Edge of Doom

Why are they all good reviews? Why do I feel that the main character is so silly, childish, and a virgin?

In fact, the previous writing was okay, but when I read Chapter 16, I immediately vomited out my overnight meal. Then? Then I suggest just throwing this thing in the trash can

This is truly the best post-apocalyptic novel I have ever read. The characters are indistinguishable, the descriptions are contradictory, and there are absolutely no excessive twists. You have such an egoistic protagonist in front of you, whether it is actions or thoughts, but behind you you set up a righteous character. Is this right? I don't hate the Virgin or anything, but your writing is contradictory. If you have a twist and a little foreshadowing to establish this character, I won't say anything. It's just plain uncomfortable to watch. The author can write whatever he wants.

The evil nature of human nature that the author spends a lot of time writing about is only worth ten thousand subscriptions But the evil nature of human nature revealed in less than a sentence or two in the comment area is not worth even a million subscriptions!

Seeing Chapter 214 Doomsday Ranger, this is going to be a dual-track system. In the long term, the challenge is structural. The core conflict is the dual track of power and loyalty Combat team and search team: have a sense of belonging and loyalty to the base, and accept unified command, discipline and sacrifice requirements. They defend their "home", not just their "employer". But now Yu Dong values ​​​​his personal allegiance. The so-called rangers are actually mercenaries: loyalty to tasks and points is a purely contractual relationship. Just do it when the "money" is available. If the risk is too high or the return is insufficient, you can give up the task or even betray at any time. Challenge: When the base faces a life-and-death crisis, the combat team at the cruise ship base is more aware of resistance, and the mercenaries are likely to scatter and even take advantage of the situation. This would create an Achilles' heel in the base's defenses and spark a deep distrust and contempt for each other. Confusion of command and jurisdiction At the mission site, if the goals of the regular army team and the mercenary team conflict (such as competing for the same scarce supplies), who has the highest command authority? If mercenaries commit crimes outside the base (such as robbing other survivors and gangsters), does the base have the jurisdiction? How to govern? This will seriously damage the "just" image of the base and corrode the moral foundation on which it was founded. The collapse and injustice of the economic system Points inflation and value inversion If the two sets of points standards are unreasonably designed, it can easily lead to room for arbitrage. For example, the points earned by a mercenary for completing a high-risk mission may far exceed the rewards for a regular army for completing a similar mission. This will cause: The regular army has a psychological imbalance: "Our lives are not as valuable as their lives", leading to a plummet in morale, the loss of elites to join mercenaries, or the regular army taking on "private jobs" privately. Economic inflation: Mercenaries earn a large number of points and flood the base market for consumption, which may push up the prices of key supplies (such as ammunition and medicine) and harm the interests of ordinary residents and regular troops. The Gray Area of ​​Law and Morality The behavior of the regular army is governed by military law, with clear discipline and moral principles (at least on the surface). The behavior of mercenaries is only governed by the mission contract. In order to complete their tasks, they can use extremely cruel and unethical methods (such as massacre, deception, and releasing dangerous experimental subjects). Who will bear the consequences of these actions? Will the reputation of the base be damaged as a result? Mercenaries evade the regular army: If the base management is corrupt and incompetent, and the regular army is declining day by day, a powerful mercenary group may turn against its customers and become the actual power holder through economic control and threat of force, turning the base into a "company town" or a "warlord stronghold". In the context of doomsday, this dual-track system is a concrete manifestation of the contradiction between "efficiency and risk", "loyalty and flexibility", and "order and freedom". Its biggest challenge is how to allow a closed system that believes in collectivism and pursues stability and an open system that believes in individualism and pursues interests to coexist in the same physical and power space without systemic collapse. This kind of tension is a good story theme that can be well developed.

It took too long and the reading experience was extremely poor.

A round of rebirth: living an ignoble existence. Rebirth for the second round: improvement plan. If you realize that you have an uncertain chance of rebirth, you need to make other preparations: remember the big news in advance. If the third round can still be started, use the second round of news to convince the senior management and prepare for it. The reason for not doing this is not because the protagonist is stupid, but because it tests the conception and writing skills. The author intentionally or unintentionally avoided this point. If there is such an optimal solution, the protagonist's struggle will be full of spirituality, and the next round of content will also make people look forward to it; but if there is no such optimal solution, then the protagonist's struggle will, in my opinion, have the nature of having an infinite number of words.

It is a rare masterpiece of the apocalyptic flow. The self-interest theory of the reborn person is considered a highlight in the apocalyptic rebirth flow.

