Give Your Heart to the Empire

The framework of the Seven Heroes of the Warring States Period, an alternative magical world, a non-historical text. The Mohist school has the flavor of Qin Dynasty Mingyue, and mentions "mechas", but it is not a science fiction style. "Mechanical beasts" are more appropriate, and they have only been mentioned at the moment; the Confucian school of eight-foot-strong men convinces people with virtue, first with literature and then with martial arts; other schools of childhood sweetheart killers have the taste of the Book of the Dead, but the two styles are different, one is a bit cruel, and the author's is very sweet. The world view is a bit novel, with seven kingdoms, seven artifacts, seven powers, and blind guessing of more than seven female protagonists, which has not collapsed for the time being.

As a fantasy novel, this book has both advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The setting is very attractive, the perfect integration of the Warring States Period and steam, the practice system is novel and outstanding; the writing content is of high quality. Disadvantages: The plot advancement logic is insufficient and a bit fake. The romance content and the plot advancement content are seriously separated, and both sides are unhappy. The story is good, but the development of the story is not exciting enough and the plot design is not outstanding enough. I hope the author can improve the shortcomings.

This is supposed to be a harem, right? You should accept both of the two mentioned in the introduction, right? I was scared by the stomachache plot in your last book 🙂

Also, when the protagonist is just on the side of the road, he thinks about national affairs every day, and his life is still in the hands of Qixing. He doesn't think about how to defeat Qixing, but he thinks about whether Qin can be unified. He just relies on himself as the protagonist and will not die. Before the immediate worries are solved, he starts to think about the long term...

The title of this book is not worthy of the content of this book. Something fancy

After reading the previous book, Nuan Nuan, I was very impressed by Nuan Nuan. She is really an extremely beautiful woman in the world! Hopefully this book also has good characterization.

To be honest, I don't dare to look at you anymore. Both the Light and Doomsday Circle are trending higher and lower, and the Book of Heaven has even been cut in half 😥. I can only wait for you to finish the book and read the reviews.

I don't understand why we have to write a plot where the female character Ye Qingling is taken over by the villain. It's very off-putting. There's no need to do this to show bitterness and hatred.

I can only say that I feel something is wrong, and I feel a bit bitter and resentful. Reality is already very difficult. Illusion is at least easy. Let's escape first.

After reading the comments, let me summarize: stock trading article + impotence + literary youth + abuser

I could see the author's intention in the first 3 chapters. The male protagonist has been abused all the time, and he will definitely suffer from all kinds of deficiencies later on, so I ran away first.

Such a stupid book has not been removed from the shelves

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author has applied the language style of urban novels to this fantasy novel, which is very awkward. Moreover, don't say too many clichés and bad jokes on the Internet, it's very boring.

To be honest, I don't understand it. It's too stressful for the protagonist. I haven't solved my physical problem after so many chapters. I want to feel good but can't feel good. Just when I want to feel good, I feel suppressed. This rhythm is really not good. In the first few pictures, I talked about being close to the King of Qin, and now I have Xiang Yu around the protagonist. I really don't know what the author wants the protagonist to do. It feels refreshing but uncomfortable, and deep. I can't write it anymore, every word is messed up, so I might as well enjoy it to the end. In the first few pictures, a female subordinate of Qixing was messed with by several people, and then the protagonist wanted to take her as his subordinate. I really don't know if the author knows what the readers want to see 😰. The supporting actress disappeared after a few foreshadowing pictures. She must have been sprayed.

I was shocked when I saw the comments. Stock trading article. Run away, run away. 🥵

Ah, is it over suddenly? I'm going to die and say yes.

It's finally finished, I'm glad to say that I've long said that I would stop writing about the city.

This book is not about harem, I don't want to hear it anymore... Warm Monsoon is killing me, I like Yuwei😭😭😭, Yuwei😭😭😭, damn Jiba, just accept them all if you can, but Rabbit and Kangaroo are so well written😭😭😭

To be honest, the pictures are good, the world view is unique, and there are no anti-intellectual plots. Although there are multiple female protagonists, the female characters are not too stereotyped. So far, they have been handled well. The emotional scenes are very sweet. I feel that the emotional lines are better than most books nowadays. It should be serious and serious. I am afraid that I can't handle the senior sister well. After all, it is not an artifact and it is a bit far away from the main plot. I still like the senior sister. Give her some abilities qwq

The beginning is very attractive, but the technology in the later part is too awesome, and the background of the Warring States period is too fragmented. You might as well just write about the martial arts system, with mechas and biotech clones coming out.

