Night Journey

I can be considered an old reader. The first time I read A Guy was in junior high school. At that time, I had been reading fast-paced online books on the bestseller list. It was also the first time I came into contact with this type of book except Dragon Clan. In a sense, Ember is my guide in Western fantasy. , Before that, my understanding of Western Fantasy was nothing but swords and magic, and I was greatly shocked. It turns out that there is such a thing as steampunk. From then on, I stepped into the Western Fantasy area and never looked back. Later, I began to slowly watch the Secret Cult, Mystery, Cloudy Sky and Wind and Moon. I personally like to express desire first and then suppress it, so I will briefly comment: Why don't you read Guy A's book? Most of the authors in this genre are seriously influenced by someone, and their literary youth-style descriptions are rampant. The most intuitive feeling in A's works is the accumulation of lengthy descriptions and aria-like character speeches. It has a quite ancient drama style and European black humor. Readers who have not been reading the Western Fantasy Zone for a long time will inevitably have the following exclamation at first glance On the other hand, Guy A's plot is truly unflattering. According to someone who claimed to know the plot only thirty minutes earlier than the reader, it can be seen that the A-type plot is the most classic two-part plot. Each volume first kills a small boss or raids a small stronghold, and then takes a short break and then fights a big boss when a crisis attack breaks out. The exclusive prologue and ending are simply amazing. In addition, the homogeneity of A-type characters is somewhat typical. The homogeneity here does not mean that the characters are thin. On the contrary, any supporting character in the article will have a story of bitterness and hatred or a multi-faceted image. However, because of this, the viewing experience is inevitably a bit tired, especially since most of the A-type protagonists are bitter, bitter and mentally ill. So, why read Guy A's book? You can open the fantasy section, glance over, and what do you find? Yes, I don't know if it is mainstream. Nowadays, the titles of books in the fantasy section basically have a colon, and then the most classic golden finger summons time-travel cards and adds some farming. The protagonist complains about the war, collects some girls, raises some little pets, spiritual beasts, etc., Makes a little face, and fights some villains. How to put it, I'm not criticizing them all, but it's just that the current fantasy novels seem to lack that "rigidity". In contrast to the Saint, Princess, Elf, and the magical fighting spirit and card-drawing adventure, it seems to be more Japanese-style fantasy, and everyone laughs and laughs in a relaxed and happy way. Qian said that you may not understand it. It may be more intuitive to give a few examples here, such as Steel Fire Technique, Old God Remnant Dream, and Ember. If I have to say it, it's probably grand narrative and resistance. I personally prefer that someone or a group of people fight for a certain idea and goal in a depressive or chaotic background. I remember thinking about a metaphor when I was in high school. It was also a negotiation. Instead of a battle of wits, reversal of language traps, and a thrilling comeback based on talent. (Personal quirk) I prefer the protagonist to overturn the table and point at the opposite side and say endless cruel words, and then everyone fights with real swords and guns. Most of the protagonists in online novels nowadays seem to be smarter and more rational. This is a good thing, but after reading too much, I always feel that it lacks that flavor. What attracts me to A-style works is not only the above, but also the fancy settings and equipment. Guy A is still very good in architectural design and scene arrangement. Yes, fighting on the train, fighting after the train, fighting in the sewer, fighting while playing chess, fighting while going back in time, fighting while dancing, plus the snake in the atrium, the upside-down hall, the big crack, the background of running water, the fight with iron, there are always new tricks. Aside from the work itself, another purpose of reading may be to pay attention to the author. It's probably because I started to develop the habit of monitoring someone's Weibo after reading the embers. I read those divine words regularly every day, as if the cycle of reincarnation day after day is not so boring. Occasionally going into the live broadcast room to tide over difficulties with someone, it's quite interesting to watch the continent, isn't it? What's more, from Ember's crotch pulling results to the endless joyful treasure chest, to today, it can be regarded as a development. As for the problem of being confused when reading a book, although Guy A once claimed that "I also want to write exciting articles," to be honest, this guy writes books purely for the sake of self-stimulation, just like the mysterious little pills taken by homeless people under the overpass. He just wants the drivers passing by on the highway to shake their heads and get high with him. It is normal to be incomprehensible. When he gets really high, he is probably infected by this guy. So, to those of you who have been studying since the very beginning, I am very grateful to have been with you along the way, so that I know that the gods are not the ultimate creatures. Friends who joined in the middle or just had a casual look at it, if the mysterious little pill does not suit your appetite, you can sigh and leave. Reading is for entertainment. If you don't like it, just change it. Why bother to sigh. I hope everyone can find a book that they like. Above, if there are readers who are interested in the type of online articles I am talking about, you can go out and turn left to the Old God Can Meng Book Friends Circle, where there is a book recommendation post for my big stomach bag. I wish you all a happy life.