The protagonist, who is in the good camp, will try to unite forces that can be united, and will grow significantly. You can really see the process of turning from an outstanding ordinary person into an excellent leader. The characters written by the author are not stereotyped. People will change, grow, and have their own ideas. The butterfly effect after rebirth is also well written.

As a bookworm of 18 years, I am one of the rare people who have fully ordered a work, so I would like to talk about the good and bad of this work. This work is different from the usual post-apocalyptic novels. It does not have any special superpowers (if rebirth is not included). The settings are quite logical. It can be regarded as a novel that is relatively alternative and close to reality. But some of the settings in the middle, such as the restoration of order after the end of the world, I personally feel that it will definitely not be the same as before. Maybe the author wrote it because he had something to express. Some book friends also mentioned similar issues in the chapter reviews at that time. But overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. As of this writing, this book is really good and I highly recommend reading it.

The writing is smooth and there is no obvious anti-intellectual plot. The author tries his best to create a real world. This can be proved by the fact that even in those posts that spray plot, there are always thoughts from other readers from different perspectives. There are endless faults, try to enjoy this authentic atmosphere.

Definitely a fine article in the post-apocalyptic world, it tells the story of an ordinary person's efforts to save the world. The protagonist is an ordinary college student. The only problem is that he keeps being reborn. After rebirth, his memory of the past life in the apocalypse is super strong. There is nothing else. There is no space, no powers, and no crystal nuclei. By chance, he meets a professor who is engaged in biology, and he starts to do things around the research of vaccines. Life after life, he gradually gets better.

Well, the summary is at the top. It is one of the few good books in the current environment, not to mention the food for the end of the world in this classified environment. Set the general tone, and then talk about some things that personally feel that as a reader, the impression is not good. First of all, the growth of the protagonist may not be well described in the same volume. For example, the character of the protagonist when he is preparing in the early stage and the character when he encounters trouble in the middle and later stages may be more highlighted during the preparation in the early stage. When you read it, it will give people a tiger-like head and a tiger tail, but a snake's waist; Then in the description of the foreshadowing, you can clearly see some of the author's ingenuity, perhaps to guide the reader to stand from God's perspective and get more information. However, the writing may not be strong enough, and I feel that most of the protagonists' observations of things are not detailed enough, and the growth line becomes a gradual degradation trend; There are also some plots that may seem like deus ex machina to follow-up readers, especially in the middle and later stages of the fourth rebirth. I am a new reader who has saved many chapters, and the process of reading this is quite painful. The reason for this situation cannot be ruled out as the God's perspective mentioned earlier. It may also be that after a book is written, everyone sees it from a different perspective. So for readers who are following the book, I can't imagine how complex the emotions were during that time. Are you scolding and pursuing a high level of determination at the same time, or are you so angry that you no longer pursue a determination? However, the ending is still very beautiful. If a person gets 10 points for what he wants to express and 7 points for what he can express, he is already very good. For someone like me who read it in one go, I can clearly feel some of the author's progress. Come on! I'm still very supportive, but I won't join the book club anymore if I don't play QQ anymore haha

I had no idea this book was so bad. Being praised to such an extent. Who is reading? Who is liking it? I, a veteran reader with 4 years of reading experience, cannot understand it. I can only say that Qidian's high-quality novels are not getting better every year.

The author writes very well. Although I am a student now and have little money, I am willing to pay for you (eat less snacks). How do you say that? I will use my own money to support the authors I like and the world I like.

In terms of military, the new version of the American "Infantry Platoons and Squads" is very good. In terms of practicality, because it is a textbook from recent years, it is far better than the dual-use manual, which is from the last century... And this thing has a complete set of PDFs that can be downloaded. In terms of medicine, the "Guide to Commonly Used Diseases and Drugs" from the United States is also good, and its practicality is much better than the temporary supplements like Barefoot Doctor (which is true, because there was too little medicine in the last century). In other respects, "Linnaean Anatomy", which can be used to understand the structure of the human body, is good, Sweden's "Mountain Emergency Guide" is good, Ukraine's "Drone Flight Manual" and "Improvised Explosive Device Manufacturing" are also good... And like "Infantry Squads and Platoons", a full set of PDFs can be found online.

Have you ever survived a zombie crisis? Have you ever fought zombies? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ What should the protagonist do if he encounters regrets when it is impossible to confirm whether this is the last rebirth? Will he hold a knife to his neck one night, tossing and turning between warm memories and cold reality, doubts about whether he can be reborn and the current situation of being reborn multiple times? How to face the longing for a close friend who knows that he is a reborn person? Seeing him in pain, but forcing a smile for you, even if his regret is caused by you? A large part of the apocalyptic novels is about struggle, while a lot of the rebirth novels are about making up for regrets. When the two are mixed, there are even more interesting things derived.

