Apocalyptic Flood: Female Neighbor Comes to Borrow Food

I didn't expect that for the first time I wrote a book review that I couldn't help but criticize the author. I really couldn't help but feel unhappy about it. I usually don't use my brain when reading books, but I couldn't stand this book without using my brain. It's so damn Sabi. What kind of character is Sabi written about? In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist was still smart, not sloppy, and not a virgin. But in the later stage, I felt that the protagonist was really a killer. The protagonist awakened an ability called "evolution"! As a modern person, when I see the word evolution, I should be able to more or less think of how to use it, right? The protagonist actually doesn't know what the use of evolution is? Can you believe it? Forcibly reducing the protagonist's intelligence to this extent really poisoned me. And after fighting the enemy in Yangshan, I thought that I didn't have any powerful skills to fight against the enemy. When the tide came, the protagonist harvested 360,000 points. At this time, there could be a big improvement. However, the author did not know that there were still enemies on the island. He did not quickly increase his combat power and use a few more powerful skills to use "large-scale commercial and supermarket intelligent equipment" and "diesel power generation equipment" that are currently useless. Shouldn't these be made after solving the surrounding enemies? , Aren't you saying that the preface does not match the postscript? Is it a clear idea? Author, if you want to suppress your combat power, this is not how you suppress it! ! ! It's really poisonous. The protagonist has system cheats but cannot crush the enemy. He is evenly matched with everyone, and he is also drunk. The protagonist's system is to gain points by killing creatures, and draw attributes and skills to get stronger. However, the protagonist never kills creatures by himself. He waits all day long for others to bring fish to him to kill. Damn it! The protagonist can become a god just by swimming around in the sea and using mental shock, right? This book really has a lot of poisonous points, and sometimes I can't help but curse it while reading it 😅.

Do you want to read what you are writing? After only a few chapters, the enemies we were guarding against were forgotten

Readers who are interested in the creation of characters and virtual worlds should proceed with caution. The world view of the entire novel is not well constructed. Up to now, almost all settings about doomsday changes are imagined by the protagonist alone. Most of the characters other than the protagonist are tool men with flat personalities.

Although there is a system, common sense of life outside the system should still be followed, otherwise it will look very dramatic. If you use a cigarette butt to light gasoline, you may have watched too many TV series. Your whole flamethrower counts as one time. That thing is very easy to buy under normal circumstances. It can also be used normally.

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Arctic glaciers are melting, sea levels are rising, and sea water is pouring into rivers. The frozen ancient virus revives, biological mutations occur, and races evolve.

You should write down the group. I can't open the link at all 😒

The plot is okay, but the combat power is too low. The protagonist has such a strong cheat, but there will always be someone who can upgrade faster than the protagonist. If this cheat were used by others, he would have been invincible. He didn't say why others upgraded faster than the protagonist. After leaving the Novice Village, he stayed in his own building. No matter which building he went to, including Yangshan later, the protagonist was weaker than others or as strong as others. His cheat had been upgraded to a dog for so long. There is no need to look at it in the future. This kind of plot will keep repeating. It's not interesting anymore.

Did the author read the Tomato Doomsday Studio article 🤔? I feel like I can already guess the following plot. In a residential complex, there are beauties, gangsters, property management aunts and resentful security guards. The gangsters come to look for trouble, and they are not immediately killed. Later, various neighbors start to come to the door, and the property management aunt morally kidnaps and so on.

When writing apocalyptic novels, just leave the protagonist abroad. Domestic apocalyptic novels are really unbearable. Relying on the mobilization and organizational capabilities of our state machine, if there were to be flooding in coastal areas, the organization would have already been moved to the Third Front in the Northwest and the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. This kind of situation described by the author must have been seen too many apocalyptic themes such as Resident Evil, and this kind of situation only occurs in places like the United States and the United States.

The beautiful female neighbor moved into his house in order to survive, knowing what she would do. It gave me precious life-saving food, but I couldn't bear to have sex with her. In this case, why did you still write about the female neighbor in the title and introduction? Just to trick readers into coming in and disgusting people? After reading the comment area, many people complained that the back part was clumsy and illogical. No, you can actually see the back part? Shouldn't we know who the author is when we see that he refuses to have sex with the female neighbor after more than ten chapters? It can disgust readers so much, but you still have confidence in it and hope that it will not disgust you often in the future?

One thing after another, no more than three things, and I wasted two b's. That woman threw two pieces of bread at the opposite door, which is poisonous enough The woman gave the bread and the protagonist gave it to her again. It turns out that people are not responsible for their own decisions, because the protagonist can take responsibility for you I gave you the bread and you want to eat it or not. You who just sent it to me have no effect and no contribution, and you care about it again. You still have a piece of bread and you still want to eat it. Is this woman your mother? Anyway, I really feel like I can't stand it anymore. I feel like the protagonist is too cool and pretentious. I'm not happy about it.

The author played a trick on a security door. He shot a water gun through the gap and put a match on the door. What kind of security door does your home have? 🤔🤔

Brothers in the group, can you scold the author to death? The writing is so disgusting. Why do you make such a big mistake to suppress the protagonist? You make big mistakes while suppressing the protagonist. It's like a lunatic.

