Doomsday: Something's Wrong with My Daily Feed

This story is very good, IQ is also online, I can read it

The world in the book is quite dark. I didn't expect that the imperial court in the book directly restored slavery. But it actually makes sense if you look carefully. It's just that the cows and horses underneath are too desperate. Before the apocalypse, the better ones will still be cows and horses, and the worse ones will become slaves directly. This is really the end of the world. I found that the better written apocalyptic articles all assume that the Draconians before the apocalypse will still be the Draconians after the apocalypse; the people at the bottom will always be the people at the bottom. Even in the book, there is little spirit of resistance. Quite conscious😄

Joining this team as the younger brother is very abrupt.

To be honest, I think the author should refine it. The story is OK, but the style really needs to be revised. It doesn't look like a novel, but like a narrative, and it doesn't fit in.

When I came up, I saw that the author fantasized about having a girlfriend, and his girlfriend cheated on him with his first love, which was unlucky.

It looks good, but I still can't understand that people who would kill each other for moldy potatoes in the apocalypse with their girlfriends can't eat cockroach products. Another thing that I can't understand is the relationship between the male protagonist and Xiaoxiao. The two of them have very little contact, and they are almost better than strangers, but how can they suddenly fall in love and get the certificate? Even adding a female protagonist has to be a gradual process, isn't it? I really can't understand this, especially the scene in the beginning where the two of them are sleeping while holding each other's arms. This is the end of the world. They have just met and are not very familiar with each other. The male protagonist doesn't care, and the female is not defensive at all? Or is the male protagonist possessed by a succubus? I couldn't understand what I saw, and I felt like I was hit in the head. But apart from these two points, everything else is very well written and I read it in one sitting.

The more I look at it, the more something is wrong. What is the use of this plug-in? You can hardly see it later. At first, I thought he was a gangster, but later he became a low-level worker.

As you write this, you forget about the plug-in. In the beginning, it was once a day, but now it has been a long time. So why do you need this plug-in?

It should be a novel generated by AI 😒

Dude, is your plug-in just a decoration?

If you have gold coins, you don't need them, they are also talents.

Everything is good when I read it now, but there are too many typos, omissions and bad sentences, which makes me feel like I'm watching a pirated version. Could it be that the author moved this book from some paid platform?

Now you are entering the palace to serve Cixi, the old woman?

Problems with this book: too many typos, missing dialogues for some characters, and a system with a thin sense of presence after entering the asylum. Advantages: The plot has a clear context, the characters are vivid, and the events are resolved neatly.

The author always says that the protagonist is an extreme egoist. He also wrote that he helped this group and that group. It cannot be separated. Otherwise, don't say that the protagonist is extremely egoistic. The protagonist is so reckless that I am speechless.

It's very difficult to suddenly become a younger brother. Shouldn't this ability be used as a lone wolf or to be the boss? Suddenly, you change from a criminal to a younger brother to a worker. Your label has become weird.

Daily information? ? Where is it every day?

This copy of City of Auroville is too boring. After joining Brother Lei's team, the plot characterization plummeted. After transitioning to City of Auroville, there was too much ink about this organization. The setting of this golden finger should be that you need to go out frequently to develop, but after arriving in City of Auroville, you started to fish.

It's a eunuch! ! ! ? ? ? ?

I made the mistake that many new authors make by forgetting to add details about the setting of the plot, which led to self-indulgence. I was scolded by a group of people for being a eunuch.

Author, what did you write about the conversation with Brother Lei in Chapter 24? The preface does not match the follow-up. Is there really no problem?

I was cleaning out the bookshelves and found this book, The Eunuch. Well, I happened to read the review of the book. It was quite ironic. So, a moment of silence.

Protagonist: "I discovered a terrible fact!" Author: "What on earth did he discover?! [Scratches his head]"