The more I think about it, the angrier I get. It was so good at the beginning, but so bad at the end.

When will the author release a new book? Go and support it.

Sometimes having too many memes is not a good thing, it is too dramatic, especially the bad ones, and makes you unable to immerse yourself in reading novels, just like watching low-fat short videos.

The emotional lines are pretty good. I've read two of them and it's worth ordering. Please write them quickly 😆

Can you add some plot to Senior Sister? There is too little.

It's a pity that it's unfinished. The historical background of Gaowu Warring States is very novel and difficult to write. However, the beginning is also very good and the emotional description is also very delicate. In the middle, I can't grasp the rhythm and collapse. It's a pity that it is a good subject.

Originally, I had seen The Circle, and yes, I had seen Warm Monsoon. I feel that the author's writing style is trustworthy, so let's not go into it first. I have complained about the emotional scenes of several female protagonists before, which gave me quite a stomachache. After everything was resolved in the later stage, it was pretty good. But there is one thing I don't understand. After his decisive battle with King Qin Zhaoxiang, why did he suddenly dominate the world after he ascended the throne? Why don't you write 50 more pictures to make me happy? Although I know you are in a hurry to finish it, you don't need to be in a hurry. Give it some time. The main ones are these two poisonous points. This book is better than The Light. At least it's not so repetitive that I don't even want to read it. It can be considered a little better than The Ring. The plot in the middle is okay and can be watched. But I didn't read the last few chapters. Because after watching Bai Qiuci's Wedding, I finished it immediately and had no desire to continue watching.

I saw that I took a leave of absence for a few days during the National Day, but it was over as soon as I came back. The world view is grand, and the concept is unique. It is the only book I have followed in the past six months (the other two have been blocked). I really like it. Unfortunately, the results are not very good. The first thing is that it is too obscure in the early stage. You may not understand it after reading several chapters at the beginning; The second point is that the combat system is a bit thin. As a martial arts book (from what I understand), there is no improvement process for the protagonist's combat effectiveness, and his abilities are also weak. It's not clear. The protagonist went from level three invincibility to level five invincibility, and later refined an artifact. However, the application of his abilities is very general. Except for the six arts, which are artifacts, the original proportion of the battle is very low. Many times in the battle, there is no sense of graphics, and it feels a bit tasteless. What attracts me most about this book is the unique world view and the appetite for emotional lines (these days are either single women or harems, and it is too difficult to find multiple female protagonists in this book). What even attracts me to read is the interaction with my senior sister Yun Siyu Baimao. Tokiya also obviously attaches more importance to relationships and always pursues a warm life in a paradise, but because of this, he has neglected the main line (upgrade line) in a broad sense. Those who like to read romance will not watch a martial arts show with such a bloody beginning; those who want to see a world view and exciting battles will find too much love between children. Readers may be misled, resulting in the original audience not being attracted. Maybe only a few people like me who want to read everything, especially those who like Sese, will read it slowly. And the updates are too slow

The beginning is quite interesting, such as Bai Qiuci's amazing wisdom, but the system is a bit complicated and I don't understand it well. Probably after Luo Shan's death, the overall situation declined, and then the life story began to warm up. The description of Zhao Guo was average, until I returned to China, the perception declined. I felt that I missed something. If I have the chance, I still want to watch the follow-up!

Sometimes when reading some fantasy novels, there are very few fantasy parts, or there are always a lot of other things added. Whether it is Doomsday Circle or Light, I think they are both very well written (not in the later stages of Light), because these two books meet the fantasy classification content of the two books, and are very good in various aspects such as story, love, system, etc., And the language is not bad. This book, "Give Your Heart to the Empire," is not very good at fantasy. Even if the love story is well written, it is difficult to resist the downfall of fantasy. When writing a novel, write down which category the novel belongs to and which noun it belongs to. How can there be a sense of suspense and horror in the person who is the first in the monthly voting list to find corpses? In order to fall in love and satisfy the author's own desire to write, he even ignored the main plot.