228 Is also poisonous. I haven't driven the second one yet. Didn't I say that I would drive Song? The protagonist still cares about the feelings of a second-hand commodity. The author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas. This woman is someone else's wife, and the protagonist has a romantic relationship with her! It feels disgusting to see it this way. If you want to accept girls, just be more relaxed. Is the author actually a framer? Stand and stand again! ! !

The protagonist's superpowers are too powerful and seem to be all-powerful. In fact, they all rely on the added strength given by the system. If the system is removed, it is not as good as an ordinary awakened person. This actually puts pressure on the protagonist. Also, anyone who comes later can brag to the protagonist. If they want to kill you, you still talk to them? The plot of reducing intelligence. This is the end! The protagonist's mentality is still too soft. Dare to take action? That looks like you! Are you unhappy with me? So do you! You are in a bad mood today, and so are you!

Shen Nong is here, I just finished reading the latest chapter, the author is level 5, the writing style, the plot is much above average, the protagonist has nothing to say, a cookie-cutter character with a bottom line, three views, and decisive killing. But aesthetics are online. Like big thunder.

There's no logic at all. It's been half a year since the disaster. How can we not take people in just by saying we won't take them in through a door? Are there more refugees or more people in your house? A random team just broke in and there was no chance of rescue from the government for half a month. How could there be order?

The combat power setting in this book is particularly unreasonable. There is no clear upgrade plan for other superpowers. The protagonist has a system and organized a group of people to give him points to upgrade his attribute points. However, other superpowers can always maintain the corresponding combat power as the protagonist. This is incredible.

By the way, after heavy rain for half a year, no one would think of taking a boat to move to higher ground? Instead of waking up and the world was submerged, the time has almost moved a few months ago.

This author is like a primary school student who only knows about sex but has never been in love.

Is there a system and is it surpassed by other characters? The system isn't that good either!

It's boring. The main character is too weak and has no characteristics at all. It's said to be hexagonal, but it's actually mediocre. It's too heavy on the main character and makes it uncomfortable to watch. I don't even know what the use of this plug-in is. It's better to just mutate it.

It's a pity. I originally liked this novel very much in the first 300 chapters. But when I got to the new map outside, Misty Island, I really felt that I was playing a bad hand with such a strong all-rounder. However, when I attacked Misty Island, the original prototype was exposed, and I was just a complete loser. It was very difficult for the protagonist to get points and draw lottery to upgrade his combat power. As a result, even an unknown passerby outside was not much different from the protagonist in combat power, which was very funny! I don't know if the author has read what he wrote. Not only does the logic make no sense, but even the most basic interesting points are missing! The most important point is that I laid the groundwork from the very beginning that I would not eat mutated meat, but it turned out that it was so fast that 500 chapters had not revealed this point. I just felt that it was not good to eat, and I did not say why it was bad, and I did not let people around me eat it. As a result, the protagonist is now a burden to the protagonist, and he only suppresses his own combat power. To use a sentence that is really outrageous, anyone can write a novel now.

It rained all the time, but there was no impact from any rain action. It was okay in the building before, but when I came to the mountain, my logic was completely illogical. Can you imagine what it's like on a mountain where it's been raining all the time, but here it seems like there is no environmental impact, and you can light a fire without being disturbed by the view or environment. But if you ignore this setting and just treat it like a sunny day, he will mention heavy rain from time to time, which makes people very uncomfortable... You can imagine how difficult it is for you to go to school, work and go out during heavy rainstorms, and how much hindrance you have to suffer when you are asked to climb mountains and live in the mountains. Even if the superpowers can minimize this by relying on their abilities and physical fitness, what about hundreds of ordinary people?

How come the author is already an old author, why does the preface always not match the follow-up, many settings do not correspond to the context, the quantitative relationship is also wrong, typos are not corrected, the protagonist's IQ never improves, and the upgrade is not done. Are you oppressing your mother? Won't the pressure level be reduced? Upgrading in the early stage should be faster. When the attributes come up later, you can directly set the life purification and transformation, system upgrade, and attribute point revision to exchange for upgrades, right? It makes you angry just looking at it. There are mutated fruits. The mutated strawberry appears in the 100-point lottery. What will happen to you next? There has never been a prompt There are also firearms and weapons, why did you just skip it? If you don't use skills when you should, and exchange more than 100,000 for other things, why can't you guarantee that you can win the game first and then collect points to redeem? And all kinds of buildings are built in one stroke. Have you written about any architects here? Can't you improve the logic of many things in one or two sentences? Also, the protagonist always wants to draw attribute points and keeps saying over and over again, what are you trying to do, ah, you don't write well what should be written, and every time you fight, do you keep tens of thousands of points waiting to be used as inheritance? You can't smoke, can you? If you smoke it, add some more! You update so many times every day but you have a lot of wrong logic and often have no IQ. What's the use of it? Dude, it's uncomfortable to watch the subscription. Please correct the typos and incorrect sentences There was a book called Invasion of the Multidimensional Zombies before, which was almost like apocalyptic survival. Killing zombies makes you stronger, and it is easier to collapse. It also suppresses the combat power in the early stage, and it is patched later, but it is really cool, it can be superimposed thousands of times, no nonsense. Look here, the superpower always ignores attributes, the steel flying gun is the same as a prince's fighting method, it is useless, and your bastard skill burst out is useless...

Song Wen (AI)

Lu Yuyan

Floods submerged half a floor