Two Worlds: Becoming an Immortal After Failing to Establish My Foundation!

A highly recommended new book on cultivating immortality in two realms! I have read too many novels about traveling from modern immortality to ancient immortality, and frantically plundering various ancient elixirs to increase cultivation. It is quite rare to travel from ancient times to the modern world of immortality. In addition to being novel, the plot is also very interesting. At the beginning, the protagonist failed to build the foundation, his cultivation level regressed, and he was ridiculed by people around him. Even his family abandoned the protagonist, and he was exterminated. At this time, the protagonist accidentally obtained the tablet of the ancestor of the Nascent Soul who had already been seated, and successfully recognized the face of the ancestor's portrait, and came to the modern world of cultivating immortals. The sense of excitement and rhythm is great!

It's really nonsense to talk about cultivating immortals and selling products through live streaming. The essence of cultivating immortals is to understand the rules, evolve yourself, cultivate your mind and nature to better understand the Tao, and you also have to race against time and fight for your life, and you have to deal with cause and effect. How can you become an immortal by doing these worldly things?

The plot is too slow. There are various branches, either this enemy or that enemy. Either this one is in trouble or that one is in trouble. Such a good subject matter, such a good plug-in. I really think this plug-in is very good. Using the ancestor's account, you can pretend to be the ancestor, gain strength, and even show off in other worlds. Or you can follow your idea and get free skills and knowledge in the live broadcast room, and then crush the indigenous cultivators. What's the result? You keep dragging out various subplots, wearing down the readers' patience. It would be better if you had some foreshadowing before, but there is no foreshadowing at all. You come up to introduce you out of nowhere, and you are in trouble with who has a feud with whom. The sense of substitution is very poor. Then I thought that if you hurriedly ran to other small countries, you could secretly upgrade, improve your cultivation, and then pretend to be cool, and then it would be great. The plot ended up dragging on for several chapters. In the past life, it was written that he had trouble with the two women on the spaceship, and then it was written that the people from the sect traveled thousands of miles to catch up to find trouble. Because of the so-called little face, the enemy chased the protagonist from the sect to a small country, and wrote various branch plots, and wrote various branch plots that had no interesting meaning. The whole story is not about you and this person. If I have trouble, I have trouble with that person. I have written several chapters. I have not yet arrived in the small country, and I have not yet written about the refreshing feeling of developing secretly. I insist on writing various branch lines and various introductions. I have trouble with this person and trouble with that person. Couldn't you let the protagonist go to a small place as early as possible? Then he can survive in a small place, obtain powerful skills from the live broadcast room, and his strength will increase by leaps and bounds. , Others don't know that the protagonist's cultivation has improved by leaps and bounds, and this feeling is particularly good. Then you meet these two women again, and then surprise these two women with your cultivation. Then you meet Zeng Yang, this sect disciple who has been chasing trouble for thousands of miles, and then the other party is surprised by the protagonist's cultivation, and then is killed by the protagonist. How uncomfortable is this? It just so happens that you haven't felt comfortable yet, and you haven't felt like you have a sense of agency yet, so I introduced the background inexplicably, introduced the two women who had a grudge against the protagonist, and introduced this disciple who came to have a grudge against the protagonist for no apparent reason. The whole story is just about introducing these. Hey, I finally endured Chapter 1, Chapter 2. This chapter feels aggrieved, and then the next ten chapters have a good sense of substitution, and the feeling is refreshing. It can be highlighted very well, and there is a little bit of novelty and innovation. Then I just expect the protagonist to go to a small place to secretly develop and develop cheats. As a result, in the last three or four chapters, the style has suddenly changed, and it has returned to being aggrieved and refreshing. It's hard to explain in just one sentence. I introduced this and that, and didn't develop cheats or improve the protagonist's cultivation level. I watched it a few days ago when you updated it, but now I have no desire to click in. No matter what the author thinks of my evaluation, this is my true opinion.

I saw several book recommendations in one day.

You don't need to read the first chapter to know that this is not a brainless piece of writing, right? A lot of people give it good reviews?

This protagonist's character, this plot development. So old

I can't stand it anymore when I see what other live broadcasts there are about cultivating immortals.

The natives can't understand the live broadcast, and they have to write a bunch of cowardly stuff?

The two worlds of literature are exploding like a blowout.

After identification: it is the waistcoat of the author Wan Ding, not the whitest crow.

Did the author submit the manuscript in the Galaxy Live Broadcast Room?

This style, structure, and the update time of this underworld, 28 is gone. PS: If you are so confident in yourself, you can finish those two unfinished books if you have the ability.

No, this grade can also be admitted to Sanjiang.

It's such a smooth book to read in one sitting. There's nothing bad about it. The author is definitely not a newbie.

The author is the trumpet of Chun Jiulian Baodeng. The spiritual root setting is the same as the previous one.

If you really don't know how to write about battles, you can write less

Author, did you write the trumpet version of "I Have a World of Immortality"? Both of them are from Zhejiang. And this book is a bit like the writing style of the book "Children of the Stars". It feels like there is a high possibility that you are the lotus lantern.

Speed ​​up the progress, don't stress the pace too much, the protagonist's realm is too shallow, this cheat is so powerful, why don't you go straight up, the map is huge, there is no need to stress the protagonist

Chapter 61: Isn't this acting like self-explosion of identity?

Have you ever practiced immortality? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The pace is too slow, and the protagonist cannot practice meditation. It is necessary to participate in various major events, and it is necessary to participate in various major events every day. My scalp feels numb when I see it

It feels like grass jelly, so leave a claw first

Well written. The only thing I can watch recently 🤭

It's not two worlds, there is a virtual communication platform, and it is a tablet. The material is definitely not ordinary, but it was treated as garbage by others and given to the indigenous protagonist. It was also opened by picture and face recognition. The advanced people in the immortal world who were connected were all kind-hearted and open-minded and not evil... By all accounts, Yuanying Yuanshen was selling textbooks. There are too many loopholes, it's like writing an experiment without any thought of fixing it, right?

Overall, the story is good, with new ideas, but the beginning is a bit flawed, mainly because most novels default to time travellers. The protagonist of this article does not fit the character at the beginning. Later, when he came into contact with the tablet and was confirmed to be a native, he changed his senses. In addition, it started off fiercely, but then it became calmer and lacked a turning point.

The writing is pretty good, the protagonist is an indigenous person

Has the author ever practiced immortality? Just leave it and write it!

It's probably not Pauline. I feel like the start is not so smooth and natural.

Daily settlement, start cultivating immortality from a handyman

Genius-style setting, Goudao-style plot. Although the various settings are quite awesome, they look very empty without any interesting plot support. Not that cool.