A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Undercover Cultivator, I Can Repair Magical Treasures

It can only be said that in order to forcefully suppress the protagonist's combat power, the author ended up writing the protagonist into a waste. For example, in the fight with Brother Fenglinggen Lu, the protagonist had foresight, a talisman, a thunder child, the top magic weapon, the top body and martial arts in the mortal world, and the help of Dong Xuan'er. The result was that he was beaten badly. It was far worse than the original Han Li. It's strange that the results could be good after writing like this.

Don't order it, the main character is useless and poisonous!

The Order of Ascension to Immortality was sold at a low price. I'm crazy.

The eunuch training style, the setting and Golden Finger feel a little bit boring, the description is mediocre, and the plot is too bland.

At first I thought this plug-in was very powerful. As a result, I saw that I had to find materials to repair the magic weapon? And what else needs to be done to change the plot? Really confused.

It's extremely poisonous, and I even killed the Foundation Establishment Pill myself.

Authors who write about mortals are all very courageous. They dare to write about demons if their qualifications are not good. That is, no one dares to write about killing the protagonist to seize opportunities. All kinds of opportunities for the protagonists in his novels end up being the same as the protagonists in the book. Ambiguous and like a slave. It would be strange if it doesn't collapse. Why not just kill them all? What time is Daozu? What is the reincarnation of Dao Master? What is it now! And why can't I be the future time ancestor?

You all can't imagine how Nangong Wan received the news that the protagonist had some kind of string-pulling bug. This bug entered Nangong Wan's sea of ​​knowledge and then subtly influenced Nangong Wan to have a good impression of the protagonist. What is the difference between this and brainwashing? I have never seen a novel where the heroine was obtained through brainwashing. With this method, 1,000 female protagonists will be recruited, and the labor and management will not even look at it. Disgusting, have you never written a novel? Such a big poisonous spot. What are the little bits and bobs in the front that others can tolerate? Subscribe to the first chapter and read this. I said the writing is not bad. How come there are so few comments? It's really outrageous!

Second, there are too many private goods, and the more you look for compensation, the more you collapse. And the author tells you that the protagonist he wrote is firm in his Taoism, decisive in killing, and far-sighted, and will not stand back for any bullshit. But the plot is, oh beauties, please stop blocking the way, oh I am so helpless, oh you have really hurt me~ The characters are separated from the plot.

I found a probability that as long as Nangong Wan is the heroine in the mortal fanfic, then the book will most likely be a bad book.