After hoarding supplies for three years, I met a beautiful school girl, but then I had a heart attack and prepared to rescue a middle-aged man. The reason was that he was very powerful? Funny, how can killing zombies be as easy as killing you? Waste of time.

I really admire the author's writing skills. He was able to write two consecutive chapters, Chapters 58 and 59, so disturbingly. Among the five people saved, only one was a normal person. Such a small probability event happened to the protagonist. It was pure and powerful.

Well, after reading the beginning, I immediately persuaded him to quit, and I gave him all the evaluations. Later, people listened to me and left quickly! ! !

I haven't read the rest of it, but after reading this volume, I have a lot of things I want to say. First of all, the novel has many advantages. The author wants to portray the protagonist as an ordinary person, and then through repeated rebirths, he constantly adjusts his mentality, learns lessons, and makes continuous progress. It can be said that the previous words are very good, especially from the cool rhythm of the apocalypse at the beginning to the later writing, which has a sense of story. The supporting characters and the roommates of the protagonist are all well portrayed and very vivid. The overall story and rhythm are also well controlled. However, the shortcomings are becoming more and more obvious. The author starts from Volume 1, whose title is Who is a Friend? Who is the enemy? Volume 2 is about uniting all the forces that can be united. Volume 3 is about giving up illusions and preparing for struggle, while Volume 4 is about how a single spark can start a prairie fire. In the early stage, the author also said that the protagonist was an orphan living in a welfare institution. The government gave him a lot of help, so he could grow up in this society. Go to school. I thought the author wanted to create a college student who has learned Mr. Ziren's thoughts, who continues to learn and progress through setbacks and struggles, and becomes the person who ultimately solves the apocalyptic crisis. As a result, starting from the third volume when he gave up his fantasy and prepared for struggle, the protagonist became more and more dictatorial, deviating from his image of wanting to unite the majority of people and take an aboveboard path. I started to go back to the same image of fighting within myself, fighting within myself, fighting for power and gain, and being selfish and arrogant. Although there are many ideas about this kind of image in online literature today, you clearly start with it, and then you have the title of each volume. The image of the male protagonist you want to create is the kind of righteous way, continuous learning, continuous progress, and using the righteous way to sweep away the conspiracy and conspiracy. The results are written, the protagonist himself is trapped, let alone unite all the forces that can be united. Later, the protagonist regards himself as the savior, he is the only one who has to do it. He uses others for human experiments, even if it is a misdemeanor, it is enforced. I have noticed many times the combat teams in the team, the logistics team People in the team have sneaky behaviors, over-encouraging the combat team, and the logistics team's privileged behavior to obtain super high rewards. Even if conflicts break out, they do not deal with them and only verbally criticize them. They acquiesce in using this method to raise their own private soldiers and cultivate their loyalty. Intentionally or unintentionally, they put themselves in the image of a dictator. Moreover, it can be said that the personality problems of several of the protagonist's roommates have become a complete hindrance in the later stage, especially Zhao, who is short-sighted, has a bad temper, and is easy to go to extremes. However, the protagonist almost acquiesces to this person's shaping of the combat team. A leader has this kind of thinking, and the people below are naturally not much better. This model is very different from Mr. Zi Ren's thinking. The Sanwan adaptation and the Gutian Conference changed this kind of thinking and discussed this kind of mistake. They completely placed themselves in the old-era warlord mentality, raising private soldiers, becoming emperor, and making a single statement. What kind of apocalyptic coming-of-age story does the author want to write? It can be said that it is quite different from the unity of all forces that can be united as mentioned at the beginning. Mr. Zi Ren's success has already told us that taking the mass line is the foundation of everything. Taking the right path can only crush those demons and demons. However, every choice the protagonist makes later is almost the opposite. It can be said to be practicing Marxism-Leninism in reverse. It is precisely because of this that I became more and more bored as I watched it. I had no idea what kind of protagonist the author wanted to create and what kind of story pattern he wanted to create. It was completely different from what he had imagined at the beginning.

I don't usually comment much, but I really couldn't help reading this book. Can such a saintly, brainless protagonist really survive in the apocalypse? Who are the people who can read this book?

Come on, my blood pressure soared when I saw so many talented people in the team causing trouble. Did the author specifically write in a disgusting direction? Has the comment section been cleaned up? Or are there really so many people who like this disgusting plot?

Interesting supporting characters, interesting reincarnation plot, and useful tools and skills in the apocalypse. Thank you!

