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I don't know how to give an appropriate evaluation. I have read this author for many years. After all, there are not many good writers in the city, especially in recent years. Either daily writing, falling in love every day, no matter how sweet the writing is, it is useless. On the one hand, it is a male blog, but on the other hand, if you travel through time and fall in love every day, isn't it still a waste? Either they are reborn 15 years later or even 18 years later, which is a waste of time travel quota. It seems that those who wrote about cities well are still the great masters in the past, but new problems have arisen. Some great authors may be reluctant to say something and become more literate the more they write. Some great authors become more and more sloppy as they write, and they even have no spiritual core to support them. The entire first-rate account, if it were not for their writing skills, might as well be written by a novice. As far as this book is concerned, I was full of expectations, and I followed up on what I wrote, but I was confused. The beginning was particularly good, but the more I read, the more disappointed I became, and the more I read, the more disappointed I became. The most basic point is that it is no longer exciting. Whether it is the Three Kingdoms Killing National Competition, or obtaining 200 million in Series B financing, or resolving conflicts in a bar, the protagonist is downplayed. There is no climax, no ups and downs, and it is not even an anticlimax. There is no tiger head at all! It's just plain, everything is plain, love is like this, entrepreneurship is like this, everything is plain, not even as delicate as daily writing. Although I hate daily writing, it is quite difficult to write daily writing well. The characterization, image, personality, etc., At least stand up. But the author didn't. The characters appeared in a flash and spoke directly, without any form or image, tone or character, as if the readers should know each other, and the facial makeup was serious. Up to now, from the beginning of raising financing, it has become a running account, with a long introduction to the background of the times, companies at the same time, etc. The protagonist still has time to play tug of war. I thought the tug of war would lead to any foreshadowing, but there was no foreshadowing. He just went there, made up the numbers, and came back. It would be the same with or without him. The author's previous books were not like this. I don't know what's wrong with this one. It seems that the author has suddenly changed. It started at L3, all because of the support of old readers. But in the end, you fell into a tumble, which is really disappointing. These are just my personal opinions. I hope the author can take a look and see if he can go back to that impassioned era and give the protagonist a soul. If the author has this ability, can he give me some snacks?

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Shui is so embarrassed, and he pays monthly bills every day. It's as if he hasn't read it. The heroine is now like a transparent person, and she still writes two things. Entrepreneurship is for the protagonist to start a business, not for us. There is no need to post things from Baidu Encyclopedia. I don't know that I will check it 🙂 Also, I don't want cool articles. I have already read time-travel novels. If you don't read cool articles, are you looking at me? Not to mention having a great time in one chapter, at least there should be a small climax in ten or twenty chapters. Now it's so watery, you can't wait to include the protagonist pooping in it. If you keep updating like this for a while, prepare to open another new book!

The emotional line of the two heroines is not vivid, the career line is flat and straightforward, and the language and writing style are not humorous and humorous, like a running account, it is really far worse than before. She also pretends to be noble and aloof all the time, writing about men who have been disciplined and not at all like ambitious and enterprising men. Damn, who among the rich people now is a well-behaved and loving person?

Talking about my personal senses, the sense of fragmentation is too strong. I have read Chapter 180 now. I don't feel like there are big pitfalls or big pitfalls, but there are constant small pitfalls and small pitfalls, so I won't say whether I want to have a harem, one girl and two girls. It seems that the second female lead has a little more scenes than the first female lead. There are more than 80 chapters of high school plot, and then the plot of Peiyuan class. There are some minor contradictions in the story about joining the association, so watch it yourself, and leave the conflict in the freshman story blank. I was just told that I can no longer fail classes next semester and I have to get by no matter what. Jump directly to the freshman report. I was wondering what the author wanted to write. If the main storyline is a game, why not just practice writing as much as possible? Don't mess around with hammers and sticks.

