The End Is Coming, Only I Can See the Update Announcement

At first I thought it was a good novel, but the more I read it, the more spoofs it got, and it was too much fun to watch, and I couldn't stand it at all.

The reward is too petty and doesn't mean much money.

OK, so far, it seems that my thinking and writing skills are still on point. All I can say is to write less family scenes, that is, write less emotional scenes. The only ones are some emotional scenes, which are bland, boring, and not interesting.

It's good-looking and humorous, but don't make jokes all the time, as it will ruin the perception. Personal opinion

After reading the first half, I feel that there is no need to write about family members. I don't know if there are arrangements later, but the logic of the male protagonist is difficult to understand. He has a family and does not live outside. A normal person should at least go home and take a look when encountering this kind of situation. As a result, the male protagonist asked about the situation and ignored it. If the author planned to arrange for something to happen to the protagonist's family later, he would be speechless.

I know the author wants to write that the protagonist seizes the opportunity and becomes the best in the world. However, according to the current game, this logic does not work because of the speed of hot weapons to spawn monsters. Then I suggest not writing emotional dramas. If the plot doesn't move the needle, I suggest writing more male characters. Depending on the author's writing skills, emotional dramas should be written with poisonous points, so it's better to just give up.

A book that was born at the wrong time made me rich five years earlier. That was when the meme became popular. This book is too dense with plot lines... It is both a disadvantage and an advantage...

0721Why is it so bad?

The plot goes from shallow to deep, but the writing is pretty good. There is nothing too toxic at the moment.

In fact, it is still possible, but the most important and important thing about a good article is not necessarily to be good, but the rhythm! Rhythm is still rhythm!

Apart from the Qidian official website and the author, I am the 17th reader to post and follow the author. I am not related to each other. 2026/7/31 This book potential number 265

Wait, where did the spoofs and memes come from... Someone take a screenshot for me, and I can see what you mean when you say there are too many spoofs and memes... Isn't this just a cool article? 😰

Jedi Trooper Sarcoma Body? Interesting

1 Is there an outline? 2 Will it be cut if the grades are not good?

Go, why am I in the Earth Online game? It's broken. I've actually played it before.

It's so abstract. I like it. Isn't this experience already in the sky?

The plot is okay, but you have a lot of typos

The task now is to update it vigorously