From Ming Cult Leader to Roaming the Heavens

This is the only Jin Yong fan I've seen so far who has three righteous views. After all, Jin Yong's books are basically distorted values. I hope you won't disappoint in the future, and we must kill all scum like Yin Susu! There are also Cheng Kun, Xie Xun, Zhao Min, etc., No one is left behind!

After reading more than thirty chapters, I found that the author has done some research on the original work, but he does not know much about martial arts online novels. There are many interesting points that have not been written out, and the protagonist is relatively indecisive, which is taboo in online novels.

What is the reason for Dajin's crazy wisdom? About Du Dajin's crazy and coquettish operation, he must wipe out his own family. I have the following points that I can't figure out: 1. The protagonist has made it clear that he is a match with the Tianying Cult's minions. Where does he have the confidence that the protagonist can protect his family? 2. His whole family was detained and could be wiped out at any time, so why did he save his face and not go to Wudang to report the news? 3. As a person who has been running an escort agency for many years, he is never too careful, especially for an escort whose value is far beyond his imagination. How could he allow his actions to be inconsistent with being cautious? It's like you can usually do one project a month and get a commission of about 10,000 yuan. Suddenly someone gives you a big order and you can earn 300,000 yuan after completing it in a month. I believe everyone is just as careful as I am. After reading the story later, I finally understood. It turned out to be "you won't be able to write a series without the original plot." It seems that the protagonist is making trouble, but the main storylines of the sword-raising conference, Ice and Fire Island, Zhang Wuji's origin, and Yin Susu's suicide have not changed at all. However, the author is clever in giving Yin Susu the identity of his enemy, so that he won't have the feeling that "the protagonist will appear useless if the plot remains unchanged" like other works of the same type.

I'm convinced by the description of this combat power. I can't beat anyone. It's a 50-50 ratio. I mentioned earlier how many moves I can make with Zhang Sanfeng, who is a bit weaker. Later, the attributes were restrained and the Nine Yang Magic was used to defeat the two elders Xuan Ming and they couldn't be killed for a long time. The two elders Xuan Ming = Zhang Sanfeng. Flexible combat capability, right?

，Flag，？ Then go ahead and do it. It's not much better to just push Zhu Baba to the top. After showing off a lot of tricks, it's better to just lie down. The character of the protagonist is also very swinging. From the beginning, he wanted to run away, but he was unable to run. If someone made things difficult for him, he would endure the humiliation and bear the burden. Later, when he ran away after the White Lotus Sect incident, If you have the opportunity and don't run away, you forcefully take advantage of the main plot. The revenge you get is quite outrageous. You are not a sect or a relative, and they let you off the hook, but you end up chasing and biting you like a mad dog. The problem is that Yin Susu will die just as well if you stand by and do nothing, so you force the drama to increase the difficulty of the main plot. It would be nice but not so good, and the logic is not that good

Chapter 5: Taoist Bai Lian is really speechless. People are blocking the road and robbing people. You tell people that you have no grievances and no hatred, and you don't want to hurt people's lives.

I just became the leader of the Ming Cult, and I can immediately drive out the Tartars and establish a country and proclaim myself emperor. The author asked the protagonist to change the map. I was a little speechless. I don't know what the author thought?

The protagonist has a grudge against Yin Susu. He is willing to stay in the place where his family is destined to be exterminated and not move. This is purely seeking death. Others also spared his life.

When I first watched it, I was still wondering why the quality shouldn't be this good. But after watching it, I realized why. It started but ended! I always change scenes in the middle of writing. The biggest problem with this is that the character of the protagonist collapses and people can't have a clear position. If your writing skills are really outstanding and you can attract people to keep reading, this problem won't be big, but you haven't written to this level. In the end, everyone was enjoying watching it, but suddenly it took a sharp turn and suddenly became boring. The first time I could bear it, the second time it was a bit unbearable, and the third time no one watched it. I'll end it here. I hope it will be of some help to the author. I'll take my leave.

To be honest, this book is of good quality, but the protagonist is poorly portrayed. First, you, a modern person, have been in ancient times for more than 3 months. This is the time when the golden finger has not yet awakened. Including walking darts, it is already half a year, right? You still can't adapt? Why don't you just leave honestly? Why don't you save, save, save a ghost? Du Dajin is stupid and greedy, and he doesn't know what's going on behind the scenes. If you can't guarantee that he will listen to you, you should leave immediately. As for the disciples, you can take them away together or let them leave first. Don't you understand? Later, when someone from the Shaolin Temple comes, you just listen to whatever they say. I don't know if it's just stupidity or the character the author wants to create. Second, the protagonist has no reason to kill Yin Susu. The relationship between you and the Longmen Escort Agency is just that of the Escort Agency and the Escort Master. The Escort Agency neither teaches you martial arts nor does it show any great favor to you. You put in the labor and the Escort Agency pays the money, that's all. It's the protagonist's first time escorting. Does the escort agency know that the protagonist knows martial arts? Why not let him go? If the protagonist didn't know martial arts at that time, wouldn't he have died? So, I really don't know why the escort agency hates Yin Susu. Master Zhao and his three apprentices can obviously take away or keep money. For example, if the three apprentices take away money, Master Zhao will leave a sum of money. He will teach you the basics. You can go to the martial arts school and spend 500 taels to teach him, but you can just keep a large amount of money. Third, if Yin Susu lets you go, you want to kill her. Zhu Jiuzhen has another face and accepts it. Zhu Jiuzhen himself is a demon, and his true nature can be seen from the events in the original work. At the age of fifteen or sixteen, his character is basically a foregone conclusion. To sum up, the author's writing style and layout are good, but the protagonist is not generally bad. He has no distinction between likes and dislikes, and good and evil are unclear. What is the modern outlook on life? The protagonist has already killed people and adapted to it. Do you understand? When you use modern people's standards to evaluate ancient people, especially the ancient dark forces, you are already wrong.