Before I went to college, it was still an urban novel, but after starting a company, it was basically a historical science novel. The protagonist is like a robot traveling through the history of the early 2000s, hitting here and there with a hammer and a stick, and having various conversations with a series of hot social topics and popular figures that happened in that year, reading memories or popularizing science about what happened that year. A small Internet celebrity or a small movie star with no connection can chat for one or two chapters. In fact, these social figures have no impact on the development of the plot. It is really frustrating to watch. A billionaire only befriends a bad actor. The result is neither business cooperation nor the discovery of corporate management talents. Even if you are a scumbag and a star, but you can't let go of your figure, after a chapter, the result is just to make a friend and join the website. The chapter that is still readable is to talk about some ideas with professors, and then the professor said that you are right and very far-sighted, but we can't change it, and history will remain the same. Maybe a few years later in the novel, you can write two chapters to recall the protagonist's quotes. It turns out that what you said at the beginning was all right. How cool is that? Admittedly, it would be easy to get a 404 if it really changes, but nothing can be changed. I really have no desire to follow up on reading. It's a first-rate account.

As the title says, this book is not as satisfying as the previous one, Teacher Ma. The author is already immersed in his own world. How did this book get worse?

I think Lao Wang is trying to write a work that is very different from the ordinary urban rebirth style. The plot uses a blend of retro and realism to present daily fragments that create an extremely down-to-earth character image of the male protagonist Chen Guiliang. The atmosphere of the times and the local customs in Sichuan and Sichuan in 2003 are drawn from my own experiences and depicted one by one: relatives who seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, villagers who are frank and direct, and young and ignorant high school classmates. It has the color of a group portrait without being redundant. In the absence of a "system" golden finger, it is a bit of a fantasy to change the course of life by passing the college entrance examination with the original academic level. Therefore, Lao Wang uncharacteristically grasped that the new concept essay competition of the year is still one of the routes for each prestigious school to recruit students independently, so that the male protagonist has changed his destiny in the initial stage of his career, laying the foundation for his career development area in the next four years. I think Lao Wang had already planned the academic route of the male protagonist when he first drafted the outline. By choosing the literary color interpreted by the male protagonist's high school student status and his schoolmate Guo Xiaosi (actually Guo Jingming), he easily entered the semi-finals by relying on his own memory and understanding of two generations of people. In the final stage, he wrote an ancient preface that was recited by famous writers and reported by all parties and "became famous in one battle." In this way, he cleverly avoided the embarrassing situation of poor academic performance after rebirth and successfully entered Peking University. There is no "miracle of online literature" in which academic performance improves by leaps and bounds after rebirth, nor does it have a perfunctory writing style that cares about academic goals because of one's original level. Even though there are many words and phrases with a sense of the times in the book, they do not appear to be out of the ordinary in the author's writing. It turns out that Lao Wang can accurately control the differences between the two even if he has just returned to the urban genre from the historical themes of the previous book. The smooth transition between tracks undoubtedly enhances Lao Wang's recognition and reputation as a new platinum writer of the year. The miracle on the career line not only means the beginning of the male protagonist's fortune, but also paves the way for him to start his Internet career and enter the public eye in the subsequent plot. The plot of the male protagonist selling his own "Legend" game private server planning copy and the krypton gold game concept of future generations is a setting that I did not expect. I believe that this start-up capital will allow him to rise from a grassroots identity to a valuable business elite. I think this is Lao Wang's original intention in creating this work.

I have been following Lao Wang since his book in Taiwan. I feel that the heroines in Lao Wang's books were not successful, and they were purely there for the sake of existence. The early entertainment and Republican novels were able to substitute real female celebrities and socialites, and the original heroines written in the following are better than the last. There is no sense of existence, and this one is even worse. It is said to be a double heroine, but the writing is not as interesting as the female supporting characters in chapters like Wu Meng and Qin Shanshan. Later, I selected Liu Tianxian and Yan Danchen, thinking that there would be some intersection with the protagonist, but in the end, I actually named it, damn!