1. Humanity is about to become extinct, and the strength of the protagonist group is still hovering at 10 to 20%. 2. Humanity is going extinct. The protagonist has confiscated all weapons for the sake of public security. Especially in the later stage, there is no weapon to fight against zombies. It's hard to comment on 3. Humanity is going extinct and the protagonist's forces are still fighting among themselves. It's unimaginable, especially the struggle between civilians and soldiers. It feels very funny.

I found a lot of people in the comment area who had read too many cool articles and had orgasms in their brains. What they always mention is that since the protagonist can be reborn infinitely, why not just use this death to obtain information and other operations to pave the way for the next life? Or why not go directly to the national leaders or the government to ask for help or something. First of all, the protagonist does not know how many times he can be reborn. Every time he is resurrected, he will wonder whether this rebirth is his last life. Can he be reborn after dying this time? The article emphasizes many times that every time the protagonist is reborn, he will try his best to live his last life. He will prepare for the next rebirth, but he will not bet everything on the condition that he will be reborn next time. How many people can actually take life as a joke? Use this life to pave the way for the next life? Have you really read too many cool articles from Qidian? Then why not find a country? How to find it? Go to the police station and tell the policeman that I am reborn and the world will end in seven days? Then report the lottery number for the day again? Or tomorrow's world news or something? Let's not talk about whether the police uncle took you out as a troublemaker or not, but you have successfully gained the trust of the frontline police officers at the police station. What next? Are you waiting to report it to the next level? The director heard his subordinates claiming that there was a reborn young man who said the world was going to end and predicted the lottery. What expression do you think the director has? Then if the director believes it and then reports it, will the city bureau believe it? Will the secretary believe it? Not counting the time it takes to transmit information in the middle, how to gain the trust of senior management is the biggest problem. It is impossible for others to start doing things like evacuating the people to prevent the end of the world just because of this bit of information. Their first thought is definitely not to cause panic. The actual operation is difficult. If you think you are better than the protagonist, then you can step in yourself and not give your parents the resources. How far can you do it on your own? In reality, if an ordinary orphan college student with no background can gain the absolute trust of an ordinary front-line police officer, I think he is awesome. A friend of yours suddenly told you that he was reborn and the world would end seven days later, and then accurately reported the lottery numbers that night. Even if you verified that they were correct, you still believed most of them. Do you think you have the courage to follow him and spend all your savings, borrow money, and start buying supplies and hoarding?

I've ordered it all, but I still don't like it. It's like eating chocolate-flavored shit. You can say it's chocolate, or you can say it's shit. If it weren't for the book shortage, I would never open it.

The plot is retarded and the diction is bad. First point, the protagonist knew not to let Liang Zi and two strange men into the house. His teammate Liu Yeye sympathized with the female property manager and let her in without authorization. If the protagonist didn't stop her, why not search her body? Why not let Liu Yeye or Lao Zhou watch her alone for a few days? Just because the person let in was a woman, there was no need to be defensive at all. So what's the point of being so defensive? Second point, after the female nurse jumped off the building, Lao Zhou suddenly said, they killed my teammate. The two of them have never met each other and have never spoken to each other, so they are teammates? Even the protagonist group lost their minds directly and it was awkward to play. The third point, after the protagonist was reborn for the second time, where did he have the face to say that he achieved the optimal solution in the first rebirth? Is it true that the optimal solution can be wiped out by the female property manager?

I don't understand why an old woman can cause such a noise. Is this the gangsterism in people's hearts? Since the protagonist wants to restore order, his team must not kill for no reason first. Currently, half of the people are trustworthy, and how many more remain to be seen. Is it trustworthy? Because a wild dog barks and barks like a wild dog. It is not on the same level as a dog. They start killing people at will. This is the beginning. This team is just a bandit. And they have opened their mouths in this life, life after life. What do they think of life and become a dictatorial tyrant? From the protagonist's experience of troubled times, he still maintains his humanity and opposes committing crimes. We know that he will follow the mass line. The old woman will cry out. So what, it is also population and manpower. People can use their talents. If you want to get food, you have to pay - provide labor and kill - to make an article. Well, kill chickens to scare monkeys, marginalize the untrustworthy - team, put it on the front line of zombies, eliminate different voices, ensure that there is only one voice in the team, and this voice is in line with democracy and democratic centralism. The appearance of such an old woman caused such a noise. If we look back at history and reality, it would be necessary to hold a meeting to adjust the trend. If the bandits are not eliminated from the team, they will become backward warlords and stragglers. Whoever has a team with quality, can restore order, and follows the popular line will be the real hero who laughs in the end, and the rest will be bumpkins. He kills people violently and kills people violently. He doesn't even know when his head will be cut off while he is sleeping. He has trained his body to look like a crane and is not afraid of being strangled by the palace maid. Ha ha