Looking at the book as a whole, the starting point is on the overall side. The world view is relatively grand, and the levels and occupation settings are also very attractive. Such Boiling Sword gives people a bright feeling. Although I have not played related games, I have heard about Chuanhuo. Overall, I have the desire to read on. As I read on, I found that the protagonist has a distinct personality and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. However, what puzzles me is that there are many dialogues in this book, and it seems that the book wants to highlight the characters through dialogue or inner monologue to make the characters more vivid. But problems also arise. Many times, the large amount of dialogue makes people feel that the plot advances very slowly. If I want to skip it, it seems that I will miss some information, which makes me feel a little bit dislocated. Maybe I am more impetuous, or maybe this is the water everyone is talking about? ? ? In other words, my curiosity about the world of Jueye far exceeds my interest in the characters in the book 😒

Isn't the holy blood that washes the face the supreme blood that any torchbearer can perceive? The opening chapter tells the story of the dead bird sensing the blood of Washing Face from a few kilometers away. He himself also warned himself not to bleed. As a result, there was so much blood on the third night, and the Oathbreaker opposite didn't react at all. He just stared at 104 and didn't react at all. Is it because Kuangxin is the kind of wild dog on the roadside who can't recognize a real dragon? Or is it because guy A has eaten the setting? And after just killing a third-level enemy, explain that your body has reached its limit. Wouldn't hunting and blessing an enemy of the same level restore source energy and physical strength? If this restoration of physical strength does not create blood or reset muscles, isn't it just a purely psychological suggestion? Is it too der?

The protagonist of Guy A is always crazy. The difference is that compared to the protagonist in the previous film, in Journey into the Night, Guy A seems to be focusing on writing how the protagonist, Cillian, became an executioner. I can't spoil too much, but I sympathize with Cillian and identify with his path. Let's talk about 'epilepsy' again. Nowadays, it seems that many people like to create more insane works, but the protagonist A's epilepsy will always be more special. He tends to be very cold, not very good at shouting, and acts the hardest with a rational appearance. Guy A always writes about battles with a sense of ritual. His words are like brushes, creating a grim picture, judging the guilty and executing them with his own hands. I hope the writing gets better and better.

I heard there is a female protagonist😍😍😍

This is a very good beginning. I couldn't read the first two books. This one is very realistic.

Guy A, be obedient and resurrect Ava, otherwise the introduction of a new heroine in the second chapter will be too similar to stand-in literature. Take my advice, the water of stand-in literature is very deep, and little Chunan like you cannot grasp it.

I feel like Guy A is also getting better. I think back then, the Ember subscription results and discussion circles were like a bunch of homeless people doing mysterious rituals around a bonfire under a bridge to keep warm. Now, for no reason, some gods always come in and drop a few divine words, which proves that the promotion scope is huge.

If you don't understand, just ask, does this book have a female protagonist who is in love? I like to watch a young boy write a love story.

Guy A, you really should strengthen your ability to build a power system. Your combat system is so backwards that it seriously holds back the rest of the book. The fashion value is too low, too vulgar A trendy fantasy combat article, troika, world view setting, author's writing ability, and combat power system. What comes to you is just two F1 cars, pulling a real carriage. A bit like a competitive student who got into Tsinghua University but failed in physical education and failed to graduate. Tsinghua Yao class. Because I can only graduate from Level 4 or Level 6 () To avoid misunderstanding, let me make it clearer, Guy A's worldview setting is fashionable enough, and he is very handsome. What fire-keeping secret sect, the remaining embers of the army. Holy city in daylight. As soon as the name came out without writing anything, I was already so happy. But the world view setting and the combat power system are two different things The fashion value of the male protagonist in your book is also very poor, and it all depends on your writing and lines. The first level has high body temperature, the second level can heat it, and the third level can set fire. At the beginning of the game, I took an artifact that could be called a legion's sacred object. I have typed more than 1 million words, and the current performance seems to be infinitely durable and will not wear out. The damage is not high, and the damage is all caused by source energy heating. For such a high-level artifact, one will never wear out. It's a bit too noisy When I posted this in the comment area, no one came to refute me, but I predict a reply: 8. Go and see Chendong, that fight has many tricks. The fighting scene is huge and can wipe out the avenue." I have to reply: Don't do the diode thing. Let me make it clear that I also hate the kind of lazy combat descriptions that match skill names and amplify special effects. Guy A is strict and has battle strategies, which is also my good spot. You can specialize in the main subjects, but you can't fail the physical education subjects I think Brother Fengyue is a good goal, and he has achieved the match of the troika