I have been reading Lao Wang's books for many years. Whether it's the Republic of China or mine, some of them are wonderful and interesting even if I can't write them. Let's talk about this book from the other side. It was quite exciting in the early stages. But after writing 200 chapters, I suddenly couldn't read it any more. I couldn't even get enough of it before. At least I thought it would be something like "another time and space" or throw out an XX record. Knowledge, and I am amazed at Lao Wang's ability to search for knowledge). However, I don't know if this book is limited by the fact that it cannot add historical traces at will. After all, this is an era we have all experienced. It is not just words on the history books. I feel that Lao Wang's performance is not as good as imagined. Perhaps, freely giving the historical characters in the book the personality they deserve (or the personality that Lao Wang thinks they should have) and shining a light on the history that we don't understand are Lao Wang's special skills. Why is Chapter 200 a turning point? It's not about what is written in Chapter 200, but that when I read Chapter 200, I suddenly couldn't read any more. However, no matter how bad or ugly Lao Wang's previous books were (for example, The War, which everyone didn't like very much), I read them all with gusto. It just feels inexplicably ordinary, like a rapper writing in his lyrics a daily routine of going from the gym to the recording studio today. Of course, I am not a writer, so I can't give any suggestions. The above is just my subjective opinion. I just hope that Lao Wang will write better and better and make the plot more exciting.

I didn't understand. I agreed to write a song for the heroine but ended up giving it to others for free.

The last few chapters have been like a running story. I skipped two or three chapters and it felt like it had no impact. It was like peeing while watching a movie.

Lao Wang, I have been waiting for this urban article for a long time. Isn't it too much to write more than three million words?

There are a total of 5 people in the Internet literature circle who I can keep reading as soon as I see the author's name. 2 Of them have passed away, and 3 others, Wang, Bai, Xiaoqi Xiaoxue, and the ones who passed away are Qiyue and Sanchi. It's because I have read one book after another over the years and I am satisfied with each one. The author of each book has not let me down.

It's the first time I've seen an author become platinum, or it's the first time I've seen an author's level increase. Congratulations.

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I just finished reading the author's The Rise of a Writer a few years ago, and I couldn't stop reading the new work. I started reading The Rise of a Writer in 2018, and then I didn't finish it intermittently. This time I read it all in one go. This comment also uses the new work to thank the author for writing The Rise of a Writer. It was 2018 when I read Literary Masters. I was in junior high school and was very young. I couldn't understand many parts. However, I became interested in the Republic of China when I read the interesting anecdotes about the Republic of China in the article. I read about the protagonist's literary path to greatness step by step. I also started to be interested in traditional serious literature. When I started to have time to read the current Republic of China literature in college, I still felt that the author's rise as a literary giant was unparalleled. For the time being, I will call the protagonist of the rise of the literary giant Zhou. First of all, the step-by-step shaping of Zhou's character is very successful, from being a bit opportunistic at the beginning, to being patriotic and saving the country, and finally becoming famous. Perhaps the readers at the time thought that Zhou's patriotism was too smooth, but I think this smoothness is more in line with the characters. Secondly, the plot arrangement is a bit watery, but it does not hinder the direction of the story. Judging from the direction of time, the development of the plot is reasonable, and the author's arrangement of characters in the plot is also generally reasonable. Individuals cannot influence history and can only leave traces in the long history. This is one of my thoughts on the rise of literary giants. Finally, there are some criticisms. I personally think that a single female protagonist is more suitable. There is nothing wrong with the harem. However, considering the rise of literary giants, a single female protagonist can better develop the characters. The creation of multiple characters will become more facial-shaped. However, if you only focus on the protagonist, it is still very successful. As I mentioned above, the author's Republican literature is second to none! If given the chance, I still hope that the author can write another novel about the Republic of China. Pre-order the new chapter of this new work and vote for two monthly votes to make up for the regret of not having all the chapters for The Rise of the Writer. Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing an excellent, excellent, excellent novel about the Republic of China, so that I can read it to the end. A fan of the book would like to express his sincere wishes and hope that the author is in good health and that his new book will be a hit. (If the author has the opportunity and time, I hope to write another novel about the Republic of China)

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It is also Lao Wang's second book. I still remember when I read Wild Age, the first chapter opened my eyes and I couldn't stop reading. This book is actually not bad, except that the three heroines except Xu Fengyin are very well portrayed, and the other two are not very full. But overall this book is quite good.

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