After I Became an Underworld Official, Terror Descended on the World

Let me tell you, I came here from Douyin. Like many people, after listening to the first part, I felt that it was very interesting and the subject matter was attractive enough. After reading a large part of the previous part, it was very good. I also spent money to read it. If it can attract others to spend money, it means that the writing is very good. But when I read more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't stand it. Let me summarize it for you. 1: The content does not match the title. I came to read it for the Yinsi and the ghost master in the front. When I saw the back (more than a hundred chapters I have read so far), there was no shadow at all. They were all Erlang Shen's spells. What kind of divine body came in the back, saying that this was how to defeat the immortal body. The ghost that had been raised for so long in the front was lost. Beihai, I don't even have it with me anymore. I can't see what I want to see. I can't stand it any more. Two: The combat power is broken. In the early stage, the level of danger is as powerful as it is dangerous. By the time I read more than a hundred chapters, what did you write? I met a Taoist novice on the train named Jiang Yun. Pay attention to the novice. He said he was a ghost master, and the ghost was the underworld. Level? What is the disaster level? I don't know how many times higher than the dangerous level in the previous chapters. You are using a novice here... I really..., And what about the Thirty-two Stars of Tiangang, as powerful as they were boasted in front of them. What kind of unreasonable connections did the old man spend to hire him as a bodyguard? As a result, those thirty people died. It needs to be as sloppy as it is, you will die with just a few clicks of your fingers, and I won't talk about the collapse of other combat powers. Three: The storyline is ridiculous, and there are many pitfalls that you wrote yourself, and you don't fill them in yourself. I remember there is a place where the ghost mother and the protagonist said that the ghosts hidden in the five internal organs come out in turns, so the protagonist should be careful about the next one, and just forget about it afterward. If this setting is removed, whoever you want can come out. Even now there are only three. I don't know what to make the protagonist be careful about, let alone some running accounts. If the combat power collapses, I will join a new organization. The new combat power makes me feel that the content I read in the previous chapters has no meaning at all. The Ghost Control Club I was talking about is national level. If you have to hang more and more, you won't be able to see it later, it will be refined in an instant, and it will disappear, and then some new national-level organizations will appear, like Tianmen, and they will appear strangely. You can't see him appearing after the destruction of the previous cities, but only this city will appear after it is destroyed. Four: I don't know if it's a writing problem or a story idea. The problem is that the protagonist is always led by the nose, he has fighting ability but no IQ, and he is always fighting. After the fight here, fight somewhere else. Without the good plot in the early stage, I felt like my brain was missing when I read it. A cool novel can't be so fun. What's more, it won't be fun in the later stage. Anyone who fights will use up the last bit of energy, and then fight somewhere else. Just resurrect with full health and continue fighting. Obviously the author rarely thought about the plot after writing it, or what I said is ugly is that it was written by AI. I am showing this comment to other readers to make them think twice. To the author, it is equivalent to a reminder to the author. You must know that this is a paid novel, and you cannot take advantage of people who spend money.

No, isn't the female protagonist promoted on Douyin? Why did she become a male protagonist?😅

After reading a few chapters, I was a little speechless. The protagonist is obviously a Yinshi, and he has no magic spells. When he returned to the world of the world, he was attacked like a pen and could not fight back. Later, when he subdued the ghosts, he had to do it himself. I asked this Yinshi, are you rubbish? When the protagonist was in the Yin difference, he only had 100 net coins a year. When he arrived in the Yang world, he felt that the monetary system was broken. Later, when the protagonist was looking for the Yin difference in the auction house, he watched Yang Xu run away without any means. 😒 At the auction house, he shot a blow and knocked him 1 meter away. 😰 He really lost his temper.

The routine of novels from ten years ago is a bit trivial. There are at least two pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots in one chapter. No matter how the person offends the protagonist, he will be forgiven as long as he admits his mistake and apologizes. Even the person who killed the protagonist's friend will be forgiven. Suitable for people who have just started reading novels

This book should be recommended to more people. It took me a long time to find it.

When you finish reading the free chapters, you feel "Hey, this book is kind of interesting" When you spend money to buy the chapters, "Turns out this is what shit smells like" The plot of Goodfellas's free chapters is quite reasonable. After spending money, the writing becomes more and more confusing. Forget it if there are typos. Is the plot so confusing? Either you don't ask for money, and if you ask for money, write it carefully for me. I really think that everyone's money is blown by the wind, are you spending money to buy shit?

There are only a few Yin Divisions in the underworld that can suppress the fighting power. There are nearly 50 people with this level in the human world in 100 chapters. They are still Zhong Kui's apprentices. Don't be too abstract. The protagonist is like a brainless person who is always led by the nose. People in novels are always mentally retarded. The world feels like S and B. Summary and defense.

Isn't the protagonist recommended by Douyin a female? Why did she become a male?

My condolences, everyone. I am the author's brother. The author died of a cerebral infarction in the early morning of the 16th. I'm sorry.

Why is the introduction called "Yinsi"? In modern terms, this is a department, right? A person is called a department, right? .