A, I love your teeth

Although it's really cool to get more updates, I still want to share my thoughts on this book. I really think the plot in this town at the beginning is unnecessary. Just using a knife for the sake of the knife is too deliberate. Well, but please note that I have only read the previous book, and I have not finished the Embers. So compared to the previous one, I always feel that this one is really inferior. And those realms, and those things like those oaths Nunn said before. And those fantasy terms that some A guys come up with themselves, don't you really think it's embarrassing? Being in the second grade is just one aspect. I am also in the second grade. But when I watch hentai, I really don't feel this embarrassing. It's that kind of inexplicable element that is piled up into a four-letter noun. Fantasy for fantasy's sake. There are also the designs of these fighting moves and scenes. It feels very empty. Didn't Guy A say that this book was going to be bigger? You can't be empty when it comes to grandeur. I know that a lot of A's fans follow him, right? I figured I would get sprayed. But I still want to say it. Thank you. If you don't like it, just ban me. (By the way, I ordered the first two books. I just didn't read much of Ember.)

"I'm going to take a shit"

Prison A's evidence

After experiencing the long and boring June of the Gregorian calendar, the great A prison finally released his new book "I'm going to take a shit" at the end of June of the Gregorian calendar and the beginning of August of the Gregorian calendar.

This was a good book 10 years ago, but now I can't read it! Because the so-called struggle is actually meaningless. For ordinary people to travel to the past, they will basically die. It is almost impossible to climb the peak without dying! So I still like to read the current cheating articles, because only cheating is qualified to climb the peak! This is the reality!

The key plot depends entirely on the protagonist's wisdom. If the protagonist has divine help, he can kill monsters like chopping melons and vegetables, and he has a strong will and a perfect sense of fighting. He can be as handsome as he wants. But when it comes to promoting the plot's sense of déjà vu, he will be stunned in place, unable to accept the reality, and then he will be so angry that he can't think.

It feels like Cillian's main problem is not enough foreshadowing. The Cillian after entering Hull City was a super pervert, but the Cillian before entering Hull City was completely different. Cillian before entering Hull City just made me feel strong-willed and accepting of killing well, but he didn't look like a super pervert at all. Killing someone without blinking an eye and killing someone with joy are two different things. I can accept that he hid his perverted side for his family when he was in White Cliffs, but I think Cillian can hide it from his family, but the author shouldn't hide it from the readers. In any case, when writing the plot of White Cliff Town, the author should properly foreshadow the protagonist's true character to the readers. Now I can rationally understand that Cillian was originally a big pervert, but he didn't show it in White Cliff Town in order to blend in with the town. It just feels weird...

I didn't expect that all the responses to me were defensive and personal attacks. I don't know if this is the starting point or just this book. I point out problems objectively, but there are always people who respond to me with idealism. I didn't expect this circle to be so miserable.

To be honest, this kind of profile is not attractive at all. It doesn't have anything explosive. Does it have a belt? What type do you have? It's a bit vague and not specific at all.

Isn't the title of the book called "I'm Going to Take a Shit"?

As expected, I couldn't finish reading A's book every time. It was too long-winded. The long and difficult sentences piled up with various words made me feel like I was trying to understand the language. The most uncomfortable thing was that these picture descriptions could not create a sense of picture in my mind at all. The descriptions of battles were incoherent and unclear, and there were also lines interspersed with the second and second lines, which was a devastating blow to the association. I often felt like I had read nothing after reading a chapter.

The latest three chapters of Dai Lin's autobiography are so touching. Although there is no plot advancement, no killing, no realm breakthrough, and no world view background revealed, it has been a long time since I saw such a bitter and hateful character plainly showing his inner scars to others. It is like dreaming back to the first time I watched a Hollywood movie where the protagonist inadvertently smoked a cigarette and shared his hatred of the past with others 😭

I thought that after the destruction of White Cliff Town, the protagonist would hone his fighting skills, slay demons, and go through hardships along the way to form his own brigade or clan, but ended up going to Hull City to find a job? It's a bit different from what I thought, and it's not as grand as originally described.

Only then did I see that the protagonist's childhood sweetheart, brothers, and teachers were all dead in Chapter 30. If you like the writing method of saving orphans, read it. I took my leave.

Shouting romance and blood, he rushed out. While running silently in the dark night. It is an emotional story.

In this era of fast food, people pay attention to the three golden chapters. The first chapter must be humorous, interesting and attractive, and must write the story, characters, protagonist and golden finger. I often feel very resentful of the same fast pace. I like to read novels that are thoughtful and well-written. I like to read novels in which the protagonist has a distinct personality and each supporting character has flesh and blood. I like Zixia's world view and novels that make me want to stop reading. This is it. I must have read less than ten chapters. I will log out and see how many chapters the author has updated on the homepage. Early 100. I even feel scared, because there is too little, really too little. This is a beautiful novel. I think I will definitely book it all.

