I Can See the Blood Bar, Kill Through the Apocalypse

I had feelings after reading Chapter 280.

It's awkward to watch. The male protagonist seems to have no brains and is too reckless. He always drives elite monsters. For the sake of the plot, he forcibly prevents the development of the protagonist. If there is such a plug-in, he must keep killing ordinary zombies. In the apocalypse, he must only fight harmless rounds. He searches the house from the balcony... The average per capita special forces.

The end is the end, and I accept the zombies all over the ground; the zombies are zombies, and they actually come with a health bar - someone else will die with a headshot, and your house has to be emptied before you can lie down; the health bar is a health bar, and you can directly mutate and evolve at the beginning! With such a hellish difficulty, the halo is all on the protagonist, can ordinary survivors still survive? !

Teddy dog ​​starts? Better start than eunuch 😍😍😍

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If you keep giving strength to the pig's feet, I'm afraid there will be no hope for humans elsewhere, so vote for it 😰

Is it true that apocalyptic novels cannot live without women?

I don't know why it looks awkward, and I can't say it's ugly, but there are a lot of bad points. There are a lot of fragmentary words in the first character's dialogue and some sick words that make me feel confused (not smooth). The character creation is okay, but I feel uncomfortable in some places and I can't explain why! Another problem is that some of the fights and daily transitions are too long-winded and repetitive, and not concise and clear enough. It didn't matter at the beginning, but I saw that there was no progress until the point where I met the survivors of the military zone in more than 100 chapters. To put it simply, it is too watery. Some storyline transitions are too wordy. Some of the rhythm points in the novel should be detailed and detailed, and the transition points should be mentioned in one stroke. Otherwise, everything is too fragmented and detailed and it will be difficult to read. Evaluation: It is not ugly, nor can it be considered a masterpiece, but it is still readable in this niche genre. However, there are some areas that I mentioned above that need to be improved. Generally speaking, it is a good idea -

The protagonist is not developed at all, so he just goes to fight elite monsters, right?

Complain about it. Why do the villains who randomly appear later have stronger numerical abilities than the protagonists? Except for the fact that the protagonist has a hangup, I can just crush him casually. The protagonist's emotions are cheated so that the protagonist and his younger brother can catch up with the large army. It's better to keep it free. Anyway, except for those around the protagonist, any one on the roadside is better developed than the protagonist's group. When you write a novel like this, you are enjoying yourself, but the readers have no experience at all. Isn't the core of online novels fun?

The author is a trumpet 😰 and his writing is very interesting. It's up to you to revive the glory of zombie literature! Friends who are passing by can come and take a look. If you like zombie stories, don't miss it!

This way of writing always feels like it was written by a female author, it's a bit too cheesy.

Why are wives like this always used as heroines? Alas, I'm so picky that I can't find the right book.

The last chapter just explained how to upgrade the ability to fight monsters. In the next one, a woman appeared and started some bloody plot. It was over. I wrote some marginalia to complete the picture. It stopped abruptly and said that your upgrade to fight monsters is to use cold weapons to fight monsters in close combat. There is no one else. You fight them one by one, as if everyone is a boss. The battle scenes are not as good as the marginalia you wrote.

It's good so far, don't think about the one I read about Rebirth and Doomsday, which won 3000W. That book also looked good at the beginning. The killing was decisive to the point of anti-social personality. When I encountered a gathering place, I destroyed a gathering place, and it was the kind of person who killed all the people. I didn't read Monster Killing in the later part. Not many people were killed, no matter men, women, old or young, they killed millions on sight.

It made me laugh, the protagonist is having such a hard time living through cheating, so is there anyone left alive?

The effect is outstanding!

Generally speaking, this kind of golden finger that adds points for killing monsters should be used in the early stage, otherwise it will not be able to keep up in the later stage. For example, killing a zombie on the first day can add 10 points of life, and monsters with 10,000 health will appear in about a week. The protagonist will fight monsters at full capacity for several days with ordinary monsters and elite monsters, but not much health will be added.

There is no sense of doomsday urgency. There is nothing missing except zombies

It's understandable that I want to go in the direction of group portraits, but the updates are really slow. I don't even mention the problem of the protagonist not appearing for four or five days after updating. Even if I just started today, the protagonist didn't appear in the first four or five chapters because he went to save people, and then it was so difficult for the team to fight the monsters, and then the protagonist came to the rescue again. I can only say that this is not suitable for the author of Geng De Shao, and I think doomsday novels should be written to be enjoyable. It is not easy to achieve good results because of the slow pace of Gen De Shao. If I want to write about the changes in human nature, it's not just the protagonist who is strong alone, but also the people around him can grow and understand. But after all, this is a post-apocalyptic novel with the protagonist as the main perspective. The writing is not exciting enough, but the writing is okay.

Why doesn't the protagonist use the module to make a set of clothes and shoes? With so many materials, he just made a few weapons. Why keep them? His clothes are broken every time he fights. Moreover, it feels like the protagonist's strength is all passively improving, and there is no sense of urgency at all.

Does it look good? Did you just discover Shennong?

The writing is quite good, but the introduction is too long. I didn't even want to click on it when I first read the introduction.

1. It's not exciting enough and exciting enough. It lacks a bloody battlefield. It's a group battle where the awakened ones show off their special abilities. There are many characters and the protagonist system flows. If you don't want to make a lone wolf or a team, then write more groups. 2. The title and introduction of the book are simply discouraging. I think the author should consider changing it. 3. The power system must be written well. The protagonist defines one by himself. If the system is not clearly written out, it will feel weird. Moreover, like the recent equipment, it is also a kind of fun. Hurry up and don't waste time. Use the equipment to kill zombies and collect the followers along the way.

Author, I couldn't help but help Zhao Zhao make an AI picture, please take a look and accept it for replacement. 😥

I hope the plot can be more compact, come on.

Can you please stop asking for leave all the time? Chapter 1 is not qualified to ask for leave.

It's watchable, but it's quite bland. The transitional chapters make you fall asleep. The fun points are scattered one by one, and the foreshadowing is lengthy. But when it really reaches the climax, the cool chapters are handled like something written in a dream, but the direction of fun is different from that of normal people. It's very frustrating.

Like the title, the unscrupulous spicy stick wants to exploit the loophole that I worked so hard to come up with for free 😭😭😭 It is so unqualified, please help condemn this lazy spicy stick😭

Hey, the story is told very well, but there are too many unimportant plots. I wrote thirty chapters from meeting Ye Qingzhou to subduing these people. During this period, I wrote nothing else. I just talked nonsense with them. In total, I only read more than a hundred chapters.