the protagonist, as a disciple of Emei, transfer to the Buddhism boss and unite with Buddhism and Taoism to defeat evil spirits and heretics. , Mainly because I think the gap between heavenly immortals and golden immortals in Taoism is very obvious, but in Buddhism and Demonic Sect, it is more blurry. For example, in Buddhism, there is a gap between the relatively weak Utan Wuming, Kongtuo and Duzhi, and the strongest Dazhi, Xinru and Tianmeng. The red lotus in the Demon Gate, the difference between the Sand God and the old demon of Tiecheng Mountain. It is best to write about the fights between these big guys, and bring in the big guys from the side (such as Ku Zhu, Lu Nuo and Qin Nan Gong) to reflect the gap between them. The main reason is that in classical fairy tales like the original work, this gap is not very obvious. Shang Heyang and Dulong actually think that they can challenge Youtan by making some magic weapons. In order to appease the readers' appetite, you can also write about the protagonist changing the atmosphere of Emei. In fact, there is no need to make the protagonist the strongest. In these few books written, I felt that in order to highlight the protagonist's strength in the later period, the combat power was a bit collapsed (for example, at the end of The Master of Wutai, the invisible venerable who withered bamboo cannot deal with, the old Buddha of Chili actually They were all killed by Xu Feiniang, who had just become an immortal, using her own Demon Killing Sword and Hundred Poisons and All Spirits Sword. I think even Yi Zhou, who had been an immortal for a long time, couldn't do this with the purple and green swords.) There are also many readers who read the novels that hug each other. The protagonist only needs to play the role of a glue, and it is very satisfying to win all the way. And I feel that the fighting scenes in this book are not as vivid as before. When reading about Wutai Cult Leader, Zhuang Yanjie in the past, and Jin Xunu, those fighting scenes can make readers immersed in the scene. The writing style still needs to be consistent with the past.

In the past few years, it's the best thing I've seen. I hope it won't stretch my hips in the future.

When I saw the general's tomb, I just wanted to say that it's okay for you to be fully armed and jump to a higher level just after building the foundation. Is it reasonable to force yourself to jump to a higher level if you don't have all the skills and few magic weapons?

Zi Ying's writing is surprisingly good. The main thing is that the protagonist has a character and a temper. Don't mess around either. I was about to step on the watermelon rind, but I quickly pulled it back. But it is still relatively peaceful. The protagonist is young and has a very mature mentality, so it is not easy to stand out.

Fans of "The Ancestor of All Monsters in Shushan" like the author's style very much, with theoretical knowledge and a taste of classical fairy tales. I feel that the description of family affection at the beginning of this book is too simple, but I am looking forward to the follow-up 😍😍😍😍, keep up the good work

The introduction is too outrageous. Your conversion rate will definitely be too low to read, but the retention rate is high, so it still needs to be formal, otherwise losing the PK will affect the follow-up. If you don't believe me, please consult the editor.

The writing is good, but too deliberate. It was deliberately written about the powerful forces in the martial arts world, and they were all wiped out in one go, and then they broke off the fate, killed the corpse demon, and hated evil as much as hatred... I personally feel that the twist is too deliberate, and I don't really like this kind of bitterness and hatred.

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