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 155 of the first volume. The rhythm is tight in the early stage, but it starts to drag on in the middle stage. The author spends a lot of words describing the supporting characters, possibly to enrich the world and character creation, but the result is that there is no prioritization, which affects the reading experience. And both the protagonist and supporting characters are unlikable. The protagonist is erratic and slick; Dai Lin, who has spent a lot of time describing it, feels like a mother-in-law and indecisive. It is hard to believe that his upbringing can create such a character. One of the main plots of the first volume is that the protagonists are looking for the Invisible One. The author actually revealed who the Invisible One is early on, leaving no sense of suspense. At the same time, the protagonist, supporting characters, and villains all look stupid when viewed from a holistic perspective. The story becomes dull after the protagonist enters Hel. The author has great writing skills and story advancement ability. The main problem is that he has too many ideas and lacks self-control. He focuses too much on the description of other characters and advancing the story from multiple perspectives, which makes the whole story mediocre or even boring. If the perspective is fixed on the protagonist, it can not only better depict the growth of the protagonist, but also make the supporting characters more three-dimensional through a little emotional expression, and even create suspense to make the story more attractive.

I read it in one go after dozens of chapters, and all the foreshadowing was detonated in a rainy season. On one side are the fight scenes made of boiling fireworks, and on the other side are the delicate descriptions of emotions like mist rising from the rain. The portrayals of important characters are very eye-catching, and there are many scenes that are very cinematic. The smoke of tobacco hides their own complex thoughts, the camera transitions focusing on flying birds, the disco and the city with the roar of heavy rain, the smell of A is still very strong. It just feels like the plot has less unexpected surprises

—, Chekhov's Gun that is destined to fire + the layout of the evil fungi Instructor Ronan warned Sirigo during training that your fighting method without physical strength management is too unhealthy, and you will suffer if you are under siege. The young face-washing brother didn't care at all, thinking that as long as he could kill, he could have infinite blood and mana. This book focuses on growth, and Brother Washing will definitely suffer in this regard, so he will definitely be attacked by a large number of non-Chaos enemies. I will definitely fire Chekhov's Gun Then the question is, the current Brother Washing is an important seed of the Lengri family, and is guaranteed by the clan leader, although he is already keeping a low profile. Then why would it be besieged by non-chaos humans? Even if there are one or two high-ranking traitors, they are still a small number, and it is impossible to organize a large-scale encirclement and suppression? The answer is that the corrupted son of the Blessed One who failed in the encirclement and suppression attempt to murder the Virgin has to go to military court! The story of the holy fool. Why does Brother Washing have the ability and willingness to assassinate the Virgin? This can explain why the fungus mother kissed the protagonist inexplicably? To be honest, the protagonist has a problem, but he is blessed with a son. In the long history, it is not special, and Holy Blood is just like that. If I have to make an analogy, it is the No. 1 Pick in the NBA draft. It is indeed awesome and has unlimited potential, but that's it. As readers of the book, we know that he is Jordan, but in the eyes of outsiders, especially in the eyes of evildoers, a face-washing brother of the third level is not worthy of being directly blessed by the mother of bacteria, far from worthy of the mother of bacteria. Such a mechanical demon-washing brother must have a bigger plan, and this plan is to assassinate the Virgin! The face-washing brother is the poisonous blade of chaos You must know that the Virgin Mother's condition was extremely bad. She suffered new injuries in ancient times. As a result, she still has to suppress the city in the spirit world. She should be in a critical state. When she wanted to help the male protagonist pull out the mark, the evil in the spirit world broke out. Just fuck the Virgin into a deep sleep. It's time for Brother Washing to go to court martial. However, the Time Sequencer should be able to be exchanged, and the Holy Mother will not fall. If the Virgin falls, humanity will have no wet nurse and nothing to play with. The final result should be that the Virgin falls into a deep sleep, but does not fall. The wet nurse's career is not abolished, and a new titan is replaced by a time sequencer. The measuring tool god adds one, but the wet nurse falls into a deep sleep, and humanity wins miserably. A small victory. But Brother Washing Face will be sent to the White Sun Holy City to be tried or discussed. On a factual level, you murdered the giant god of medical soldiers alone. If I don't kill you, I will sentence you to residential surveillance, which is considered a leniency Then under the operation of all parties, the protagonist can upgrade and escape. Enter the dark world, start the second half of the road movie, and continue the journey into the night. Enter the dark world at the third level, you will definitely be beaten to death like a wild dog on the roadside. Check the level here. After solving the incident, you have just reached level 4. When you enter the dark world, you can follow the remnant army of embers. Got online. Plan pass The main thing is that you can no longer perform meritorious service. If you do meritorious service again, it is of such great importance. If you really have to go back to the system, how can you make a road movie?